My poem :)

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Falsafi

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ummmm ok like u really dun have to read this
I wrote it sum 6 months back so bear wid it [angel]

               What If ......
wat if ...

the air becomes unbearbly chilled

wid glom n cloudz ur days r filled

or wen ur caughtup in a storm

i set a balze 2 make u warm



wat if...

in times wen abandined u feel

i kiss ur wounds 2 make them heal

or wen there is no one with u 4 miles

i fill ur journey wid lafter n smiles



wat if....

dear u go astry

i hold ur hand and guide da way

n all through the winding road

i unveil 4 u a majistic world untold



but most of all.....

wat if one day i end this game

hold ur hand n takin ur name

(tell me dear wat will u do)

wen i finally confess i love u

........ tell me wat then?.....

Posted 16 Apr 2003

Cute_gal says
u sure it's urs....falsafi....:D.
Posted 17 Apr 2003

SaPnA says
hum good job falsafi i dont get it you and poems
Posted 17 Apr 2003

zebii says
it seems as if
What If ......
it would be written by u
what if....
u would bring us ur own stuff
What if......
just kidiing...dude dont mind....it surely was
What if......[8)]
Posted 17 Apr 2003

SaPnA says
hahhahh
Posted 17 Apr 2003

sadz says
pretty good stuff... :)
Posted 17 Apr 2003

good falsafi... Good work done

Zebii lolz   
Posted 17 Apr 2003

Falsafi says
jeez thanx :)
Posted 17 Apr 2003

sweetie says
ahaaan.. nice poem.. im amazed k ek chota sa bacha itni achi poem likh sakta hae :p

Posted 17 Apr 2003

Falsafi says
em 20 :) ummm legaly hunk?? w/e!
Posted 17 Apr 2003

sweetie says
lol. okie if u say so

Posted 17 Apr 2003

quote:
im amazed k ek chota sa bacha itni achi poem likh sakta hae :p

he proved
Posted 18 Apr 2003

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