Ab kis ka jashn manatay ho...!

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Posted 06 Aug 2006

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nice

Posted 07 Aug 2006

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nahin manatay

waisay v nice

Posted 07 Aug 2006

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ye nazm main ne bohat arsa pehle parhi thi..aor mujhe is ne acha khasa mutasir kiya tha... so true...

Posted 07 Aug 2006

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love this poem
i read it abt 5/6 yrs ago,,, and every aug 14th or march 23rd mujhe yaad aa jati hai

Posted 09 Aug 2006

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ye nazm Ahmad Fraz ne Pakistan ki golden jubliee pe likhi thi aor usmain ye qita bhi tha

ab tan ki nagri raakh hui
aor mann ka maya hath nahi
ye nisf sadi ka qissa hey
do chaar baras ki baat nahi...

aankhon main chupaye.......
...

Posted 09 Aug 2006

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Posted 10 Aug 2006

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aapko kya hua hey jee..?

Posted 10 Aug 2006

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idrak hua hay sachayee ka

Posted 11 Aug 2006

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ye bhi mutasrin main shamil ho gaye hain na

Posted 12 Aug 2006

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Doctor Sam said:
ye nazm Ahmad Fraz ne Pakistan ki golden jubliee pe likhi thi aor usmain ye qita bhi tha

ab tan ki nagri raakh hui
aor mann ka maya hath nahi
ye nisf sadi ka qissa hey
do chaar baras ki baat nahi...

aankhon main chupaye.......
...

sahi
hum bhi soch rahe the k kuch kam hai

Posted 12 Aug 2006

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i m removing the poem.. kisi ne bilkul theek aitraaz kiya hey is nazm k aik hissay pe...

Posted 12 Aug 2006

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cool

Posted 17 Aug 2006

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kya cool hey babu jee..

Posted 17 Aug 2006

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Waiting for edited version

Posted 17 Aug 2006

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nazm is back..

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Doctor Sam said:
i m removing the poem.. kisi ne bilkul theek aitraaz kiya hey is nazm k aik hissay pe...

konse hisse pe kya eitraz hua hai

Posted 19 Aug 2006

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kyun remove kiya kya kia

Posted 19 Aug 2006

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aik Qita main Hazrat Maryam aor Hazrat Eesa Aleh salam ka zikr tha, some one pointed out k anbiyaaye karaam ka zikr kisi bhi tarah aise karna munasib nahi.. mujhe khud bhi ghair-munasib laga.. thts y usko edit kiya..

Posted 19 Aug 2006

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ok.....

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Doctor Sam said:
aik Qita main Hazrat Maryam aor Hazrat Eesa Aleh salam ka zikr tha, some one pointed out k anbiyaaye karaam ka zikr kisi bhi tarah aise karna munasib nahi.. mujhe khud bhi ghair-munasib laga.. thts y usko edit kiya..

okk got it
but Hazrat Essa and Hazrat MAryam are 2 references from history
maseehai aur pakbazi k

aise poems edit honi lagi to hamare Iqbal tak ki shairi 3/4 reh jae gi

Posted 22 Aug 2006

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