Ab kis ka jashn manatay ho...!

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Doctor Sam

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Posted 06 Aug 2006

veer_zaara says


nice
Posted 07 Aug 2006

nahin manatay


waisay v nice
Posted 07 Aug 2006

Doctor Sam says
ye nazm main ne bohat arsa pehle parhi thi..aor mujhe is ne acha khasa mutasir kiya tha... so true...
Posted 07 Aug 2006

cutefriend says
Posted 08 Aug 2006

Ashii says
love this poem
i read it abt 5/6 yrs ago,,, and every aug 14th or march 23rd mujhe yaad aa jati hai
Posted 09 Aug 2006

Doctor Sam says
ye nazm Ahmad Fraz ne Pakistan ki golden jubliee pe likhi thi aor usmain ye qita bhi tha

ab tan ki nagri raakh hui
aor mann ka maya hath nahi
ye nisf sadi ka qissa hey
do chaar baras ki baat nahi...

aankhon main chupaye.......
...

Posted 09 Aug 2006

new_beau says
Posted 10 Aug 2006

Doctor Sam says
aapko kya hua hey jee..?
Posted 10 Aug 2006

new_beau says
idrak hua hay sachayee ka
Posted 11 Aug 2006

ye bhi mutasrin main shamil ho gaye hain na
Posted 12 Aug 2006

Ashii says
Doctor Sam said:

ye nazm Ahmad Fraz ne Pakistan ki golden jubliee pe likhi thi aor usmain ye qita bhi tha

ab tan ki nagri raakh hui
aor mann ka maya hath nahi
ye nisf sadi ka qissa hey
do chaar baras ki baat nahi...

aankhon main chupaye.......
...


sahi
hum bhi soch rahe the k kuch kam hai
Posted 12 Aug 2006

Doctor Sam says
i m removing the poem.. kisi ne bilkul theek aitraaz kiya hey is nazm k aik hissay pe...
Posted 12 Aug 2006

chandbabu says
cool
Posted 17 Aug 2006

Doctor Sam says
kya cool hey babu jee..
Posted 17 Aug 2006

new_beau says
Waiting for edited version
Posted 17 Aug 2006

Doctor Sam says
nazm is back..
Posted 18 Aug 2006

Ashii says
Doctor Sam said:

i m removing the poem.. kisi ne bilkul theek aitraaz kiya hey is nazm k aik hissay pe...


konse hisse pe kya eitraz hua hai
Posted 19 Aug 2006

kyun remove kiya kya kia
Posted 19 Aug 2006

Doctor Sam says
aik Qita main Hazrat Maryam aor Hazrat Eesa Aleh salam ka zikr tha, some one pointed out k anbiyaaye karaam ka zikr kisi bhi tarah aise karna munasib nahi.. mujhe khud bhi ghair-munasib laga.. thts y usko edit kiya..
Posted 19 Aug 2006

new_beau says
ok.....
Posted 19 Aug 2006

Ashii says
Doctor Sam said:

aik Qita main Hazrat Maryam aor Hazrat Eesa Aleh salam ka zikr tha, some one pointed out k anbiyaaye karaam ka zikr kisi bhi tarah aise karna munasib nahi.. mujhe khud bhi ghair-munasib laga.. thts y usko edit kiya..


okk got it
but Hazrat Essa and Hazrat MAryam are 2 references from history
maseehai aur pakbazi k

aise poems edit honi lagi to hamare Iqbal tak ki shairi 3/4 reh jae gi
Posted 22 Aug 2006

chandbabu says
Posted 22 Aug 2006

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