Mujh se Pehli c Mohabbat mere mehbooob na Mang...!
main ne samjha tha k Tu hey to darakhsahan hey Hayat tera ghum hey to ghum-e-dehr ka jhagrra kya hey teri soorat se hey aalam main Baharon ko sabaat teri aankhon k siwa duniya main rakha kya hey
Tu jo mil jaye to taqdeer niguN ho jaye Yun na tha main ne faqat chaha tha, Yun ho jaye
Mujh se Pehli c Mohabbat mere mehbooob na Mang...!
Mujh se Pehli c Mohabbat mere mehbooob na Mang...!
Un ginat sadiyon k tareek baheemana talism resham-o-atlus-o-kamkhawab main bunwaye huye jabaja bikhray huye koocha-o-bazar main jism khaak main lithrray huye khoon main nehlaaye huye
Laut jati hey udhar ko b nazar kya kijye ab bhi dilkash hey tera husn Magar kya kijye
or bhi dukh hain zamanay main Mohabbat k siwa rahtain aor b hain wasl ki rahat k siwa
Mujh se Pehli c Mohabbat mere mehbooob na Mang...!
Ashii
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one of my favvvvvvvv..
missing shers ....... khaak mei lithre hue khooon me nehlae hue ""jism nikle hue amraaz k tanooron se peepe behti hui galte hue nasooron se"" laut jaati hai udher ko bhi nazar kya kije ab bhi dilkash hai tera husn magar kya kije
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happy to c some one with good sense of poetry, Faiz ko pasand kerne ka matlab, poetry ka acha zouq. Infact main ne ye nazm yahan post b isliye ki thi just to find out a person with acha Zouq. Well, ye main ne Noor jehan ki gaai hui nazm post ki thi, usmain ye lines nahi hain, correction rather addition ka shukriya, Faiz ki Bahar aayi perhi hey aap ne Sall?
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yep u r rite yeh gae hue version mei nahi hein line
ooo yesss,, bahaar aa aaai to jaise yak baar laut aae hein phir adam se woh khaab saare shabaab saare ........ and tina sani ne itna zabardast gaya hai k bassss..
Doctor Sam
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acha... chalain koi baat nahi... Faiz k baray main aap se baat hoti rahay gi, bul k poetry k hawale se... koi achi nazm perhain ya acha shair, zaroor share kijye ga
