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QUEEN VICTORIA

Age: 124
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Broken Heart
You and I were the greatest thing
Laughter and smiles is what we would bring

We would talk on the phone, until it was time for bed
Even then I would see you, in my dreams, inside my head

Every time I saw you, I would always smile
You could see a glow in my eyes from miles and miles

Man, I wish I was still holding onto you
But you gotta girl now, so what can I do?

Now when I see you, there's always a frown
Won't you please turn that sad frown upside down?

If you're not happy with this person, then just say goodbye
Because seeing you depressed, brings tears to my eyes

Today I approached you, but you didn't say a word
I still have feelings for you, haven't you heard?

I miss seeing you smile and laugh
Won't you please remember the fun we had?

Holding hands coming from lunch
Wow! I miss you a whole bunch

Just ask my family, you were all I talked about
Now all I do is walk around the house and pout

I love hearing your voice; it brings a smile to my face
It's a sound that I shall always embrace

I had no idea I actually felt this way
Please tell me, why does it feel like you're pushing me away?

The reason we broke up, I don't even know why
Just thinking about you now makes me want to cry

It was peer pressure; they said you lied too much
But I would easily take you back with just one touch

The one your with, for you, doesn't even care
That is why right now she gets pretty mean stares

Enough about her, she makes me sick
I miss you way more than just a little bit

I need to toughen up; I know we'll always be apart
That is the reason why right now, I have a broken heart
Posted 01 Dec 2007

~tasha~ says
Posted 02 Dec 2007

~tasha~ says
Sticks and stone break my bones,
tis words that broke my heart.
Fissures form with emptiness,
whenever love departs.

Words said, can we just be friends,
rips your insides apart.
After giving me love so wonderful,
you took back your heart.

Now all thoughts reeks of sorrow,
so hard to comphrehend.
The surface pain we bury deep,
when love comes to an end.

There it stays constant reminder,
settles in makes us numb.
To never play the fool again,
no more to love succumb.

Yes sticks and stone cause me pain,
but words cut like a knife,
Words pierce my soul, mind and heart,
forever changed my life.
Posted 02 Dec 2007

eshajam says
Great both of you
Posted 02 Dec 2007

thank u
Posted 02 Dec 2007

~tasha~ says
eshajam said:

Great both of you



thanx
Posted 03 Dec 2007

Mr Twisty says
nice sharings.
Posted 03 Dec 2007

~CHANDNI~ says
QUEEN VICTORIA said:

Broken Heart
You and I were the greatest thing
Laughter and smiles is what we would bring

We would talk on the phone, until it was time for bed
Even then I would see you, in my dreams, inside my head

Every time I saw you, I would always smile
You could see a glow in my eyes from miles and miles

Man, I wish I was still holding onto you
But you gotta girl now, so what can I do?

Now when I see you, there's always a frown
Won't you please turn that sad frown upside down?

If you're not happy with this person, then just say goodbye
Because seeing you depressed, brings tears to my eyes

Today I approached you, but you didn't say a word
I still have feelings for you, haven't you heard?

I miss seeing you smile and laugh
Won't you please remember the fun we had?

Holding hands coming from lunch
Wow! I miss you a whole bunch

Just ask my family, you were all I talked about
Now all I do is walk around the house and pout

I love hearing your voice; it brings a smile to my face
It's a sound that I shall always embrace

I had no idea I actually felt this way
Please tell me, why does it feel like you're pushing me away?

The reason we broke up, I don't even know why
Just thinking about you now makes me want to cry

It was peer pressure; they said you lied too much
But I would easily take you back with just one touch

The one your with, for you, doesn't even care
That is why right now she gets pretty mean stares

Enough about her, she makes me sick
I miss you way more than just a little bit

I need to toughen up; I know we'll always be apart
That is the reason why right now, I have a broken heart

gud work
Posted 04 Dec 2007

Rapunzel says
Beautiful poem

im missing ur work Qv
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