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Udaas Shamein Ujar Raastay Kabhi Bulayein To Lot Aana
Kisi Ki Aankhon Mein RatJagon K Aazaab Aayein To Lot Aana

Abhi Nayi Wadiyon Naye Manzaron Mein Reh Lo Magar Meri Jaan
Ye Saaray Ek Ek Kar K Jab Tum Ko Chor Jayein To Lot Aana

Jo Sham Dhaltay Hi Apni Apni Pana Gaahon Ko Lot`tay Hain
Agar Woh Panchi Kabhi Koi Dastan Sunayien To Lot Aana

Mein Roz Yunhi Hawa Pe Likh Kar Us Ki Taraf Bhejta Hon
K Achay Mausam Agar Paharon Pe Muskurayien To Lot Aana

Agar Andheron Chor Kar Bhool Jayein Tum Ko Tumharay Sathi
Or Apni Khatir Apnay Apnay Diye Jalayein To Lot Aana

Meri Woh Baatien Tu Jin Par Be Ikhtiyar Hansta Tha KhilKhila Kar
Bicharnay Walay Meri Woh Baatien Kabhi Rulaien To Lot Aana(nm)
Posted 11 Jul 2005

cutefriend says
Posted 11 Jul 2005

HiRa.... says
THX 4 REPLYING
Posted 11 Jul 2005

Guest_005 says
HiRa.... said:

Udaas Shamein Ujar Raastay Kabhi Bulayein To Lot Aana
Kisi Ki Aankhon Mein RatJagon K Aazaab Aayein To Lot Aana

Abhi Nayi Wadiyon Naye Manzaron Mein Reh Lo Magar Meri Jaan
Ye Saaray Ek Ek Kar K Jab Tum Ko Chor Jayein To Lot Aana

Jo Sham Dhaltay Hi Apni Apni Pana Gaahon Ko Lot`tay Hain
Agar Woh Panchi Kabhi Koi Dastan Sunayien To Lot Aana

Mein Roz Yunhi Hawa Pe Likh Kar Us Ki Taraf Bhejta Hon
K Achay Mausam Agar Paharon Pe Muskurayien To Lot Aana

Agar Andheron Chor Kar Bhool Jayein Tum Ko Tumharay Sathi
Or Apni Khatir Apnay Apnay Diye Jalayein To Lot Aana

Meri Woh Baatien Tu Jin Par Be Ikhtiyar Hansta Tha KhilKhila Kar
Bicharnay Walay Meri Woh Baatien Kabhi Rulaien To Lot Aana(nm)



veru nice
Posted 12 Jul 2005

Guest_005 says
   
Posted 12 Jul 2005

arzoo says
nice
Posted 23 Jul 2005

Guest_005 says
nice again
Posted 26 Jul 2005

cutefriend says
Posted 27 Jul 2005

HiRa.... says
HEEY THX..YA
Posted 27 Jul 2005

cutefriend says
welcome welcoem
Posted 27 Jul 2005

new_beau says
HiRa.... said:

Udaas Shamein Ujar Raastay Kabhi Bulayein To Lot Aana
Kisi Ki Aankhon Mein RatJagon K Aazaab Aayein To Lot Aana

Abhi Nayi Wadiyon Naye Manzaron Mein Reh Lo Magar Meri Jaan
Ye Saaray Ek Ek Kar K Jab Tum Ko Chor Jayein To Lot Aana

Jo Sham Dhaltay Hi Apni Apni Pana Gaahon Ko Lot`tay Hain
Agar Woh Panchi Kabhi Koi Dastan Sunayien To Lot Aana

Mein Roz Yunhi Hawa Pe Likh Kar Us Ki Taraf Bhejta Hon
K Achay Mausam Agar Paharon Pe Muskurayien To Lot Aana

Agar Andheron Chor Kar Bhool Jayein Tum Ko Tumharay Sathi
Or Apni Khatir Apnay Apnay Diye Jalayein To Lot Aana

Meri Woh Baatien Tu Jin Par Be Ikhtiyar Hansta Tha KhilKhila Kar
Bicharnay Walay Meri Woh Baatien Kabhi Rulaien To Lot Aana(nm)


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"Woh Rangeenn Shaamainn Haseen rastay hum ko yaad aatay hainn
Bicharnay waalay teray sapnay humainn Rozz sataatay hainn

Inn Wadiyonn In manzeronn say kiya milay ga hum ko
Keh shaam hotay hi Saye bhi Saath Chhor Jaatay Hainn"
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"UDAAS MOSAM KAY RATJAGAAY"
This Book I read in 1991 for the first time when I was in 9th Claas. My Biaology Teacher brought it and Told me about these lines.

And Then Filbadeeh I replied with above four lines. This was the Start of my poetry.

Now After 14 Years...Iam very glad to see it at JB.
Posted 27 Jul 2005

HiRa.... says
awwwwwwwwww shooooooooooooooo sweet..thx 4 replying.. :)
Posted 29 Jul 2005

cutefriend says
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mainey tho buss aik cheez hai paee
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Posted 31 Jul 2005

cutefriend says
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