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Doctor Sam

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no one is going to comment on writing...Ok..

ye meri bohat pasandeeda ghazal hey..

Posted 11 Sep 2006

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sachhhiiiiiii

Posted 11 Sep 2006

Doctor Sam says

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haan na...

Posted 12 Sep 2006

kiran says

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very nice

Posted 12 Sep 2006

Doctor Sam says

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shukriya...

Posted 13 Sep 2006

Doctor Sam says

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ba-zoq log kahan hain...

Posted 14 Sep 2006

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yup achhi hai
waisay hum nahin thay

Posted 14 Sep 2006

veer_zaara says

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why should not say anything about the writing
do u mind dear?????

Posted 14 Sep 2006

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waisey yeh faridi saab kaun hain pehli baar naam suna hia

waisey poem is ok

writing is awesome

Posted 14 Sep 2006

Doctor Sam says

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mujhe to ye ghazal bohat pasand hey..
sabhi sher achay hain, lekin khas tor pe last wala.. bohat khoobsoorat hey... bohat sweeet...

Posted 16 Sep 2006

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tha kon

"Meray Seenay pay Saari raat ik Talwaar rehti hay"
"Tumharay Ghar kay baher roz kis ki Car rehti hay"

Posted 17 Sep 2006

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