Lol,believe it..today is the 1st episode.. Monday-Thursday :)..please read it.... and only i will make it go further plz...
Scene 1:-First it shows a house and we hear the voice "Kahaan Ho" and the face shows and it's an old woman with a great personality.
Amma:-Kahaan ho tum?
Voice of payal is heard and as the camera rolls it slowly shows a girl coming and it's Najjo.
Najjo:-Kya hoa amma?
Amma:-Najjo main nay tum say kya kaha tha?
Najjo:-Kya kaha tha?
Amma:-Kucch yaad rehta hay kya tumhain?
Najjo:-Sab kucch
Amma:-Lo bhala..sab kucch tou bhool jati ho tum
Najjo:Laikin main yeh tou nahin bhooli na kay aap meri Amma ho.
Amma:Tou bhool jao na(loo's angry)
Najjo(with love):-Kaisy baatain ker raho ho aap.Accha bolo kya kaam hay?
Amma:-Tumhain aaj khalaa jaan kay ghar chalna hay na?
Najjo:-Amma main nahin ja rahi.Mujhay aaj parloud jana hay aap Bhaiyya kay saath chalay jao.
Amma:-Tumharay bhaiyya janay kahan hongay.
Scene 2:-A man is shown talking on mobile his face is turned and he turns back and a dashing man.He cuts the phone and a voice is heard "Sir" as the secret opens that the man who was on phone was Sabir
Sabir:Yes?
Colegue:-Sir,the file is here.
Sabir:Ok issay yahan rakho aur tum jao
The worker exits the room
The phone rings and Sabir picks it up
Sabir:Who's this?
Amma:-Beta main hoon.
Sabir:Koi kaam hay kya amma?
Amma:Beta aaj tumhain mere saath Khala Jaan kay ghar chalna hay.
Sabir:Amma mujhay tou kaam hay
Amma:Abhi mere saath chalna bhi tou zaroori hay na
Sabir:Laikin(knock on the door and Sabir says OK to the lady standing outside the door and Amma thinks he said OK to her so she cuts the phone)
Sabir:So?Kya kaam hay?
The Lady:-Sir,some one sent these papers for you.
Sabir:Thank You.
Sabir checked the papers smiles as the scene ends
Third Scene:-Sabir comes back to house and Amma is already waiting for him.
Amma:-Chalo beta
Sabir:-ok..chalain
(Episode Ends)
I will continue 2nd episode tomorrow and i hope i will get a +ve feedback.I think this shows how good director i can be,lol.
P.S:-If you people cannot understand Urdu i can even post in English.Reply in feedback section.
Sabir and Ammi are standing outside Khala Jaan's house and they are to enter when Sabir's phone rings and he tells Ammi that he needs to go somewhere ungently so he meet Khala Jaan and he will come back to pick her up after some time.Sabir gets in the car and go away.Ammi enters the house.
An old woman comes to her to reviel her identity she is Khalaa Jaan.They both enters the room and sits down.
Khala Jaan:-Kaisy ho?
Ammi:-Theek hoon main tum sunao?
Khala Jaan:-Main bhi theek hoon
Ammi:-Shehnaz bacchi nazar nahin aa rahi
Khala Jaan:-Woh zara bahar gaye hay.Accha Sabir nahin aaya tumhare saath?Bauhat din ho gaye oosay dekhay hoay
Ammi:-Busy rehta hay na aaj kal.Tumhain tou pata hay kya chahta hay woh
Khala Jaan:-Haan mujhay pata hay.
Ammi:-Bas main issi liyay tumharay pass aye hoon
Khala Jaan:-Kya matlab?
Ammi tells Khala Jaan some thing which is kept secret.Ammi then gets up as she comes to know that Sabir has arrived and is waiting for him outside.
Scene 3:- Ammi and Sabir are back at house.
Najjo:-aa gaye aap?
Ammi:-Zara dam bhar lo
Najjo:-Bhaiyya,kaisy rahi?
Ammi:-Aray kya kaisy rahi?Yeh wahan per tha hi kahan..yeh tou kaam say chala gaya tha
Najjo:-Bhaiyya aisa kya zaroori kaam aa gaya tha?
Sabir have a strange lookon face and walks away without answering Najjo.Ammi notices at and the episode ends at camera zooms her face worried about Sabir.
Feedback should be posted only in the feedback section.What changes you want?What turns are you expecting next?Why is Sabir worried?What was Ammi and Khala Jaan discussing?Tune in to find out tomorrow only on Janu Baba! lol..
Sabir(sad look on face):-Replies with his eyes "Yes"
Ammi:Beta tum pareshan na ho main itna tou kar hi sakti hoon tumharay liyay
Sabir:-Aaap?Aaap kya kar sakti hain jab main itna paisa arrange nahin kar pa raha hoon.
Ammi:-Beta tum America jana chahtay ho na?aur tum manage nahin kar pa rahay ho,right? (Secret Revieled)
Sabir:-Ji Ammi,laikin is main aap meri kya madad kar sakti hain
Ammi:Beta main nay khala jaan say baat kar li hay magar...(before she could continue Sabir interrupts him)
Sabir:Khala Jaan maan gayeen kya?
Ammi:Haan beta woh tumhari madad kay liyay tayyar hain magar..
Sabir(happily):-Ammi bas ab aap agar magar chor dain.
Ammi:-Beta aik zaroori(Sabir's phone rings)
Sabir:Hello?Kya accha main aata hoon(cuts the phone).Sabir informs his mother he is going some where his mother asks him to stop as she got some thing to tell him but he runs away.
Scene 2:-Sabir enters in a restaurant and is looking some one from back sitting on the chair.Sabir comes the face of the girl shows.
Sabir:I'm Sorry Rubi!(the girl is his gf)
Rubi:-Kya Sorry.Kitna late ho tum main kab say wait kar rahi hoon bas janay hi wali thi.Yeh koi baat hoi(Sabir cuts her)
Sabir:-Aray Aray meri baat tou suno.
Rubi:-Kya sunoon?
Sabir:Mera kaam ho gaya..
Rubi:-Tou main kya.. kya.. kaam hogaya?
Sabir:Haan...I'm going to America!!!!!
Rubi:-Kab?
Sabir:Yeh kab wab tou mujhay nahin pata abhi but main Amera jaoonga...khooob naam aur paisay kamaoonga aur...
Rubi(cuts Sabir):-Aur mujhay bhool jaoogay,right?
Sabir:aray..tumhain kaisay pata.
Rubi gets upset
Sabir:Tumhain kaisay bhool sakta hoon main.Drauni cheezain itni asani say thori bhooltay hain
Rubi:Haan Haan nahin bhoolna(she stands)
Sabir:Chalo main tumhain lift day deta hoon.
Rubi:-Koi zaroorat nahin hay
Sabir:Ab itna ghussa karnay ki kya zaroorat hay.
They walked away
Scene 3:-
Ammi is sitting and Najjo comes to her.
Ammi:-Koi kaam hay?
Najjo:-Ammi woh main nay Bhaiyya ko jatay dekha..kafi khush lag rahay thay
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Scene 1:-Najjo:-Laikin kya?Aap udaas kyon ho gayeen?Aaapko tou khush hona chahiyay na
Ammi:-Khush tou hoon main magar...
Najjo:-Kya magar?Batain na
Ammi:-Woo.rehnay dou tumhari samajh nahin aayega
Najjo:-Laikin ammi batain na aap aisi kya baat hay
Ammi stands and walks to her room.
Scene 2:-Ammi is in her room talking to herself.
Ammi:-Ab main tumhain kaisay batati kay..kay tumhari khalaa nay kaisy shart rakhi hay...Main tumhain kaisay batati kay tumhari khalaa nay Shahnay aur Sabir kay rishtay ki baat ki hay.Main tumhain kaisay batati kay main nay tum say bagair poochay haan kardi hay..main tumhain kaisay...
