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new_beau

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Posted 04 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Posted 04 Apr 2006

Doctor Sam says
aao main inhain tumharay dil main utaar doon...
Posted 04 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Kiya Hua ? Ghazal Pasand nahin aayee kiya ?
Posted 04 Apr 2006

Doctor Sam says
ghazal achi hey, lekin facts par mabni hey...
nazm k alfaaz pyaray hain...


aanay wala hey wo meri zindagi main mustaqil,
a shab-e-aawargi, baydaariyan khatray main hain...
howww sweeeeeeeeet...
Posted 04 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Mujhay Bhi yehi sub say ziyada pasand hay..Magar First Shair bhi Bohat Unique hay



Woh Nazm nahin hay ..Meray Iss Topic ka Introduction hay ...Mainn nay woh lines mainn yeh kaha hay keh iss topic mainn aisi poetry hogi keh jo aap logonn nay Bohat kam ya bilkul nahin suni hogi
Posted 04 Apr 2006

Doctor Sam says
well... aap ka jo bhi matlab hey, mujhe wo lines kafi achi lagi hain aor maan lain k wo aik achi nazm hey...
Posted 04 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Chalo Mainn uss ko Apnay DEEWAAN mainn shamil ker loon ga...
Posted 05 Apr 2006

new_beau says

Posted 05 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Posted 05 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Last shair descrides about current conditions in the world.
Posted 05 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Posted 05 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Posted 05 Apr 2006

Doctor Sam says
new_beau said:

Chalo Mainn uss ko Apnay DEEWAAN mainn shamil ker loon ga...



sure...
Posted 05 Apr 2006

Doctor Sam says
new_beau said:




nice.. ye main ne parhi hui hey...
Posted 05 Apr 2006

Doctor Sam says
new_beau said:



ye achi hey aor taqreeban sabhi shair achay hain...
Posted 05 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Coming More Unique ones Soon InshaAllah
Posted 05 Apr 2006

Doctor Sam says
jee zaroor... nice sharing...
Posted 05 Apr 2006

Ashii says
ae shab e awaargi bedaariyan khatre mei hein


takht e daar pe pohonche hein to ab sochte hein
hum kahan aap ki chahat mei chale aae hein



woh larki
Posted 07 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Haann Na...Rishtay mainn woh JAan Hamaari Lagti hay
Posted 07 Apr 2006

Doctor Sam says
Khushbu aik aawara jhonka. is jhonkay ko ghairay kon
kese duniya ko batlaaoon Tum hotay ho mere kon....
Posted 07 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Bata dou kisi din .....


new_beau said:



Yeh kisi ko pasand nahin aaya
Posted 07 Apr 2006

Doctor Sam says
kuch khaas nahi...
Posted 07 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Chalo ..theek hay...

Next are coming soon
Posted 07 Apr 2006

new_beau says

Posted 15 Apr 2006

Doctor Sam says
bohat aala... ye kis ki ghazal hey...

main na kehta tha k lazim hey nigah bhar fasla...
Posted 16 Apr 2006

new_beau says
"Kitni Nazdeek hay Saansainn Tumhari"
"Bhala Hum kis tarah Palkainn Uthayenn"
Posted 16 Apr 2006

Doctor Sam says
next....
Posted 16 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Coming soon InshaAllah
Posted 16 Apr 2006

Doctor Sam says
waiting....
Posted 16 Apr 2006

new_beau says
Doctor Sam said:

bohat aala... ye kis ki ghazal hey...

main na kehta tha k lazim hey nigah bhar fasla...



Yeh "Shakil Jaazib " ki kitaab mainn say hay

"Jub Saans mainn Girhainn perti hainn"
Posted 16 Apr 2006

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