Mera Watan

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jani420

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Qaid ka nishan hai tu
Iqbal ki shaan hai tu
Meri pehchan hai tu

Kiya keroun tareef teri
Tu hi to hai maa meri
Terey liey hazir hai jaan meri

Har jawan tera rakhwala hai
Tu hi to humari aankh ka tara hai
Tera har manzar kitna pyara hai

Shaheedoun ke lahoo ne likhi tareekh teri
Qurbanioun se mili hai yeh azadi meri
Aur kiya keroun tareef teri

Kasam khuda ki meri jaan hai tu
Merey watan mera Iman hai tu
Is dil mein hai sir tu tu tuhi tu





Posted 25 Oct 2003

MrDeath says
talian..
Posted 25 Oct 2003

Rain Man says
jani yaar poem achchi hai, par poem section mein nahin, ye kya maajra hai...
Posted 25 Oct 2003

uhhuuyyyy nice poem??
Posted 26 Oct 2003

Ashii says
jani yar ye roz roz 14th of august manate rehte ho,, ye bhi kya majra hai
Posted 26 Oct 2003

jani420 says
roz roz nahi bus asy hi likeh liya tareef to kero
Posted 26 Oct 2003

Rain Man says
lol
Posted 26 Oct 2003

Ashii says

wah wahhhh bohot ache,,, zabrdasttttttt.. fitttt hai set haiiiiiiii,, jhakaasss hai
Posted 26 Oct 2003

Cute_gal says
bohat ziada nahi ho gaya @ SALL??
Posted 26 Oct 2003

new_beau says
Good Poem.. Butt Needs a WAZAN ...Keep it up..and U could be good Poet..
Posted 26 Oct 2003

jani420 says
thanx
Posted 26 Oct 2003

Ashii says
bohot to ho gaya hai par zabardasti ki tareef aise hi hoti hai na
Posted 27 Oct 2003

jani420 says
acha to na kero tareef
Posted 27 Oct 2003

jupiterblue said:

uhhuuyyyy nice poem??



u cant under stand it asusual....hain na..Am i right?

it is a patriotic poem About Our Pakistan
Posted 27 Oct 2003

jani420 said:

Qaid ka nishan hai tu
Iqbal ki shaan hai tu
Meri pehchan hai tu

Kiya keroun tareef teri
Tu hi to hai maa meri
Terey liey hazir hai jaan meri

Har jawan tera rakhwala hai
Tu hi to humari aankh ka tara hai
Tera har manzar kitna pyara hai

Shaheedoun ke lahoo ne likhi tareekh teri
Qurbanioun se mili hai yeh azadi meri
Aur kiya keroun tareef teri

Kasam khuda ki meri jaan hai tu
Merey watan mera Iman hai tu
Is dil mein hai sir tu tu tuhi tu







teri oonchi shan hai Mola
jani ko tu nay poet bana diya Mola



yeh kya kar diya Mola
Posted 27 Oct 2003

new_beau said:

Good Poem.. Butt Needs a WAZAN ...Keep it up..and U could be good Poet..



oon ka apna WAZAN hi kafi hai aur kisi WAZAN ki zaroorat nahin
Posted 27 Oct 2003

Ashii says
eheheheheeee....
hahaahahhaaa.....
sharam karo sharam karo.. ab to ramadan aa gaya hai.. i ve decided ab kissi ko tang nahi karna
Posted 27 Oct 2003

~Fragi~ says
SALL said:

eheheheheeee....
hahaahahhaaa.....
sharam karo sharam karo.. ab to ramadan aa gaya hai.. i ve decided ab kissi ko tang nahi karna




acha decide kiya hai ji
Posted 27 Oct 2003

Ashii says
han na na jii..
khekhekhee..
Posted 28 Oct 2003

sall.........
Posted 28 Oct 2003

Ashii says
ka hua queeenyyyy
hum ab nahi lar sakte, roze se hein..
jitna marzi aankhein dikhao
Posted 28 Oct 2003

ok Eid k baad sahi

Posted 29 Oct 2003

Ashii says
eid kiss ne dekhi hai yarrrrrrrrrr..

yar these mottu kiddies in ur sig r..
hmmm horrible
Posted 29 Oct 2003

kya horrible hai?
Posted 30 Oct 2003

Ashii says
ummm wo....
hmmmm
it seems doc sahab ugly kids pe haath saaf ka chuke hein
Posted 31 Oct 2003

Posted 31 Oct 2003

ok i will change it if u dont like it
Posted 31 Oct 2003

slik chik says
queen victoria said:

new_beau said:

Good Poem.. Butt Needs a WAZAN ...Keep it up..and U could be good Poet..



oon ka apna WAZAN hi kafi hai aur kisi WAZAN ki zaroorat nahin
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.....................LMAO,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,DAMN FUNNY GURL! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!
Posted 31 Oct 2003

Ashii says
u already changed naaaaaaaa..
Posted 01 Nov 2003

yeah :)
Posted 02 Nov 2003

jani420 says
gooda gooda
Posted 06 Nov 2003

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