She suddenly stops as the camera turns some one is standing and slowly they show and she is "Najjo"
Ammi:-Najjo tu yahan kya kar rahi hay
Najjo:-Ammi..yeh aap nay kya kiya...Aaap tou janti hay na kay
Ammi:-Kay Kya..kiya main nay
Najjo:-Main nay aapki baat sun li hay
Ammi(shocked):-Kya Kya baat
Najjo:-Ammi aap nay Bhaiyya ka rishta kar diya oon say bagair poochay
Ammi:-Haan.. magar..woh..main nay tou oos ki bhalai kay liyay hi kiya na
Najjo:-Laikin aap nay ab tak onhain bataya hi nahin.
Ammi:-Main oosay batana chahti thi magar...
Najjo:-Magar kya ammmi...aapko oonhain batana hi hoga
Ammi:-Haan
Scene 3:-Sabir is talking to Rubina on phone
Sabir:-Haan jaan kya hoa
Rubina:-Tou ticket aa gaye aap kay?
Sabir:Guess karo mere haath main kya hay
Rubina:Tickets
Sabir:Haan
Rubina:Tou kab ja rahay hain aap?
Sabir:Bas..ab to thora hi waqt hay mere paas.Iskay baad main apni manzil ki taraf udaan bharoonga.Yeh aasman yeh zameen meri hogi.
Rubina:Aur main?
Sabir:Tum tou pehlay say hi meri ho
Rubina:Accha
Sabir:Aur tou kya..Accha jaan abhi mujhay jana hay main tum say baad man baat karoonga.
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Scene 1:-(Khala Jaan's residency)
All are having dinner
Khala Jaan:-Sabir beta kal ja rahay ho tum?
Sabir:Yes
Khala Jaan:-Sari tayyari ho gaye kya?
Sabir:-Yes
Ammi:-Haan sab kucch ready hay bas kal ja raha hay
Khala Jaan:-Tum nay bata tou diya na?
Ammi:Nahin..chalo yeh time accha hay..Sabir beta
Sabir:Ji ammi?
Ammi:Beta woh main tumhain batana chahti hoon kay..(Sabir's mobile rings)
Sabir:-Ammi eik minute
Sabir goes out and comes back only to inform them that he have to go right now.
Scene 2:-
Sabir is in a restaurant talking on phone.
Sabir:-Kahan ho tum?
Rubina:-Main ghar per
Sabir:Milnay nahin aaa raheen tum?
Rubina:Nahin..woh main aa nahin sakti abhi
Sabir:Kyun?
Rubina:-Ghar main mehmaan hain issi liyay
Sabir:-Aray...main aaj raat ja raha hoon tum aakhri baar milna bhi nahin chahogi?
Rubina:Haan magar...tum aajaoo na
Sabir:I'll try.
{Sabir reaches Rubina's house but she is not house as she is in restaurant waiting for Sabir so,they are not able to meet before Sabir goes abroad}
Scene 3:- Every one is ready and gets to the Airport.Sabir after meeting every one stand in corner thinking about Rubina.Ammi have a letter in her hand which she puts into Sabir's bag so he can read it(written about the shart of khalaa jaan).Sabir then walks to the check post where that paper falls.
Scebe 4:-
Every one is back to the home as they enter they notices some one standing with bags and all in hands.
Najjo:-Kaun?
The man turns and every one looks surprised.
Najjo runs to the man and hugs him
*Episode Ends*
{Who is this man?Why did Najjo hug him?Will Sabir ever come to know the truth?tune in tomorrow}
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Scene1:-Najjo hugs the man.
Najjo:-Bhai jaan aap aa gaye
Ammi:Hussain Beta tum aa gaye?Na koi khabar na koi pata
Hussain:Ammi aapko surprise dena tha
Najjo:Yeh surprise chorain batain wahan say kya surprise laye hain hamaray liyay aap?
Ammi:Beta oosay saans tou lenay day..tu tou peechay hi par gaye
Hussain:Kahan gaye thay aap sab log?
Ammi:Beta woh hum to Sabir ko Airport chornay gaye thay
Hussain:Airport?Kyun?
Ammi:Beta woh bhi US jana chahta tha...
Hussain:Mujhay tou kisi nay inform nahin kya
Najjo:Aray baba is liyay nahin kya takay Bhaiyya aapko surprise day sakain
Hussain:Per dekho main nay hi surprise day diya tum logoon ko
Ammi:Beta ab ja kar fresh ho jao
Hussain goes to his room
Scene 2:-
Hussain is sitting on the bed and Najjo enters the room
Najjo:-Kya laye ho janab aap
Hussain:Beg main dekh lo
Najjo:Main dekh loon..aray kya aap bhi buddhon ki tarah ho gaye ho..jaldi say utho aur mujhay dikhao mere liyay kya laye ho
Hussain:-Tumharay liyay?Aray main tou sirf Ammi kay liyay laya hoon.Tumhara to khayaal hi nahin raha
Najjo:Kya...khayaal hi nahin raha ..mere liyay kucch bhi nahin?
Hussain:Nahin.. ab tou tumhain tumhari shaadi per hi doonga
Najjo:-Shaadi per?
Hussain:Aur tou kya
Najjo:-jayen main aap say baat nahin karti..kucch bhi nahin laye aap mere liyay....aapko tou mere yaad bhi nahin aaye hogi na
Hussain:Aray..tumhain kaisa pata?
Najjo:Haan Haan mujhay pata hay
Hussain:Waisay aik cheez tou laya hoon main tumharay liyay
Najjo:Kya?
Hussain:Hmm..close your eyes!
Najjo:Close my eyes??aur phir dekhoon gi kaisay
Hussain:Aray baba baad main eyes open ker laina
Najjo close her eyes and when she opens them there are many gift packs on the bed.
Najjo:Aray..kis kay liyay hain yeh sab?
Hussain:Meri pyari si siter kay liyay
Najjo:Thank You bhaiyya
Hussain:Challo ab jaldi say ja kar ammi ko dikhao yeh..main fresh ho kar aata hoon
Najjo goes out of the room
Scene 3:-
Najjo is showing gifts to her mom and wears a necklace.
Najjo:Kaisa hay yeh?
Ammi:Bauhat accha hay..bauhat khoobsorat lag rahi hooo
Najjo:Waisay yeh tou itna accha nahin hay..main tou hoon hi khoobsoorat..shayad meri wajah say yeh khoobnsorat lag raha hay...waisay bhi main tou jo bhi pehnoon woh khoobsorat ho jata hay.
Ammi:Haan baba
Najjo:I know i am very beautiful.
Hussain(coming):-yeh kis nay kaha?
Najjo:-Main nay sach kaha na?
Hussain:Aray..main nay socha koi khoobsorat larki ki baat ho rahi thi..yeh to tum ho
Najjo:Main khoobsorat nahin hoon kya?Jab college main thi na tou sab larkay mere peechay martay thay.
Hussain:Tou kitnay shaheed hoay ab tak?
Najjo:Jayeen...aap say tou baat karna bekaar hay...main ja kar apni friends ko batati hoon
Najjo goes out of the room
Ammi:Hussain beta tum nay humain inform bhi nahin kiya aanay ka..na itnay arsay say phone kiya tha
Hussain:Main tou aap logoon ko surprise dena chahta tha na issi liyaya
Ammi:Haan..waisay kaisa raha tumhara tour?
Hussain:Bauhat maza aaya ammi...kafi enjoy kiya main nay..ab tou main aa gaya hoon..Ab tou aap khush hain na?
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Scene 1:-(Najjo,Ammi and Hussain are talking)
Ammi:-Tou beta ab future kay kya plans hay tumharay?
Hussain:Ammi main yahan apni aik company kholnay ka plan kar raha hoon
Najjo:Hamari apni company?
