SupidGuy said:
if its urs then its nice.....
QUEEN VICTORIA said:nice ghazal amir
new_beau said:Really a good Thought...You can improve it more and more...Also I think Its "inspired" one ..(Pls dont mind...)
Anyways...Pls Keep Posting More...Also tell if you have it on the net....
I am waiting for more....
Fairl_Girl said:nice
Virdan said:
new_beau said:Really a good Thought...You can improve it more and more...Also I think Its "inspired" one ..(Pls dont mind...)
Anyways...Pls Keep Posting More...Also tell if you have it on the net....
I am waiting for more....
Thanks a lot 4 liking mine poetry and can u explain what do u mean by inspired one waisay to sabhi jo kuchh bhi likha jata hay inspire ho kar he likha jata hay and dont worry there is nothing to mind and i have sent this on three forums Thanks waiting 4 ur reply
new_beau said:
Virdan said:
new_beau said:Really a good Thought...You can improve it more and more...Also I think Its "inspired" one ..(Pls dont mind...)
Anyways...Pls Keep Posting More...Also tell if you have it on the net....
I am waiting for more....
Thanks a lot 4 liking mine poetry and can u explain what do u mean by inspired one waisay to sabhi jo kuchh bhi likha jata hay inspire ho kar he likha jata hay and dont worry there is nothing to mind and i have sent this on three forums Thanks waiting 4 ur reply
Sorry Dear..I tried a lot but Couldn't Find that Ghazal...
It was a s Follows....
"Sar say meray Yaadonn ka Qehar kiyun nahin Jaata"
"Ik Shakhs meray Dil say Uter Kiyun nahin Jaata"
Anyways...words are few and Passions are Many..Kahin na kahin Baar repeat ho hi jaati hay...No prob...
Keep it Up....
Lost World said:Amir u r to suchi muchi k poet ho
waiting for some other awsome creationzz