kiran said:very nice
Aasera said:awww
bohatttt pyari dil ko cho janay wali poem hay
spec yah linez ;
per khwaab too khwaab heyn
khwaaboon pey koii zoor naheyn mera
naqsh buntey aa rahey heyn
sadyoon sey tera
ban key bahtey heyn ansou per mujhey
jalla naheyn saktey
dukh merey mujhey harra naheyn saktey
dukh mere mujhe hara nahin saktay
QUEEN VICTORIA said:v nice sagar
hehe
)Aasera said:waisay main jab parhti hon kuch to mujhe JO KUCH ZIADA ACHA lagta hay (nazam/ghazal/Sher main say) usko likhna zarori feel hota hay. Aadat hay :D achi ya buri dont know
To mujhe jab jab moka mila main zaroor bataon gi kay mujhe kia kuch acha laga and kia kuch nahin
( but agar aap tankeed par mind kar saktay hain to sirf jo acha lagey ga wo hi bataon gi
KING OF JB said:wah wah sagar jani nice one
cutefriend said:zaberdast
London_Girl said:wow