Hussain:Haan
Najjo:Aray wah magar kis cheez ki?
Hussain:Builders
Ammi:Beta akailay hi kholo gay kya company?
Hussain:Ammi abhi tou main kisi kay saath partnership nahin karna chahta iss liyay akailay hi karoon ga sab
Najjo:Main ban jaoon partner?You know na i'm great
Hussain:Mujhay company doobana nahin hay
Najjo:-Main dooba doongi kya?
Hussain:Main nay aisa kab kaha
Najjo:Matlab tou yehi tha na
Hussain:Tum nay khud hi samajh liya yeh matlab
Najjo:Ammi dekhain na bhaiyya ko
Ammi:Main kya dekhoon...tumhara kaam hay
Scene 2:-
Hussain is shown trying his best and finally he gets the aproval for the company. He is very happy and informs Ammi about it.They all are very happy
Ammi:Mubarak ho beta!
Hussain:Yeh sab aap ki prays ka hi tou result hay na Ammi
Najjo:-Aur meri bhi
Ammi:Nahin beta yeh sab tumharay hard work ki wajah say hoa hay.
Najjo:-Haan
Hussain:-Laikin ammi aik chottti si baat hay
Ammi:Kya baat hay beta?
Hussain:Ammi woh...Company kay launch say pehlay mujhay apnay baray main sari detail deni hongi
Ammi:-Tou beta is main problem kya hay?
Hussain:Ammi..mere..father ka naam...
{There is lighting on Ammi's face}
Najjo:-Haan ammi..aap hamain papa kay baray main batati kyon nahin?
Hussain:Ammi main aap say yeh sab kabhi nahin poochta magar ab
Ammi:Haan beta..ab main tumhain sab batati hoon..sab...sirf tumhain tumharay papa ka naam hi nahin balkay sab kucch...
{Past Story}
Ammi start telling the story:-Main gaoon(village) main rehti thi..
(Amm(younger) is shown in fields playing with friends when a friend of her informs that her mother has called her.Ammi goes to her mother and she informs Ammi that today people are coming to see her.Ammi is confused.)
Ammi:-Beta mujhay pata chala kay mujhay larkay walay dekhnay aa rahay hain tou main tou jaisay mar hi gaye.
Hussain:Laikin aisa kyon ammi?matlab
Ammi..Kyonki
(Ammi(younger) in her room thinking about some thing when she gets informed that there are people outside to see her.Ammi steps outside and sits.The family talks to each other and the relation is finally done)
Ammi:Beta jab yeh rishta hoa tou main sab ko bata dena chahti thi kay..laikin jaisay meri zabaan band ho gaye ho..main kisi ko nahin bata paye kay...
(Ammi(younger) is shown crying and her mother come and ask her why is she crying and Ammi told her that she does not want to marry...but her Mother says she must marry)
Ammi:Beta main apni maan kay samnay bol nahin paye.Main parhi likhi thi aur kafi modern bhi khair phir meri shaadi ho gaye aur main Karachi aa gayee..Kucch arsay baad mujhay pata chala kay mere Amma Abba ki accident say death ho gaye hay.Main apnay husband(Babu) kay saath bus main thi laikin meri kismat kay oos bas ka accident ho gaya aur kisi na kisi tarha main Village pauhnchi mere Husband ki oos accident main death ho chuki thi.Meri samajh main kucch nahin aa raha tha kay achanak meri nazar wahan kisi per pari.Nazar ka milna tha kay meri jaan main jaan aye.Woh Doctor.Zia thay...mere...mere..pehlay husband!
Najjo:Kya(shocked)
Hussain is sitting hearing the whole tory
Ammi:Haan beta woh mere pehlay husband thay
Najjo:Ammi aap nay yeh sab humain pehlay kyon nahin bataya?
Ammi:-Beta tum suno ab
Ammi:-Village main mera koi nahin tha but only my sister your Khala Jaan laikin oos ki bhi shaadi ho gaye thi.Dr.Zia nay hi meri jaan bachaye thi aur oonhoon nay hi mujhay mere husband ki death kay baray main bataya.Woh mujhay apnay saath Karachi lay aye...hum loog acchi tarha say reh rahay thay aur mujhay pata chala kay main pregnent hoon.Main tou jaisay bauhat khush thi laikin 1mera baccha ..zinda na tha..woh mar chuka tha.Hamari zindagi chalti rahi phir Tum,Sabir aur Najjo meri zindagi main aye laikin waqt kay guzartay mujhay is baat ka pata chala kay mera baccha mara nahin tha balkay oosay mara gaya tha..kyonki woh baccha mere 2nd husband Babu ka tha issi liyay Zia nay oosay kisi ko day dya tha.Is baat per meri aur Zia ki laraye hogaye aur woh aakhri baar tha jab main nay Zia say baat ki.Main ooska ghar chor kar aagaye..main nay tum logoon ko khud pala..Waqt nay mujhay kafi strong bana diya tha.
Najjo is crying and Hussian is emotional too
Scene 3:-
Hussain:Laikin Ammi main kis ka beta hoon
Ammi:Beta tum,Sabir aur Najjo Zia kay betay ho
Hussain:Iska matlab kay..hamaray papa abhi bhi Zinda hay
Ammi:Haan shayad..laikin mujhay kucch nahin pata
Hussain:Ammi main apnay papa ko zaroor dhoondoon ga
Ammi:Beta
Hussain:Ji Ammi main oonko zaroor dhondonga laikin sirf iss liyay kay onhoon nay aapkay saath aisa kaisay kya....
*Episode Ends*
It might be a little confusing episode so go in feedback please.
IN SHORT! "Ammi was married twice,her 2nd husband(Babu) died she went to her 1st husband(Zia) who kidnapped her son from her first husband(Babu) and when she came to know it she left her 2nd husband(Zia) and Hussain,Sabir and Najjo are her 2nd husband's(Zia) son and she doesn't know if her 2nd husband(Zia) is alive or not"
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Scene1:-Hussain:Ji Ammi main oonko zaroor dhondonga laikin sirf iss liyay kay onhoon nay aapkay saath aisa kaisay kya....
Ammi:-Beta tum aisa bilkul nahin karogay
Hussain:Laikin kyon ammi?
Ammi:-Beta joh insaan meri zindagi main nahin hay..jisay main bhool jana chahti hoon..Jis nay mujhay dard diya tum ussay meri zindagi main lana chahtay ho
Hussain:Magar Ammi
Ammi:Beta..main nahin chahoongi kay aisa kabhi ho
Ammi walks away
Scene 2:- Hussain and shown working every where and finally he calls home.
Hussain:Ammi....i'm on
Ammi:Kya beta?
Hussain:Ammi..bas main ghar aa kar batata hoon
Hussain back in home and informs every one that he is going to launch his company on New Year!
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Scene 1:-Ammi,Najjo and Hussain are at Khalaa Jaan's residence.
Khala Jaan:-Beta sab kaisa chal raha hay tumhara?
Hussain:Khala Jaan sab kucch accha hay
Najjo:Bas bhiayya company launch karnay hi walay hain
Shahnaz:-Kab?
Ammi:Aaaj issi liyay tou aaye hain hum yahan
Hussain:Hum apnay ghar per New Years Party day rahay hain bas tab hi announcement kar dain gay.1st January ko opening hay
Khala Jaan:Congrats beta!
Hussain:Thank You Khala Jaan
Najjo:Ammi chalain?
Khala Jaan:Itni jaldi kya hay?
Ammi:Issay tou har kaam ki hi jaldi rehti hay
Khala Jaan:Shaadi ki bhi bauhat jaldi hogi issay tou
Najjo:Kya aap sab meri shaadi kay peechay paray rehtay hain..nahin kar rahi main shaadi
Hussain:Challo..kisi ki zindagi tabah honay say tou bacch jayegi
Najjo:Aray..mera matlab abhi nahin kar rahi
Hussain:Bechara..
