~ Chhipkali ~

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Posted 25 Feb 2007

cutefriend says
wah wah chipkali ka kiya use hai paaa jeeeeee

loo ab se apun nakli ki chipkali apni pocket main rakhye ga
     
Posted 25 Feb 2007

new_beau says
Yeh Poem mainn nay 1991 mainn Likhi thi ..when I was in 9th Class
Posted 25 Feb 2007

Doctor Sam says
9th class main...

warna pehle hum Tareef karne lagay thay...
Posted 25 Feb 2007

hi hi inna ghair shairana title
Posted 25 Feb 2007

main nay tumhari adhi poetry tou design ker di hai
but cant post here
Posted 25 Feb 2007

Ashii says
tobbbaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!!
chipaki stuff karwa k golden frame mei present karne ka dil kar raha hai aap ko




darr to hum ko bhi lagta hai
par cheekh maar k baagne ki hadd tak
kuri chalak si
Posted 25 Feb 2007

new_beau says
aaho...kuri chalaak si
Posted 25 Feb 2007

Doctor Sam says
toba
Posted 25 Feb 2007

new_beau said:

Yeh Poem mainn nay 1991 mainn Likhi thi ..when I was in 9th Class



Ap bachpan se e yehi kuch socha krty the.

shukar hai hum itna nai dartay k aik adad nazm likhi ja saky us per.
kuri waqai chalak c.
Posted 26 Feb 2007

new_beau says
Hum aur bhi bohat si baatonn per poem likh detay hotay hainn...Koi baat tou kerainn aap
Posted 26 Feb 2007

ap drs per poem likhain na kabhi.
Posted 26 Feb 2007

new_beau says
Yaani aap ki khawhish hay keh mujhay Ghar say hi jootay pernay start jo jayenn
Posted 26 Feb 2007

~Fragi~ says
kisi ney hum ko kaha tha k yeh bhi eik kali hoti hai
Posted 26 Feb 2007

us kisi ne waqai samjhdari ki bat ki thi baba jee. ye waqai kali hoti ha bas kabhi phool nai ban pati. hai na?
Posted 26 Feb 2007

new_beau said:

Yaani aap ki khawhish hay keh mujhay Ghar say hi jootay pernay start jo jayenn




dil ki bat asay e zuban pe ati ha.
maine ye thori kaha drs k khilaf qalam uthaen. ap tareef b to kar sakty hain na.

maslan

dr kitnay achay hain
hum ko teeka lagaty hain
hum ko peer hoti hai
dr ko fee milti ha

dr asay maseeha hain jo khud zakhm dete hain khud marham lagaty hain
Posted 26 Feb 2007

~Fragi~ says
Asman se Tapki said:

us kisi ne waqai samjhdari ki bat ki thi baba jee. ye waqai kali hoti ha bas kabhi phool nai ban pati. hai na?



han yehi porey words they tabhi bhi
apko kaisey pata

shaid aap ney hee kaha tha yeh

Posted 26 Feb 2007

aray maine apse chipkali ki baten kab ki?
maine to asa is liay kaha k bai gulaab jaman may b to gulab nahin hota na.
Posted 26 Feb 2007


Title parh kar    

Nice poem...

Posted 26 Feb 2007

new_beau says
Thanks Rehan
Posted 26 Feb 2007

~Fragi~ says
Asman se Tapki said:

aray maine apse chipkali ki baten kab ki?
maine to asa is liay kaha k bai gulaab jaman may b to gulab nahin hota na.



wohi na mein bhi kahooon k mujhe tu kisi aur ney yeh abat kahee thee

waisey batoon mein app sey koi nahi jeet sakta
Posted 26 Feb 2007

chalo g shukar khuda ka kisi field may to hum jeety hain.
Posted 26 Feb 2007

new_beau says
perhayee mainn haar....baatonn main jeet
Posted 26 Feb 2007

parhna likhna na b aey baten ani chaen uncle jee.
Posted 26 Feb 2007

new_beau says
aaho aaho...I do have samajh
Posted 26 Feb 2007

shukar ha. chalo g dair ayad darust ayad.

apnay dr. pe koi achi [poem likhany ka socha phir?
Posted 26 Feb 2007

new_beau says
Hisaab lagaata hoonn
Posted 26 Feb 2007

cutefriend says
new_beau said:

Yeh Poem mainn nay 1991 mainn Likhi thi ..when I was in 9th Class



woh tu achi baat hai per
woh larki kon thi
Posted 26 Feb 2007

new_beau said:

Hisaab lagaata hoonn



asa karen maine jo shahkar nazam kahi hai na usi ko mukamal kar dain
Posted 26 Feb 2007

~Fragi~ says
Asman se Tapki said:

chalo g shukar khuda ka kisi field may to hum jeety hain.



nahi aksar mein sochta hoon k aap kee baatoon mein bohat depth hoti hai, phir jo aap quotes etc k thru baat kartee hoo tu woh baat khud ba khud mukamal ho jatee hai
Posted 26 Feb 2007

baba jee main moti ho jau gi
Posted 26 Feb 2007

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