When you love someone

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~tasha~

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When you love someone so deep inside,
It seems like it's so easy to hide.
You've loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.

Every day you would hope and pray,
That he would always stay this way.
He treated you like you should be treated,
You thought your life was finally completed.

You thought your love was growing true,
And then one day it was all so blue.
He started putting you down and it hurt,
You thought all you were to him was dirt.

He started ignoring you and you wondered why,
All you wanted to do was curl up and die.
You thought your relationship would never end,
But that was all so fake and pretend.

One night he was so sweet to you,
You thought all those things were maybe untrue,
Two days later he was back the same,
You thought you were the one to blame.

He thought the relationship was getting too serious
And that you had become a little too curious.
By this time you knew it wouldn't last,
All the nice things he said were in the past.

You thought that you would marry him some day,
But this time God wanted to get his way.
You wanted things back how they were before,
But you knew this couldn't happen anymore.

It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock,
You heard the news and it wasn't a shock.
You knew this was going to happen soon,
As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.
Posted 16 Dec 2008

Rapunzel says
nice one dear
Posted 16 Dec 2008

Miss mine says

    phenomenal tash
Posted 17 Dec 2008

~tasha~ says
Rapunzel said:

nice one dear



Posted 17 Dec 2008

~tasha~ says
Miss mine said:


    phenomenal tash



sis
Posted 17 Dec 2008

kOoLeSt1 says
Posted 17 Dec 2008

~tasha~ says
Posted 17 Dec 2008

eshajam says
awwwwwwwwww
Bad Ending
Posted 18 Dec 2008

~tasha~ says
thx for reading
Posted 18 Dec 2008

Rapunzel says
Posted 19 Dec 2008

~tasha~ says
Posted 20 Dec 2008

Miss mine says
You’re the reason, of my poetry
The true meaning behind words
True love developing it’s wings
Reaching high beyond the birds.

I love you for who you truly are
For nothing less, For only more
Love, A ocean of true emotions
Joined together from it’s shores.

You’re the inspiration to poetry
Even though love, goes beyond
The distance words can explain
In a poem, prose, or even songs.

I love you every step of the way
For who you’ve made me today
The love I feel, within my heart
No words cannot express to say.

Posted 27 Dec 2008

~tasha~ says
Miss mine said:

You’re the reason, of my poetry
The true meaning behind words
True love developing it’s wings
Reaching high beyond the birds.

I love you for who you truly are
For nothing less, For only more
Love, A ocean of true emotions
Joined together from it’s shores.

You’re the inspiration to poetry
Even though love, goes beyond
The distance words can explain
In a poem, prose, or even songs.

I love you every step of the way
For who you’ve made me today
The love I feel, within my heart
No words cannot express to say.



beautiful
Posted 27 Dec 2008

sun_shine says
~tasha~ said:

When you love someone so deep inside,
It seems like it's so easy to hide.
You've loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.

Every day you would hope and pray,
That he would always stay this way.
He treated you like you should be treated,
You thought your life was finally completed.

You thought your love was growing true,
And then one day it was all so blue.
He started putting you down and it hurt,
You thought all you were to him was dirt.

He started ignoring you and you wondered why,
All you wanted to do was curl up and die.
You thought your relationship would never end,
But that was all so fake and pretend.

One night he was so sweet to you,
You thought all those things were maybe untrue,
Two days later he was back the same,
You thought you were the one to blame.

He thought the relationship was getting too serious
And that you had become a little too curious.
By this time you knew it wouldn't last,
All the nice things he said were in the past.

You thought that you would marry him some day,
But this time God wanted to get his way.
You wanted things back how they were before,
But you knew this couldn't happen anymore.

It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock,
You heard the news and it wasn't a shock.
You knew this was going to happen soon,
As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.




Posted 27 Dec 2008

~tasha~ says
thx
Posted 27 Dec 2008

Rapunzel says
very nice mm

tashu
Posted 27 Dec 2008

~tasha~ says
Posted 29 Dec 2008

olldman says
Its a brilliant read, Tasha.
Posted 31 Dec 2008

~tasha~ says
thx olldman
Posted 31 Dec 2008

sun_shine says
*Most welcome jee...!
Posted 31 Dec 2008

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