Najjo:Kaun bechara?
Hussain:Tumhara honay wala husband..
Najjo:Ammi dekhain na bhai jaan ko
Ammi:Chalo beta ab chalain
Scene 2:- Najjo is in Sabir's room finding some thing when Ammi comes there.
Ammi:Beta kya kar rahi ho tum yahan per?
Najjo:Ji?Kucch nahin ammi
Ammi:Beta..kucch dhoond rahi ho kya?
Najjo:Ji ammi..bas woh meri diary nahin mil rahi hay
Ammi:Zara oos walay box main dekho.Sabir hamesha apni diary wahan hi rakhta tha..ho sakta hay tumhari bhi waheen ho
Najjo:Accha ammi
(Ammi goes away and Najjo opens the box and she finds he diary she picks it up and then she finds another diary(Sabir's) Najjo picks up Sabir's diary too
Najjo:Oho..tou bhaiyya bhi diary likha kartay thay..challo aaj jaan hi laitay hain kya kartay rehtay thay woh hamesha..iss diary main tou likhtay hi hoongay na
Najjo goes to read the diary but at the same time Ammi arrives.
Ammi:Mil gaye beta diary?
Najjo:Ji ammi
Ammi:-Yeh 2 diaries theen kya tumhari?
Najjo:Nahin ammi aik bhaiyya ki hay
Ammi:Accha..rakh do ossay
Najjo:Parh kar rakh doongi :D
Ammi:Nahin beta aisay kisi ki diary nahin parhtay acchi baat nahin hoti hay
Najjo:Kissi ki diary thori hay yeh...meray bhaiyya ki diary hay
Ammi:Tum say tou baat karna hi fuzool hay..kabhi kisi ki mani hay tum nay
Najjo:Nahin mani kya?
Ammi:Accha baba parh lo
Scene 3:-(Najjo in her room first writes her diary)
Najjo writes (Ab mujhay pata hay kay meray papa kaun hain...laikin main nay kabhi oonhain dekha nahin...main apnay papa say milna chahti hoon..main apnay papa ko dekhna chahti hoon..main apnay papa say baat karna chahti hoon..papa kahan hain aap?kahan hain aap papa??aap aatay kyoon nahin hain..(Najjo starts crying and Hussain comes to her)
Hussain:Kya baat hay why are you crying?
Najjo:Kucch nahin bhaiyya bas woh...
Hussain:Kya Kya likh rahi ho yahan per tum
(Hussain takes the diary and reads what Najjo wrote)
Hussain:Kya hay yeh sab?
Najjo:Bhaiyya woh..papa
Hussain:Dekho sis...main bhi yehi chahta hoon laikin hum aisay Ammi ka dil tou nahin break kar saktay na.
Najjo:Nahin but
Hussain:Dekho main bhi papa ko dhoondna chahta hoon.Mere dil main bauhat sawaal hain jo main oon say poochna chahta hoon laikin tumhari tarah main nay bhi kabhi papa ko nahin dekha tou hum oon tak kaisay pauhanchaingay(how will we reach him).
Najjo:Humain naam tou pata hay na.
Hussain:Laikin naam say kya hota hay..dekho Zia naam kay is world main kafi loog hongay..Humain kisi tarah papa ki picture chahiyay takay hum oonko dhoond payeen.Humain ammi say papa kay baray main aur information chahiyay.
Najjo:Kal ammi say baat karaingay
Hussain:Haan karaingay..laikin iss tarah kay ammi ko pata nahin chalay..main nahain chahta kay ammi hurt hoon.
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Scene 1:-Every one is sitting in the hall
Hussain:Ammi aap sab ko invite ker lain kal ki party main.Kal meri zindagi ka bauhat bara din hay.Kal mera sapna poora honay ja raha hay aur main chahta hoon kay iss khushi main sab hamaray saath hoon.
Najjo:Main apni friends ko bhi bula loon bhai jaan?zyada nahin hain
Hussain:Haan Haan jissay chaho bula lo tum aur ammi aap bhi jisko chahain bula lain.
Ammi:Haan beta main nay sab ko invite ker liya hay kal.
Hussain:Good ammi
Ammi:Beta waisay sab preparations to ho gayeen na?koi mushkil tou nahin hay?
Hussain:Nahin ammi.Main nay yeh hotel main arrange ki hay...sab say bari party..New Year Party jahan main apni company ko launch karoonga.
Najjo:Haan bhaiyya..mujhay shopping bhi karni hay chalain hum shopping karnay?
Hussain:Ammi aapko shopping karni hay kiya?Kucch chahiyay aapko?
Ammi:Nahin beta.
Najjo:Bhai jaan chalain na aap
{Hussain's phone rings}
Hussain:Hello,who's this?oh..ok i will be there(he cuts the phone}
Hussain:Mujhay abhi jana hay thora sa kaam baki hay.Najjo tum ammi kay saath chali jao....theek hay na Ammi?aapko koi problem tou nahin hay na?
Ammi:Nahin beta..sahi hay
Hussain goes out
Scene 2:-(In shopping mall)
Ammi and Najjo bought some bangles and then they enter men section.
Ammi:Beta yeh men section main kyon aaa gaye ho tum?Kis kay liyay lena hay?
Najjo:Ammi bhai jaan kay liyay kucch lay laiti hoon na.Aik suit lay laiti hooon
Ammi:Chalo sahi hay..tum pasand kar lo
Najjo:Laikin ammi..mujhay tou nahin pata bhai jaan ko kaisay suits pasand hain.
Ammi:Bilkul tumharay papa ki...(she stops)
Najjo:Kya ammi?Kya keh rahi theen aap?
Ammi:Kucch nahin..chalo dekhtay hain
{They bought a suit and then some more shopping and are back at home}
Scene 3:-(Najjo and Ammi are back at home)
Najjo tries the shirt she bought and Hussain is back
Hussain:Shopping ho gaye kya tumhari?
Najjo:Haan bhaiyya sab kucch lay liya main nay.
Hussain:Kya sab kucch lay liya Ammi?
(Ammi doesn't reply and looks tensed)
Hussain:Kya hoa ammi?koi problem hay kya?
Amnmi:Nahin beta..bas woh i am just feeling tired.Main thori deer ja kar aaram kar laiti hoon.
Hussain:Ji ammi
Ammi stands and walks away.
Hussain:Tou kya kya shopping ki hay tum nay?
Najjo:Bauhat kucch khareeda hay main nay
Hussain:Mere liyay bhi kucch liya hay kya?Main kya pehnoonga kal?
Najjo:Yeh(she shows the suit)
Hussain:It's nice
Najjo:Accha hay na?Ammi nay pasand kya hay
Hussain:Ammi nay?
Najjo:yes! aur woh keh rahi theen kay aapki pasand bilkul papa jaisi hay
Hussain:Accha...aur kucch pata chala tumhain?
Najjo:Nahin..aur Ammi say poochnay ki meri himmat nahin hay ab tou sirf aik hi tareeka hay.
Hussain:Kya tareeka?
Najjo:Aaapko yaad hay ammi ka woh box?
Hussain:Kaunsa?woh purana sa?
Najjo:Yes wohi wala..Ammi nay oos main apni purani cheezain rakhi hain shayad wahan hamain kucch mil jaye.
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Scene1:-
Ammi is sleeping on bed and Hussain with Najjo are looking for the box.
Hussain:Found it?
Najjo:Nahin bhaiyya
Hussain:Dekho aaram say karo kahin ammi ooth na jayeen
Najjo:Ok
(They finally find the box)
Hussain:Yeh hay na?
Najjo:Ji haan yeh hi hay
Hussain:Accha chalo dekhtay hain..
