Khataa(Soap Opera)

Lol,believe it..today is the 1st episode.. Monday-Thursday :)..please read it.... and only i will make it go further plz...

Scene 1:-First it shows a house and we hear the voice "Kahaan Ho" and the face shows and it's an old woman with a great personality.

Amma:-Kahaan ho tum?

Voice of payal is heard and as the camera rolls it slowly shows a girl coming and it's Najjo.

Najjo:-Kya hoa amma?

Amma:-Najjo main nay tum say kya kaha tha?

Najjo:-Kya kaha tha?

Amma:-Kucch yaad rehta hay kya tumhain?

Najjo:-Sab kucch

Amma:-Lo bhala..sab kucch tou bhool jati ho tum

Najjo:Laikin main yeh tou nahin bhooli na kay aap meri Amma ho.

Amma:Tou bhool jao na(loo's angry)

Najjo(with love):-Kaisy baatain ker raho ho aap.Accha bolo kya kaam hay?

Amma:-Tumhain aaj khalaa jaan kay ghar chalna hay na?

Najjo:-Amma main nahin ja rahi.Mujhay aaj parloud jana hay aap Bhaiyya kay saath chalay jao.

Amma:-Tumharay bhaiyya janay kahan hongay.

Scene 2:-A man is shown talking on mobile his face is turned and he turns back and a dashing man.He cuts the phone and a voice is heard "Sir" as the secret opens that the man who was on phone was Sabir

Sabir:Yes?

Colegue:-Sir,the file is here.

Sabir:Ok issay yahan rakho aur tum jao

The worker exits the room

The phone rings and Sabir picks it up

Sabir:Who's this?

Amma:-Beta main hoon.

Sabir:Koi kaam hay kya amma?

Amma:Beta aaj tumhain mere saath Khala Jaan kay ghar chalna hay.

Sabir:Amma mujhay tou kaam hay

Amma:Abhi mere saath chalna bhi tou zaroori hay na

Sabir:Laikin(knock on the door and Sabir says OK to the lady standing outside the door and Amma thinks he said OK to her so she cuts the phone)

Sabir:So?Kya kaam hay?

The Lady:-Sir,some one sent these papers for you.

Sabir:Thank You.

Sabir checked the papers smiles as the scene ends

Third Scene:-Sabir comes back to house and Amma is already waiting for him.

Amma:-Chalo beta

Sabir:-ok..chalain

(Episode Ends)

I will continue 2nd episode tomorrow and i hope i will get a +ve feedback.I think this shows how good director i can be,lol.







P.S:-If you people cannot understand Urdu i can even post in English.Reply in feedback section.