My first story

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Freddy

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ajj sei 3 months pehlay mein nein likhi thi ye story uss wakt kisi nein nahi parhi thi..................aab esay mein urdu mein post kaar raha hoon.....................zara batana tu kesi hai..........


Posted 01 Feb 2005

guest. says
yeh kia hai..
horror story hai ya drama

jo bhi hai..achi hai
Posted 01 Feb 2005

Ashii says
likhne ka style acha hai


par yeh story
abay khiske la ho gaya hai kyaaa
ab hum bache nahi rahe k yeh parh k darr ja'ain
churailon ki stories hazam nahi hoti 21st century k parhe likhe logon ko

stuuuupid,,
raat mei post kar di
Posted 01 Feb 2005

i think he will make a drama
Posted 01 Feb 2005

Ashii says
haan na,,,
aur dramay mei bhootni ka role mile ga
ather uz zaman urf saruuu ko

Posted 01 Feb 2005

Freddy says
shukri shukri kash beauty na horror story hai na drama......it's acutally comedy..........buss kisi nein mujay aik wakyeaa sunayaa ore mein nein essay apnay alfaaz mein likh dea..................



woe kya kisi nein khood kaha hai apna sall jee Bandar kya janay adraak ka sawaab.............ye darnay kay leye nahi thi ......woe kya kehtay hain Engregi mein Just for Fun..............

Daroo nahi balkay Hansoo Stupid
Posted 01 Feb 2005

tame nahi parne ka
Posted 01 Feb 2005

Ashii says
ohhhhhhh acha,,
shukar hai real story nahi hai


heyy par me ne kaha naaaa
likha huaa acha hai vakai
Posted 01 Feb 2005

Posted 01 Feb 2005

Ashii says
ufffffffff atherr uz zamaann
aise mat hanso

mujhe aur darr lagta hai
pehle hi freddy ki bhootni ne dara diya hai
Posted 01 Feb 2005

Freddy says
lo jee khan sahib kay pass time nahi parnay ka ...........parheen gey nahi tu fail ho jayee gey khan sahib....................ye hum nahi kehtay bazorgoon nein kaha hai..............





meri bhootni nein nahi apni shakal nein darayaa ho ga...........wohi ghisa pitaa sa joke........


















































aayna dekh leya tha kya apna sall jee..................
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kekekekeke
Posted 01 Feb 2005

Ashii says
ather uz zaman k paas parhne ka time aksar nahi hota
ehemmmm...
oupssssss





ufff,, kya naa
kabhi to koi original sa joke bol diya karo
wohi sune sunae,,, ab to na hansi aati hai na gussa
Posted 01 Feb 2005

guest. says
faradiya said:

shukri shukri kash beauty na horror story hai na drama......it's acutally comedy..........buss kisi nein mujay aik wakyeaa sunayaa ore mein nein essay apnay alfaaz mein likh dea..................




ur cume cume.. hum kabhi kabhi jhoot bol letay hein..

Posted 01 Feb 2005

joker says
sall
nice story mazay ki haii
Posted 01 Feb 2005

friend_16 says
achee hai .. uper date, time aur place kis cheez ka likha hai??
jaab ye story likhee thee ya jaab ye incident hua tha?
Posted 01 Feb 2005

guest. says
jab yeh khoofsurat itefq hua tha..shayed tabhi ki date hai
Posted 01 Feb 2005

Ashii says
HH
me ne thori likhi hai story,, mujh pe kyun hans rahe ho





aaaaa,,,
kashu jhooottiiii
Posted 01 Feb 2005

cutefriend says
oyeeeee fradiye ne fraud kiya hia
Posted 01 Feb 2005

Ashii says
woh to zahir hai

yeh kahani chori ki hai
coz me ne pata kiya hai,, iss model town add pe to koi aur rehta hai
Posted 01 Feb 2005

cutefriend says
aur us ka name sall hia
Posted 02 Feb 2005

guest. says
SALL said:


aaaaa,,,
kashu jhooottiiii



sab ko nahin batana tha yaar

shhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Posted 02 Feb 2005

cutefriend says
Posted 02 Feb 2005

joker says
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