(Hussain goes to open the box but before he could the lights are back as Ammi turns the lamp on.Hussain gets surprised and fastputs the box back and closes the door of the cup board)
Ammi:Beta tum yahan kya ker rahay ho?
Hussain:Ammi kucch nahin
Najjo:Aapko dekhnay aye thay
Ammi:Mujhay dekhnay?
Hussain:She is saying kay hum nay socha aap ki tabiyat tou theek hay na bas dekh lain
Ammi:Haan beta ab tou theek hay
Hussain and Najjo gets out of the room
Hussain:Koi faida tou nahin hoa
Najjo:Koi baat nahin..hamain pata tou hay na kay box kahan hay ab baad main dekh laingay
Scene 2:-(Party)
The hall is full with guests every one is dressed well.Hussain and Najjo are talking to the guests and then the host comes.
Host:-I hope every one is enjoying this night...We have some thing special for you people.We are bringing the band which rules every one's heart.That's right..here comes "Jal"
"Jal groups comes out signs and all"
Najjo:Thank You bhai jaan.
Hussain:Mujhay pata tha you like Jal
Najjo:Yes,my friends like it too
Hussain:Enjoy yourself.
Host:And now the main thing we please welcome Mr.Hussain to come and and make the big announcement.
(Hussain is on the stage with the mic)
Hussain:People,first of all i would like to wish you all a very happy new Year.I worked hard in last years to accompish my dream and finally i have done it and this is the celebration party.Here i would like to announce that i am launching my company tomorrow on 1st of January.
Hussain:Wondering what's the name of the company?The name is Zia and Sons.Thank You for your time people
(Hussain gets down again,the photographers take his pics and all)
A man:-Hussain sahab...yeh Zia and sons kyon?
Hussain:What you mean?
A man:Who is Zia?
Hussain:Zia is my father.
A man:father?kahaan hain?nazar nahin aa rahay?
Hussain:Woh country say bahar hay
A man:Country say bahar?kahan
Hussain:Business meeting kay liyay gaye hain..You enjoy the party.
Scene 3:- (Party is over Ammi,Najjo and Hussain are back)
Najjo:Bhaiyya mujhay tou bauhat maza aaya
Hussain:Ammi aap nay bhi enjoy kya na?
Ammi:Haan beta
Najjo:Bhaiyya aap nay kaha tha kay aap mujhay gift dengay..dekhain main nay tou aap ko suit day dia ab aapki bari hay.
Hussain:Accha..waisay tumhara gift tumharay room main hay ja kar lay lo.
Najjo runs to her room and Hussain stands
Hussain:Ammi main bhi ja raha hoon rest karnay
Ammi:Aik minute ruko beta
Hussain:Ji amim
Ammi:Mujhay bhi tumhain kucch dena hay aaj
Hussain:mere liyay?oo thank you ammi kya hay?
Ammi:Woh cheez jo tumhain chahiyay..woh jiski tumhain is waqt sab say ziada zaroorat hay
Hussain:Kya ammi?
Ammi:Wohi chez jisay dhoondnay tum mere room main aye thay.
(Hussain is shocked)
Ammi:Haan beta oos din main nay tumhari aur Najjo ki sari batain sun li theen.Tum apnay papa ko dhoondna chahtay ho na?Dhoondo main tumhain roknay wali kaun hoti hoon
Hussain:Ammi woh..
Ammi:Tum apnay Papa say milna chahtay ho na..main jitni madad tumhari kar sakti hoon karoongi.Yeh lo tumhara gift..tumharay papa ki tasweer.
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Scene1:-
Ammi:Haan beta,main tou yehi chahti hoon kay tum khush raho.Tum jo chaho tumhain milay.Tum chahtay ho na apnay papa say milna?Yeh lo
Ammi goes away and Hussain is still confused.He checks the pic
Hussain:Papa..main aaa raha hoon
Hussain goes away
SCene 2:-
Hussain comes to Najjo
Hussain:-Najjo suno
Najjo:Yes bhai jaan?
Hussain:Mujhay tumsay kucch kehna hay..mujhay tumhain kucch batana hay
Najjo:Kya batana hay?Bolain bhai jaan
Hussain:Najjo woh Ammi...
Najjo:-Kya hoa ammi ko?
Hussain:Yeh lo...(he gives the pic to Najjo)
Najjo:What's this?
Hussain:Yeh..Yeh papa ki pic hay
Najjo:Kya??(gets emotional)
Najjo:Papa(starts crying)
Hussain:Why are you crying?
Najjo:Bhai jaan papa... papa.. main papa say milna chahti hoon
Hussain:Haan...
Hussain goes out of the room
Scene 3:-
Hussain in his room talking to himself
Hussain:Ab hoga sahi..aik baar main oos insaan say mil jaoon jis nay meri Ammi ki zindagi babbaad kar di..jis nay meri zindagi barbaad ki..main oosay kabhi nahin choroonga.nahin choroooooooonga...
The camera zooms on his face as he promised himself to take revenge and the episode ends.
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Scene1:-
Hussain is still in his room and is still talking to himself
Hussain:-I will or sure take revenge.I cannot let any one hurt my mother even if he is my father.Dad,whereever you are just remember you are not too far from me.I am coming to you to take revenge.
The camera zooms to his as he looks frusturated
Scene 2:-
Najjo comes to Ammi who is crying
Najjo:-Why are you crying ammi?
Ammi:Nothing.
Najjo:Ammi tell me what's the matter..why are you crying here?
Ammi:The matter is nothing and i am not crying i am just...
Hussain(coming):-what just?Tell us ammi why are you crying?
Ammi:i am not...
Najjo:I think i know why you are crying....
Hussain:Why?
Najjo:Papa?
{Ammi looks at Najjo}
Hussain:Oho!Ammi stop crying please.I know you love him and i will find him for you...i will put him in front of you and it will be your decision either to leave him or punish him.
Ammi:Son...
Najjo:Punish him?What are you saying?Punish your father?
Hussain:Yes!
Najjo:But why?
Hussain:He is the one who hurt my mother.He is the one who gives her the tears and now i will not leave him
Najjo:Why???????????He is my papa..if you do any thing to him i will never never never forgive you.
Najjo goes out of the room angrily and Hussain looks confused
Scene 3:-
Hussain is in his office when his secretory comes in.
Secretory:-Sir
Hussain:Yes?
Secretory:-Sir,We have got the tender
Hussain:What?That's great news then.This is really some great News.Thanks!
Secretory goes out
Hussain calls home and informs Ammi and tells them that since this is thier first big win they will be going to dinner tonight.
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Scene 1:-
Hussain is in his office and is really doing well.
(After 3 Months)
Hussain is in his office and he gets a call
Hussain:Hello? Really?Are you sure?That's great news.I'll be coming there.
Hussain cuts the phone and runs to his house
Scene 2:-
Hussain is in the house and comes to his Ammi
Hussain:Ammi,finally today i've got what i wanted.
Ammi:What you wanted?
Hussain:-Ammi,i've found the man..i've found Mr.Zia.I've found the man who gives you all the tears
(Ammi is shocked and start crying)
Hussain:Why are you crying Ammi?This is a good moment now we can punish him.We can take revenge on him for what he has done.We will never forgive him.
(Voice comes)
"Not we only you" The camera zooms and she is Najjo
Najjo:Yes bhaiyya,i am not with you in this fight.I do not want to take revenge.Woh jaisay bhi hoon..he is my papa aur Ammi bhi yehi chahti hain..hain na Ammi?
Hussain turns to Ammi:-Ammi what do you want?
Ammi does not reply and walks away crying.
Najjo:I will never let it happen!
Scene 3:-
Hussain is in the office of a detective.
Hussain:So please now tell me where is he.
Detective:-So,he is your father
Hussain:.wel...yes..he is!
Detective:-You should be happy you found your father
Hussain:Don't go on wrong side.Just do your work.Where is he?
