ik baar kaho

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Posted 15 Oct 2006

cutefriend says
really nice
Posted 15 Oct 2006

Posted 15 Oct 2006

mmja says
zabardasr jee
Posted 15 Oct 2006

sun_shine says
thanks all of you
Posted 16 Oct 2006

mmja says
you welcome mem
Posted 16 Oct 2006

cutefriend says
welcome ss
Posted 17 Oct 2006

sun_shine says
my pleasure
Posted 18 Oct 2006

javad says
nice..
Posted 18 Oct 2006

mmja says
kisi ki ankh say sapnay chura kay kuch nahin milta
manderon say churaghon ko bhuja kay kuch nahin milta
koi aik adh sapna ho to phir acha bhi lagta hai
hazaroon khuwab ankhoon main saja kay kuch nahin milta
sakoon unko nahin milta kabhi pardes ja kay
jnihay apnay watan say dil laga kay kuch nahin milta
yeh acha hai kay apis kay bharam na totnay payeen
kabhi apnay dostoon ko azma kay kuch nahin milta
mughay askar sataroon say he awaz at hai
kisi kay hijar main nendayn gunwan kay kuch nahin milta
jighar ho jaye ga chalni yeh ankhayn khoon ho jayengi
wasi befez loghoon say nibha kar kuch nahin milta
                                                                        (WASI SHA)
Posted 18 Oct 2006

sun_shine says
excellent poetry
Posted 19 Oct 2006

nikama says
kya bat he jawad jee
Posted 19 Oct 2006

yeh tu song hai AHMED JAHANZEIB KA
Posted 19 Oct 2006

danie says
sun_shine said:



Sab log is poetry ki itni tareeph kar rahe hei.
Plz ise english alphabets mei likh kar dein...Plz
Posted 19 Oct 2006

mmja says
excellent poetry
thanko je itne talyian na bajayen mughay sharim a rahe hai
Posted 19 Oct 2006

mmja says
kya bat he jawad jee
thanko yara
Posted 19 Oct 2006

this is a songggggggggggggg
Posted 20 Oct 2006

mmja says
ahmed janhzeb ke bat to nahin kar rahay kyia
Posted 21 Oct 2006

nahi i m talking abt mmja
Posted 22 Oct 2006

mmja says
aray woh to chote mote poetry nahin gata woh to boht class ka bhand hai
Posted 24 Oct 2006

sun_shine says
hum ghoom chukay basti bann mein
ek aas ki phans liye mann mein
koi saajan ho,koi pyaara ho
koi deepak ho,koi taara ho
jab jeevan raat andhairi ho
ek baar kaho tum meri ho

jab sawan badal chaye ho
jab phagan phool khilaye ho
jab chanda roop lutata ho
jab suraj dhoop nahata ho
ya shaam ne basti ghaeri ho
ek baar kaho tum meri ho

haa dil ka daaman phaila hain
kyun gori ka dil maila hain
hum kab tak peet kay dhokay main
tum kab tak dur jharokay main
kab deed se dil ko sairi ho
ek baar kaho tum meri ho

kya jhagra sood khasaray kaa
yeh kaam nahi banjaray kaa
sab sona rupa lay jaye
yeh dunya, dunya lay jaye
tum ek mujhay behtairi ho
ek baar kaho tum meri hoo
ek baar kaho tum meri ho
ibn-e-inshaa
Posted 04 Nov 2006

danie says

Really Nice. Thanx SSji.

I dont know much about Ibn e insha.
Is he same poet who wrote-
Insha ji suno ab kooch karo
Is shahar mei dil ka lagana kya....
Posted 04 Nov 2006

mmja says
hummmmmm enlish ver bhe a geyia
Posted 05 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
thanks "insha jee utho" is also written by Ibn-e-inshaa jee.
Posted 05 Nov 2006

mmja says
thanks "insha jee utho" is also written by Ibn-e-inshaa jee.
yeh to boht zabardast hai
Posted 06 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
Posted 06 Nov 2006

mmja says
oh boht boht thanko je apke wajah say kafe time kay bad dobara padrnay ka maza a geyia
Posted 07 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
most welcome
Posted 07 Nov 2006

mmja says
mohabton main har aik lamha wasal hoga yeh tay huwa tha
bichadr kay bhe aik dosray ka khyial hoga yeh tay huwa tha
wohe huwa na badaltay musim main tonay mugh ko bhula deyia
koi bhe rut ho na chaton ko zawal hoga yeh tay huwa tha
yeh kyia kay sansayn okhadr gaye hain safar kay aghaz he say yaroo
koi bhe thak kay rastay main nanidhal hoga yeh tay huwa tha
juda huway hain to kyia huwa,phir yehe to dastor zindge hai
judayion main na qurbaton ka milal hoga yeh tay huwa tha
chalo kay faizan kashteyion ko jala dayngay gumnam sahilon par
kay ab yahan say na wapse ka sawal hoga yeh tay huwa tha

                                                                          (faizan arif)
Posted 08 Nov 2006

danie says

Very Nice Sir ji
Posted 08 Nov 2006

sun_shine says
chalo kay faizan kashteyion ko jala dayngay gumnam sahilon par
kay ab yahan say na wapse ka sawal hoga yeh tay huwa tha

very good
Posted 08 Nov 2006

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