Doctor Sam said:ye nazm Ahmad Fraz ne Pakistan ki golden jubliee pe likhi thi aor usmain ye qita bhi tha
ab tan ki nagri raakh hui
aor mann ka maya hath nahi
ye nisf sadi ka qissa hey
do chaar baras ki baat nahi...
aankhon main chupaye.......
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Doctor Sam said:i m removing the poem.. kisi ne bilkul theek aitraaz kiya hey is nazm k aik hissay pe...
Doctor Sam said:aik Qita main Hazrat Maryam aor Hazrat Eesa Aleh salam ka zikr tha, some one pointed out k anbiyaaye karaam ka zikr kisi bhi tarah aise karna munasib nahi.. mujhe khud bhi ghair-munasib laga.. thts y usko edit kiya..