(Detective tells him about where he found Hussain's papa and Hussain got emotional too)
Hussain(nearly crying):-What?How is this possible?
Detective:I don't know how this is possible.I've wrote the whole address here.Now go and check out yourself.
Hussain stands take the address and goes back very emotional.
*Episode Ends*
Why Hussain got emotional?Has he changed his mind?He wanted to take revenge?Where is his father?Tune in tomorrow to know more :)
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Scene1:-
Zia wakes up and all eyes are on him and he suddenly starts shouting.
Dr.Amber runs to Zia
Dr.Amber:-You all go out of the room quickly.Zia..Zia..Uncle please you sit.Nothing is happening here
(Zia looks scared)
Zia:-They will beat me.
Dr.Amber:-No they will not do any thing.You sit here.Every thing is good.You just sit here
Zia:No doctor(he cries)
Dr.Amber:-Trust me.I tell you na every thing is fine you sit here
(Zia is cool again and DR.Amber comes out of the room)
Scene2:-
Ammi(crying):-What has happened?What i've done.All this because of me.He loved me so much.He lived for me and i left him...O Lord why i did that...why why..all because of me..why God Why...
Hussain:-Ammi control yourself
Najjo:Yes,Ammi control your self you haven't done any thing.It is not because of you but because of some one else(taunting to Hussain).Ammi stop crying i am sure papa will be fine Ammi.Control yourself please
Hussain:Yes Ammi,you control yourself.I am sure papa will be fine.
Najjo:-What???Do no call him papa.YOu have no rights to.He is just my papa.You used to hate him.Now go hate him.Go take your revenge.Why are you standing here?You wanted to destroy him?See you have done it.Congrats..really Congrats!.
(Dr.Amber comes and Hussain walks away)
Dr.Amber:-What are you doing?This is a hospital why are you shouting here?
Najjo(rudely):- I know and you do not need to tell me all the time
(Najjo goes to Ammi and Dr.Amber walks away)
Scene 3:-
Hussain is outside the hospital in the lawn very sad when Dr.Amber comes to him.
Dr.Amber:-What are you doing here?
Hussain:Me..Oo nothing
Dr.Amber:-Hey..what's that?(signing to Hussain's face)
Hussain:-What?
Dr.Amber:-There is something on your face
Hussain:What?
Dr.Amber:-Hey it is coming out of your eyes
(Dr.Amber get the tear on her finger and says "This" )
Dr.Amber:-This little tear.Now tell me why are you crying here?
Hussain:-Me?No I am not crying I am just sitting here
Dr.Amber:I can see those tears.
Hussain(he burst):-What can i do??My father..
Dr.Amber:-Hey Hey..why are you crying?Who will give strength to your mother if you will break like this?You trust me i am a Doctor and i make sure that the day is not too far when your father will be fine.
Hussain:-What can i do?My father cannot talk to me.My mother and my sister..she does not want to talk to me..She hate me Doctor.You tell me what to do.You tell me what can i do?
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Scene 1:- Najjo and Hussain are back at home with Ammi who is in bad condition.Najjo takes Ammi with her to her room and Hussain follows them and as he was to step inside Najjo stops him saying.
Najjo:-No..You cannot come in!
*Hussain is shattered*
Najjo:-You cannot come in.You have no rights to come in.
*Najjo goes to close the door but Ammi shouts in pain and Hussain runs to her*
Hussain:Ammi what happened?What happened Ammi?
Najjo:Why are you showing this concern now?
Hussain:Call the doctor.
Najjo calls the doctor
Scene2:-
Doctor is checking Ammi
Hussain:What's her condition now doctor?
Najjo:-Ammi is fine now?
Doctor:-She got high blood pressure and temprature.I am giving her some tablets.Give them to her thrice a day
Hussain:Thank's doctor.I will leave you outside
*Hussain comes back and Najjo stops him from entering the room again and closes the door*
Scene 3:-
Hussain is in his room talking to himself.
Hussain:-How can i prove myself?How can i prove i am not wrong.I haven't done any thing.Why can't this World trust me?Why all this happens to me?Why i always have to prove myself?
Hussain:-O God!.Please forgive me and make my parents well God please.I beg you.You know i am right.I haven't done any thing God you know it.
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Scene 1:-
Hussain is walking and he stops outside Najjo's room.Hussain opens the door slowly and finds Najjo sleeping.Hussain goes to Ammi who is also sleeping he kisses her on the forehead and notices that she still has fever.Hussain starts putting cold strips on her forehead and Ammi is saying something while sleeping.
Ammi:-Zia,please come to me.I have forgiven you.I love you.I love you a lot.Zia please come to m.I really miss you.I love you the way you loved e.Please forgive me for my mistake.Zia please forgive me.
*Hussain talks to himself.*
Hussain:-Ammi,i promise i will bringyour love back to you.I promise you Ammi I promise you.
*Hussain goes out of the room*
Scene 2:-
(Ammi is on bed and Najjo comes
Najjo:-Najjo how are you now Ammi?
Ammi:-I am feeling well
Najjo:Ammi,i m going this weekend with my friends to watch the new film Pehla Pehla Pyar tonight ok?
Ammi:Ok beta.)
(Hussain is in the office but he feels bad so he is back at home and finds Najjo talking on phone to SABIR)
Najjo:-Yes bhaiyya,this is all because of Bhaijaan.Bhaiyya you please try to manage a better doctor for papa in America because i believe that this Dr.Amber is not goood and she is not really paying attention to papa and i think i know why she is doing this because she is with papa for long time now and no one is really paying her any thing.I find her really greedy Bhaiyya.Bhaiyya i am taking care of Ammi too.Bhaijaan doesn't care about her.He is in the office.Ok Bhaiyya Bye.
Najjo cuts the phone and turns back Hussain is standing behind with tears in his eyes.Najjo rudely turns and walks away without saying a word
Scene 3:-
Hussain is in his room really sad remembering what Najjo was saying and he remembers her saying *No One Pays Her*.He thinks himself the same thing and next he is in the Asylum.
Hussain:Where is Dr.Amber?
She comes walking
Dr.Amber:-Oh Mr.Hussain how are you?You want to meet your father?
Hussain:Not really
Dr.Amber:-Then what are you doing here?
Hussain:Dr,i want to know something.
Dr.Amber:-Something what?
Hussain:Dr i know my father is in the Asylum for years.I want to know his history if any one came to meet him in this long period and i also want to know who is paying the dues here?
Dr.Amber:-I need to check it out too because i am also new here.You come with me
Dr.Amber gives Hussain a file
DR.Amber:-Here is the file
(Hussain takes the filme)
Hussain:Thank you doctor
Dr.Amber:-It is my duty so mention not.
(Hussain walks away with file and Dr.Amber is smiling as the episode ends)
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Scene 1:-
Hussain is back at home with the file.He gets into his room and opens the file so he could read it and then he talks to himself.
Hussain:-What's this?Some one is paying all of the dues by cheque and papa is in the Asylum for 10 years?Where was he the other years?Who is paying all and who used to meat him?I need answers of my questions?Who is doing all this and why?I need the answer of my question.I will find out!.
Scene 2:-
Najjo is not in the house so Hussain gets a chance to meet Ammi.
Hussain:Ammi,how are you?
Ammi:-Son i am feeling well now.How are you?
Hussain:I am good Ammi.
Ammi:-Beta,will you do me a favour?
Hussain:Yes Ammi
Ammi:-Beta take me to your father
Hussain:-Ok Ammi
Hussain helps Ammi to stand and they walk
Scene 3:-
Hussain and Ammi are in the hospital and Hussain goes to Dr.Amber
Hussain:Dr,my mother wants to meet....
Dr.Amber:-Where is she?
Hussain:Hre
(He takes her to his mother)
Dr,Amber:-Hello Ammi!
Ammi:Hello beta
Dr.Amber:Can i call you Ammi?
