A Poem For You

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May Be

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I wonder...
would things have been different
if I had written a poem for you...
like you wanted me to?
Words to immortalize
the passion that engulfed us...
the sacred fire burning within...
the synergy we created
that seemed indestructible.
Would things have been different?
I started several times...
Once, you read a part of it,
and smiled...
I said it wasn't finished
and it was true.
My poem was an ongoing one
for you.
But you never asked again...
Instead...
You heard me say goodbye
when I said hello...
and you turned into stone.
You saw in me
those who left before...
without a word.
I wish you would have seen...
me.
My poem for you was more than words;
it was the way I looked at you,
the way I touched you,
the way I held you,
the way I let you in my heart
without reservations...
where you reigned supreme.
Did you see that?
Or did you only see
those who said goodbye -
while I said hello...
Posted 20 Sep 2007

eshajam says
wah. v.Nice
Posted 20 Sep 2007

~tasha~ says
nice work
Posted 20 Sep 2007

Posted 20 Sep 2007

Darkjal says
Nice
Posted 21 Sep 2007

nice job
Posted 21 Sep 2007

~tasha~ says
americangirl said:

nice job



welcome back ag
Posted 22 Sep 2007

Miss mine says


   
Posted 22 Sep 2007

~CHANDNI~ says
May Be said:

I wonder...
would things have been different
if I had written a poem for you...
like you wanted me to?
Words to immortalize
the passion that engulfed us...
the sacred fire burning within...
the synergy we created
that seemed indestructible.
Would things have been different?
I started several times...
Once, you read a part of it,
and smiled...
I said it wasn't finished
and it was true.
My poem was an ongoing one
for you.
But you never asked again...
Instead...
You heard me say goodbye
when I said hello...
and you turned into stone.
You saw in me
those who left before...
without a word.
I wish you would have seen...
me.
My poem for you was more than words;
it was the way I looked at you,
the way I touched you,
the way I held you,
the way I let you in my heart
without reservations...
where you reigned supreme.
Did you see that?
Or did you only see
those who said goodbye -
while I said hello...




Posted 23 Sep 2007

cutefriend says
Posted 24 Sep 2007

May Be says
eshajam said:

wah. v.Nice


thanks
Posted 25 Sep 2007

May Be says
~tasha~ said:

nice work


thnx
Posted 25 Sep 2007

May Be says
QUEEN VICTORIA said:


thanks
Posted 25 Sep 2007

May Be says
Darkjal said:

Nice


thanks
Posted 25 Sep 2007

May Be says
americangirl said:

nice job


thanks
Posted 25 Sep 2007

May Be says
Miss mine said:



   


thanks
Posted 25 Sep 2007

May Be says
~CHANDNI~ said:

May Be said:

I wonder...
would things have been different
if I had written a poem for you...
like you wanted me to?
Words to immortalize
the passion that engulfed us...
the sacred fire burning within...
the synergy we created
that seemed indestructible.
Would things have been different?
I started several times...
Once, you read a part of it,
and smiled...
I said it wasn't finished
and it was true.
My poem was an ongoing one
for you.
But you never asked again...
Instead...
You heard me say goodbye
when I said hello...
and you turned into stone.
You saw in me
those who left before...
without a word.
I wish you would have seen...
me.
My poem for you was more than words;
it was the way I looked at you,
the way I touched you,
the way I held you,
the way I let you in my heart
without reservations...
where you reigned supreme.
Did you see that?
Or did you only see
those who said goodbye -
while I said hello...





thanks
Posted 25 Sep 2007

May Be says
cutefriend said:


thanks
Posted 25 Sep 2007

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