Deep Within Me

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~tasha~

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Silently cry in my world at night
Adrift in dreams I hold on tight
Never to find true love it seems
Dashed are my hopes and dreams
You read my life in words of rhyme
Gone with the wind my happy time
Remaining with me are memories
Away love flew upon the breeze
Many tears lets the sadness seize
Posted 09 Mar 2008

sun_shine says


Posted 09 Mar 2008

~tasha~ says
sun_shine said:





thx
Posted 09 Mar 2008

ONLYARBAB says
nice jee nice
Posted 09 Mar 2008

Fairl_Girl says
very nice work
Posted 10 Mar 2008

Posted 10 Mar 2008

~CHANDNI~ says
very nice work
Posted 10 Mar 2008

jal_pari says
Posted 11 Mar 2008

~tasha~ says
thx oa, fg, rmd, chanda & jp




Posted 11 Mar 2008

eshajam says
wow TOO good
Posted 11 Mar 2008

eshajam says
How well do you know me?
Because I'd say not at all,
You're never there for me,
Yet I catch your every fall.

Do you actually believe,
That my smiles are really true?
Do you really think,
That I'm happy around you?

Can you see the scars,
Engraved deep upon my heart?
Can you see the pieces,
From where its been torn apart?

Can you feel my pain?
I hide it so well behind these eyes,
Can you see the truth,
Behind every single lie?

Can you see these tears,
That fall with every breath?
Can you see what I see?
Can you see my death?

Do you really think,
You can save me from this place;
Take all my problems,
Make them vanish without a trace?

Do you really think,
I'd take your hand if it were there?
Do you really think,
That I'd believe you actually care?

You see, I'm not that stupid,
And I can see right through,
Because you will never be there for me,
But I will always be there for you.
Posted 11 Mar 2008

Miss mine says

going gr8 guyz keep it up
Posted 13 Mar 2008

Miss mine says
~tasha~ said:

Silently cry in my world at night
Adrift in dreams I hold on tight
Never to find true love it seems
Dashed are my hopes and dreams
You read my life in words of rhyme
Gone with the wind my happy time
Remaining with me are memories
Away love flew upon the breeze
Many tears lets the sadness seize



tashuuu miss u
Posted 13 Mar 2008

~tasha~ says
i'm back dears

thx jam
thx mm

Posted 17 Mar 2008

Miss mine says
~tasha~ said:

i'm back dears

thx jam
thx mm



where tashuuuu
Posted 19 Mar 2008

~tasha~ says
Miss mine said:

~tasha~ said:

i'm back dears

thx jam
thx mm



where tashuuuu


i'm here
Posted 19 Mar 2008

Miss mine says
~tasha~ said:

Miss mine said:

~tasha~ said:

i'm back dears

thx jam
thx mm



where tashuuuu


i'm here


Tashuuu miss u miss ur poetry
Posted 19 Mar 2008

^dewaja^ says
VERY NICE
KEEP POSTING TASHU
Posted 21 Mar 2008

~tasha~ says
Miss mine said:

~tasha~ said:

Miss mine said:

~tasha~ said:

i'm back dears

thx jam
thx mm



where tashuuuu


i'm here


Tashuuu miss u miss ur poetry


awww

i'm writing a poetry right now
Posted 22 Mar 2008

~tasha~ says
^dewaja^ said:

VERY NICE
KEEP POSTING TASHU



thx dear...yeah y not
Posted 22 Mar 2008

sun_shine says
eshajam said:

How well do you know me?
Because I'd say not at all,
You're never there for me,
Yet I catch your every fall.

Do you actually believe,
That my smiles are really true?
Do you really think,
That I'm happy around you?

Can you see the scars,
Engraved deep upon my heart?
Can you see the pieces,
From where its been torn apart?

Can you feel my pain?
I hide it so well behind these eyes,
Can you see the truth,
Behind every single lie?

Can you see these tears,
That fall with every breath?
Can you see what I see?
Can you see my death?

Do you really think,
You can save me from this place;
Take all my problems,
Make them vanish without a trace?

Do you really think,
I'd take your hand if it were there?
Do you really think,
That I'd believe you actually care?

You see, I'm not that stupid,
And I can see right through,
Because you will never be there for me,
But I will always be there for you.



Really nice
Posted 22 Mar 2008

sun_shine says
Friends love you through the good times
And struggle through the bad
But in the end we love each other
More than we've ever had
Love grows as time goes on
For each other, one and all
For we always have someone
To catch us if we fall
If we struggle through a problem
Friends are always there
To help you find the answer
You love them more then air
For our world would be so empty
Some say it might even end
If somewhere on this Earth
Someone did not have a friend
Posted 22 Mar 2008

~tasha~ says
v nice
Posted 22 Mar 2008

Rapunzel says
Posted 22 Mar 2008

~tasha~ says
thx rapu
Posted 22 Mar 2008

^dewaja^ says
Posted 24 Mar 2008

khayali says
V3RY niCe tash*.. ss jee..jamz
Posted 24 Mar 2008

~tasha~ says
thx isma
Posted 27 Mar 2008

sun_shine says
Posted 27 Mar 2008

~tasha~ says
sun_shine said:



most welcome
Posted 27 Mar 2008

Miss mine says
sun_shine said:

Friends love you through the good times
And struggle through the bad
But in the end we love each other
More than we've ever had
Love grows as time goes on
For each other, one and all
For we always have someone
To catch us if we fall
If we struggle through a problem
Friends are always there
To help you find the answer
You love them more then air
For our world would be so empty
Some say it might even end
If somewhere on this Earth
Someone did not have a friend



v.nice ss
Posted 28 Mar 2008

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