Ammi:-Yes beta..why not
Dr.Amber:-Thank You.I do not have a mother but now i think i will never be able to say that.You are my mother from today..you are my mother
Ammi:-Thank You beta.....
Dr.Amber:-You come with me i will take you to Mr.Zia
(Dr.Amber takes Ammi to Zia's room she looks at him cries and is back)
Dr.Amber:-Ammi,you can come and meet him whenever you want to
Hussain:Thanks now we should go
Ammi:-Thanks beta
(Hussain and Ammi walks away and Dr.Amber is smiling)
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Scene 1:-
Ammi and Hussain are back at home and Najjo is already waiting for them looking very angry and she burst at Hussain as he steps in the house.
Najjo:-Where did you take my mother?Who are you to take her away from me?Where did you go with her?
Najjo:-Oh..now i am getting your plans.So must have taken him to hospital so she can meet papa but i want you to understand whatever you try you could never ever snatch my mother away from me..The time is not too far when she will know what you really are and...
(Before Najjo could continue talking Ammi took a step ahead and slapped Najjo.Ammi without looking at Najjo walks to her room and Hussain follows her.Najjo have tears in her eyes)
Scene 2:-
Najjo is lying on her bed crying when Hussain comes to her.Hussain goes to console her but Najjo points him and starts shouting at him for no reason.
Najjo:- Go away from me...I don't want to see you.I hate you.You made my mother hate my but remember she is my mother and she will come back to me.You try whatever you want to try but you will never ever be able to...just go out of my sight.
(Hussain goes out sad)
Scene 3:-
Hussain is sitting in his room and his mobile rings
Hussain:Hello?
Dr.Amber:-It's me
Hussain:Yes doctor?You got something to talk to me?
Dr.Amber:-Can't i just call you?
Hussain:It's ok.How are you?
Dr.Amber:-I'm fine but what's wrong with you?Every thing ok?
Hussain:Yes doctor
Dr.Amber:-Then why are you crying?
Hussain:I'm crying?No...I'm not crying
Dr.Amber:-Hey do not lie to me.I know you are crying
Hussain:How you know everything?
Dr.Amber:-I know everything..because i know magic(smiles)
Hussain:-Then please do some magic and make my father well.I cannot see my mother in this condition please please please doctor just do me this favour.
Dr.Amber:-First do not call me doctor.I'm Amber for you we are friend's now right and as far as the condition of your father goes trust me the magic will happen just keep your faith on God and your father will be fine.
Hussain:I just hope some thing like this happens soon
Dr.Amber:-It will.Now take care of yourself.Good Bye
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Scene 1:-
On the breakfast table
Hussain:-Ammi how are you feeling now?
Ammi:-I am feeling really good now beta
Hussain:-Najjo why aren't you having any thing?Have this sandwich it is your favourite and is really tasty
Ammi:-Take is Najji
(Najjo starts crying)
Najjo:-Ammi,I'm Sorry..Please forgive me
Ammi:-Come on beta...I am happy with you there is nothing wrong between you and you do not need to say Sorry to me but to someone else..to your brother
(Najjo doesn't react and walks to her room)
Ammi:-Hussain don't be sad.She is childish
Hussain:I know Ammi.I am not angry at her but the way she talk to me give me so much pain Ammi..what i've done why am i suffering from so much of pain Ammi?
Ammi:-Beta...
(Hussain gets out of the chair and walks away)
Scene 2:-
Najjo is in her room and Ammi comes
Ammi:-What happened Najjo?Why are you lying here?You're not going any where?You were supposed to go to cinema tonight and watch Pehla Pehla Pyar.
Najjo:-I am not going anywhere Ammi
Ammi:-Why?
Najjo:-I just don't want to
Ammi:-But beta..it is your favourite film
Najjo:-Ammi i just don't wanna go
Ammi:-As you wish
Scene 3:-
Hussain is at home and brings a gift for Najj
Hussain:-Najjo this is for you
Najjo:Thank You but i already have enough bengles
Ammi:-Take it Najjo
Najjo:-Ammi i do not need them
(Najjo goes away)
Ammi:-Don't be sad beta..she will understand your love one day just don't be sad
Hussain:I am not sad Ammi and i want to tell you that we will go to meet papa tomorrow.
Ammi:-Ok beta
Scene 4:-
Ammi,Najjo and Hussain are in the hospital.Ammi goes to Zia who is sitting on the bed.He looks scared seeing her.Ammi slowly touches him and takes his hand into her hand.Every one is watching the moment when suddenly Zia shouts for help and Dr.Amber runs to him.
Zia:-Dr..Dr.Amber she is going to beat me
Dr.Amber:-No No...Nothing going to happen you just take rest
All come out and every one is sad.Dr.Amber comes out
Dr.Amber:-Why all of you have a sad face?
Najjo:-What do you mean?We are not supposed to laugh.You see the condition of our father who can enjoy at this time
Dr.Amber:-Didn't you notice any thing?
Hussain:WHat?
Dr.Amber:-This is the first time he recognized me by my name.This is the first time he called me "Dr.Amber".He started recognizing people.
Ammi:-Really..Oh God..i just wish he recognizes me
Dr.Amber:-He surely will Ammi.He took the first step and the day is not too far when he will be alright.
Ammi:-This is all because of you beti.
Dr.Amber:-Nahin Ammi.This is all because of your prayers.
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Scene 1:-
Ammi,Hussain and Najjo are back in the house and Najjo is still upset on Hussain so she goes to her room.
Ammi:-Hussain,please do not mind the attitude of your sister.You know how she is
Hussain:I know Ammi
Ammi:-Beta,i got something to ask you please
Hussain:What ammi?
Ammi:-Beta,i hope you will understand my feelings
Hussain:Yes Ammi you just tell me what you want
Ammi:-Beta i want to ask you if you can...
Hussain:What ammi?
Ammi:Beta
Hussain:-Ammi,you just tell me i will do any thing for you
Ammi:-Beta i just want to ask you if you can bring your father to this house and he can live with us?
Hussain:What?
Ammi:-Beta,i miss her so much.We got a big house he can live with us in front of my eyes.I will take care of him i will do every thing for him.I will do what i was not able to do when he was with me the last time.
Hussain:Ammi..
Ammi:-Beta promise me you will not disappoint me
Hussain:Ammi i will try my best
Ammi:-Thank You beta!
Ammi goes away
Scene 2:-
Hussain in his room thinking to himself
Hussain:-Ammi want me to bring Papa to this house but she doesn't know what i am thinking these days.I really want to know who is the man behind all this.Who was paying all of the dues and everything?I really want to know this and i think i know how can i do that.Ammi,i will try my best to do this
Scene 3:-
Hussain is in the Asylum and he gets with Dr.Amber
Dr.Amber:-How are you?
Hussain:I am fine.How are you doctor?
Dr.Amber:-I am good too.So,what you doing here today?
Hussain:Dr,i need to ask you some thing
Dr.Amber:-What thing?
Hussain:Ammi wants...
Dr.Amber:What does she want?
Hussain:She want me to bring papa to house
Dr.Amber:O
Hussain:And i know i need your permission for that.
Dr.Amber:Not mine but you need some one'e else permission tooo
Hussain:Whose?
Dr.Amber:The person who admittded your father here
Hussain:Who admitted him?
Dr.Amber:-I don't know this i myself need to ask my seniors.You wait here i will be back
Scene 4:-
Amber is talking to her senior
Amber:-Sir,so what can we do?
Sir:-Look Amber,i've tried calling him but he is not responding me
Amber:So what option do we have now?
Sir:-I think we can allow him to take his father with him and you know the conditions
Amber:Thank You sir
Scene 5:-
Amber comes out to Hussain
Hussain:So can i?
