chica on the west

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NADZ18

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She walks witha wiggle along a straight endless bridge...looking down at the waves of the water beneath she remembers her memories washing away...with every brush of tide against the sand...she cover her head

andbows her head down in shame...

a man dressed in all white
with a beard appears in front of her......
and then

YOUR TURN
FINISH

Posted 25 Oct 2003

jupiterblue says

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finish??

she's dead??

Posted 26 Oct 2003

WARMTH OF LOVE says

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and hold her shoulder and said ... why are you feeling that .... listen my child ... don't loss ur hope.... you are still alive.... and life bring hope and hope get you back in ur passion and ur passion will make u happy .... the poor girl raise her head and look into the eyes of that man but ..... ur turn

Posted 02 Nov 2003

jupiterblue says

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but the man has no eyes??

I'm not good in telling story

Posted 04 Nov 2003

Princess_Da_2nd says

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SO SHE SCREAMS AND RUNS LIEK SHES NEVER RUN IN HER LIFE. NON STOP SHE RUNS UNTIL SHE FINDS A HOUSE IN THE MIDDLE OF NO WHERE. SEEKING REFUGE SHE RUNS INTO THE OPEN DOOR AND THERE SHE SEES....

Posted 05 Feb 2004

jupiterblue says

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plenty of food on the table....she's very hungry..coz she running...and running....and running....

Posted 10 Feb 2004

~Fragi~ says

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after eatin dat food ... she tried to explore da house .. house was in dark ... and quite haunted type ... as she enterd in da one room ..................................................

Posted 20 Feb 2004

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she sees a man lying on the ground..his face is covered with a brown cloth but not his body..as she approaches him she sees a snake slither from the man's feet into a dark corner of the room. She calls him but no answer so she pulls the cloth back from his face and when she does she lets out a scream......

Posted 27 Feb 2004

PumpKin says

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it gives me an idea....

Posted 27 Feb 2004

CuteEsha says

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what ideaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Posted 07 Mar 2004

lilprincess says

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it's it the guy she saw on the bridge...

Posted 19 Mar 2004

friend_16 says

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n he is a ghost.. who is crazy about her..

Posted 19 Mar 2004

WARMTH OF LOVE says

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Saki said:
she sees a man lying on the ground..his face is covered with a brown cloth but not his body..as she approaches him she sees a snake slither from the man's feet into a dark corner of the room. She calls him but no answer so she pulls the cloth back from his face and when she does she lets out a scream......

OMG.... he was breathig hard but she shocked by his face he was the same person she left a while ago.... suddenly he open his eyes ... and look at her .... she was sitting on her knees and had no courage to stand up... she was motion less ... straightly lookin into his eyes... and she felt like he was trying to say something...

Posted 18 Dec 2004

joker says

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salam warmth and hi jupiter
nice to see u.....

Posted 22 Dec 2004

LiL_DollY says

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the man on the ground disappered. The girl rubbed her eyes. Still scared from witnessing something so unusual she ran. She ran like crazy without even thinking. She kept running until she tripped on a tree branch. Wondering where it came from she got up to keep running. She suddenly realized she wasnt alone there were footsteps behind her

they were getting faster and faster...

at last she looked around 2 see

Posted 22 Feb 2005

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