Mil gai

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jani420

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zindagi ki dhoop ko saya ker gai
aaj mere pas se woh guzar gai
eik ada bhi us ki kiya kaam ker gai
jate jate yeh dil apne naam ker gai
aaj meri jaan mujay mil gai
Posted 10 Jun 2003

SASSI says
hmm sahi
Posted 10 Jun 2003

SaPnA says
cool
Posted 10 Jun 2003

hmm dats nice:)
Posted 10 Jun 2003

Spark says
ya it is really nice...but who mil gai...???
Posted 12 Jun 2003

~Fragi~ says
well the case is this ..///// freedom of speach mein poetry read kar kar key meri ankhien sooojh gayee hain ...


JANI BHAI plz.,.... this is not rite place for poetry


do postin a rite place yaara
Posted 12 Jun 2003

Spark says
lolz.
Posted 12 Jun 2003

~Fragi~ says
wat lolz
Posted 12 Jun 2003

hehe yeh kidoo ur RAT..jani jee ek hi topic banaeion us per apni shairy post karein...yeh diff diff topic thek nai lagrahe hein..
Posted 12 Jun 2003

sharara says
yaar poetry ko ppoetry mein rakho
Posted 12 Jun 2003

wohi to shary..[;)]
Posted 12 Jun 2003

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