Amber:Yes you can
Hussain:Thank You doctor..Thank You ..you always help me.You know what i am ..you understand me..Thank You
Amber:-But you know the man who admitted him here is not in contact with us any more.He has paid everything in advance and i want to tell you that whenever he returns you will need his permission to keep your father with yourself.
Hussain:What?
Dr.Amber:-This is a rule
Hussain:Ok.Thank YOu doctor.
Dr.Amber:-One more thing
Hussain:What thing?
Dr.Amber:-You will need a doctor at your house everytime to keep an eye on your father
Hussain:I know one doctor
Dr.Amber:-Who?
Hussain:...You!!
Dr.Amber:-What are you saying?
Hussain:-Come in my life doctor...come in my life...
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Scene 1:-
Hussain:-Dr,please come in my life!!
Dr.Amber:-What?
Hussain:-Dr,please come in my life doctor.I loveyou so much
Dr.Amber:-You know what you're saying?Are you in your senses?
Hussain:-Yes,Doctor.Do you remember what you said once?You told me to wait and i waited and now this is the right moment doctor.I know you are the only one who understand my feelings and we will be so happy with each other.
Dr.Amber:-That's enough
Hussain:-What enough Dr?My love is true i love you doctor.Don't you have the same feelings for me?
Dr.Amber:Just shut up!
Dr.Amber walks away and Hussain is still standing
Scene 2:-
Hussain is back at home sitting in his room thinking to himself.
Hussain:-What were i doing?What happened to me?I did not really want to say that to Dr.Amber.WHat was wrong with me?
Suddenly Ammi enters the room
Ammi:-Son!
Hussain:-Yes Ammi?
Ammi:-So you were in the hospital?What did Dr.Amber said?
Hussain:-Ammi,i did not go to the hospital
Ammi:-Why?
Hussain:Ammi i was busy with some other work
Ammi:-Beta you have phone number of Dr.Amber?Please call her?
"Hussain dials the number and gives the phone to Ammi"
Before Ammi could say something Amber starts from the other side "Do not try to call me ever again because i do not want to talk to you Hussain" she cuts the phone
Hussain:-What happened Ammi?
Ammi:-Son what happened between you two?
Hussain:Between us?
Ammi:-Yes
Hussain:Nothing Ammi
Ammi:Do not lie to me.Whta happened between you two?
*Hussain tells the whole story to Ammi and both are verye motional*
Ammi:-Hussain why you did not tell me about your love first?Why did you propose her?
Hussain:-Ammi i never knew i was in love with her
Ammi:-Beta now i will go and talk to her and she will understand it.
Hussain:-Thank You Ammi!
Scene 3:- Ammi is in the hospital and she goes to meet Dr.Amber.
Ammi:-Hi Beti how are you?
Dr.Amber:-I am fine Ammi.How are you?
Ammi:-I am also fine beti.I need to ask you something
Dr.Amber:-What?
Ammi:-Beti now there is a strong bond between us so why can't we meet your family?
Dr.Amber have a sad look
Ammi:-What happened Beti?
Dr.Amber:-Ammi,i have no family.My mother and father died in an accident and now i live with my Uncle and Aunt.
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Scene 1:-
Ammi is looking for Najjo and finds her sitting in her room.
Ammi:-So there you are.What are you doing sitting here alone?
Najjo:-Nothing Ammi.I was just..nothing so you got to say something?
Ammi:-Yes beti.I need to tell you something
Najjo:What thing?
Ammi:-Beti,we are going somewhere today
Najjo:Where?
Ammi:-We are going to Amber's house/
Najjo:-Dr.Amber's house?But Why Ammi?
Ammi:-We got a proposal?
Najjo:-I am confused Ammi.What proposal
Ammi:-A Marriage Proposal.Yes,she is going to be your bhabhi!
Najjo:What(she stands)
Ammi:-Aren't you happy
Najjo:-Happy?No way.This cannot happen?
Ammi:-Why can't?
Najjo:-I do not like her.She is a mean woman
Ammi:-Have you gone mad?
Najjo:-I am speaking in all of my senses and i want you to stop all this.Dr.Amber is nothing.She is just a.......
*Hussain is standing at the door Najjo looks at him and stops*
Ammi:-Najjo you are all wrong
Najjo:-Ammi do whatever you want to go but i am not coming with you
*Ammi turns back and finds Hussain standing at the door who then walks away and Ammi follows him*
Scene 2:-
Hussain is sitting in the lawn and Ammi comes to him.
Ammi:-Hussai don't be sad
Hussain:-I am not sad Ammi i am not sad
Ammi:-Then what's wrong with your face?
Hussain:I am just thinking about my destiny.Where am i going?I have no happiness in my life.
Ammi:-Why are you saying this son?
Hussain:-After so much of difficulties there was a girl who brought some happiness on my face and now...
Voice:-There was..that girl is still here
*Camera rolls and Dr.Amber is there*
Ammi:-Dr.how are you?
Dr.Amber:-I am good Ammi and you go let me talk to him
Ammi walks away
Dr.Amber:-Why did you say i was in your life?I am in you life and i always will be.When you called me last night i was all thinking about you.I was not able to sleep and this is when i came to know that i have the same feelings as you do.
Hussain looks at her
Hussain:-But this is not the problem
Dr.Amber:-What's the problem then?
Hussain:Najjo
Dr.Amber:-Your sister?What is wrong with her?
Hussain:-She..She just...
Dr.Amber:-Why are you spoiling your mood?
Hussain gets up and goes inside
Scene 3:-(Dinner Table)
Ammi:-So Najjo you're coming with us tomorrow right?
Najjo:-Ammi,i've said it.I am not coming.I am not happy with all this
Ammi:-Why are you doing all this now Najjo?Why are you creating problems?
Najjo:-I am creating problems?You're wrong Ammi.I say it tonight if Dr.Amber comes to this house she will bring nothng with her but just problems.
*Najjo gets up and goes to her room*
Ammi:-Hussain you just do not worry.We can go to Dr.Amber's house
Hussain:No Ammi.If my sister is not happy with this why should i marry i will not marry.
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Scene 1:-
Hussain:-No Ammi i will not marry Dr.Amber.I cannot go against my sister.I love her so much.She is my life and i cannot do this.
Ammi:-But son your happiness?What about your smiles?You need someone in your life.Your life is just a mess and you need some one to bring you out of this and you know yourself Amber is the one made for you then why are you doing this now?
Hussain:You know Ammi why i am doing this.I love Amber this is true but i love my family too.I have to think about you about papa about Najjo every one and this is my final decision Ammi i am not going to marry Amber.
Hussain walks away
Scene 2:-
Ammi is in her room thinking to herself.
Ammi:-Why is all this happening?Why isn't God giving happiness to my son?Why they always have to suffer?No this will not happen.
Ammi stands picks up the phone and called Amber's uncle and informed him that they are coming for Rishta.
Ammi then goes to Najjo.
Ammi:-Najjo this is the last time i am asking you.Why aren't you happy with your brother?
Najjo:-Ammi you know.You asked me i said i will go with you everywhere now do not ask me to be happy please.
Ammi:-Ok.Get ready we are going to Amber's house in an hour.
Ammi then goes to Hussain
Ammi:-Hussain you just get ready we are going somewhere
Hussain:-But where?
Ammi:Now the matter is in my hand.
Scene 3:-
Ammi is ready and Najjo comes to her.
Najjo:-I am ready Ammi.Now shouldn't we go?
Ammi:-Yes.Where is your bro
Najjo:-I don't know.You asked me is why i am going i am not happy with Bhai jaan getting married to that doctor.
*The camera rolls and Hussain hears it*.
Hussain:Ammi you going there...
Ammi:-Yes beta
Hussain:-But why?When i told you not to
Ammi:-Son for your happiness.
Hussain:My happiness is not in that
Hussain goes out takes his car and drives away and Ammi is confused in the room.
