Tooti hai meri neend magar..

danie said:

nice Rapu ji
nice tehezeeb

Rapu ji, I want to add in ur poetry-

Tumne to daba ke kha liya tandoori muga vo lajawab,
Humko bhi lag rahi hei bhookh, tumko isse kya

Rapunzel said:

Tooti Hai Meri Neend Magar, TuMko Isse Kya,
Bajte Rahe Hawaon Se Dar, TuMko Isse Kya,

TuM Mauj Mauj Misl-E-Saba GhuMte Raho,
Kat Jaye Mere Soch Ke Par, TuMko Isse Kya,

Auron Ka Haath ThaMo, Unhe Rasta Dikhao,
Main Bhul Jaun Apna Ghar, TuMko Isse Kya,

Le Jaaye Mujhko Maal-E-GaMinat Ke Sath Koi,
TuMne To Daal Di Hai Seper, TuMko Isse Kya,

TuMne To Thak Ke Dasht Mein KhaMein Laga Liye,
Tanha Gaya Kisika Safar, TuMko Isse Kya...

Rapunzel said:

Tooti Hai Meri Neend Magar, TuMko Isse Kya,
Bajte Rahe Hawaon Se Dar, TuMko Isse Kya,

TuM Mauj Mauj Misl-E-Saba GhuMte Raho,
Kat Jaye Mere Soch Ke Par, TuMko Isse Kya,

Auron Ka Haath ThaMo, Unhe Rasta Dikhao,
Main Bhul Jaun Apna Ghar, TuMko Isse Kya,

Le Jaaye Mujhko Maal-E-GaMinat Ke Sath Koi,
TuMne To Daal Di Hai Seper, TuMko Isse Kya,

TuMne To Thak Ke Dasht Mein KhaMein Laga Liye,
Tanha Gaya Kisika Safar, TuMko Isse Kya...

tehzeeb said:

KO BA KO PHAIL GAYI BAT SHANASAYI KI,
US NEY KHOSBHOO KI TARHA MERI PAZERAYI KI,

KAISET KEH DO K US NEY CHOR DIYA HAI MUJHEY,
BAT TO SACH HAI MAGAR BAT HAI RUSWAYI KI,

WOH KAHIN BHI GAYA LOTA TO MEREY PASS AYA,
BAS YE HHI BAT HAI ACHI MEREY HARJAYI KI,

US KA PEHLOO BHI US K DIL KI TARHA ABAD RAHEY,
US PEY GUZREY NA QAYAMAT SHAB-E-TANHAYI KI,

JALTI HUWI PESHANI PAR JAB HATH RAKHA US NEY,
ROOH TAK UTAR GAYI TASEER MASIHAYI KI.