ghayal kiya jb apno ne

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Ghayal Kiya Jab Apno Ne

ghayal kiya jb apno ne,to garon se gila kiya kerna
othaaye hain khnjer jb apno ne, to zndgi ki tammna kiya kerna

dil tha ik kanch ka gher ,so akhir wo bhi toot gyia
qismt main likhye hain jb gum ,to khuda se gila kiya kerna

tersti rahi zndgi bher jin schey rishton ke liye
jb onhon ne hi thukera diya, to garon se tawqo kiya kerna

jis ko smjha tha apna, jis ko bnaya tha apna razdan
osi ne jb dil torr diya, to gaer ko apna ker kiya kerna

muskerana jo bhool gaye hont shazi,to kiya hua
gum ko bna liya hye apna, to muskera ke ab kiya kerna


Posted 31 May 2004

good poetry
y dont u write in my forum poetry corner
Posted 01 Jun 2004

very nice....:) good work done .. keep it up
Posted 01 Jun 2004

gud
Posted 01 Jun 2004

goooooood
Posted 01 Jun 2004

kiran says
good work

this is my own....

jab appnon ne teer barsaee
sare agle pichle badle chukae

hum toot gae shishe ki tarah
jab pyare logoon ne dhukh diye

jab dil ke pas ke raste per bhi
appnon ne kante hi kante bichae

jab pyar ki mudhbhar chandi main bhi
dostoon ne andhaire andhaire bhar dale

hum toot gae shishe ki tarah
jab chamakte sitare pyaroon ne bujhae
Posted 01 Jun 2004

kiran jee app key tu baat hey kya hai
Posted 01 Jun 2004

kiran says
thanks kuch aur arz karoon ijazat dain..kami nahin hai kalaam ki
Posted 01 Jun 2004

javad says
good jiiii

kiran koi aur taza kalam??
Posted 01 Jun 2004

kiran says
kal karoon gi intezar karooooo...
Posted 02 Jun 2004

han jee zaror hojaye kuch taza kalaam
Posted 02 Jun 2004

javad says
okk aab karoooo bhi
Posted 02 Jun 2004

itna inteezaar
Posted 03 Jun 2004

javad says
kiraaaaaaaan??????
Posted 03 Jun 2004

loo jee woh tu putta nahin kaab karein gey main hey kaar daitey houn

loag baithey houn tu kuch bola nahin kartey
wafa mitee main ho tu motti roola nahin kartey
hoo bho sakta hai phir band anh houn tujh sai
yun dareechai dil kai kabhi khoola nahin kartey
Posted 03 Jun 2004

kiran says
kuch yadain bhooli bikhri sin
kuch as ke lamhai khoye hue
kuch ratain thandi barsi sin
kuch pyar ke lamhai soye hue
kuch batain bhooli basri sin
kuch yar ke lamhai roye hue

maine akser yaad kiye
woh deep tumare sang jo jale
woh seep tumare sang jo mile
woh din tumare sang jo bite
woh rang tumare sang jo bhare

maine akser yaad kiye
woh dard tumare bad jo mile
woh zakham jo na kabhi sile
woh marham jo na kabhi mile
woh teer jo bina barse chale

maine akser yaad kiye........

Posted 07 Jun 2004

javad says
good
Posted 07 Jun 2004

kiran says
bas gooooooooooooooooooooooood
Posted 07 Jun 2004

javad says
YAAAR BOHAT ACHAY HAI
YE GOOD DIL SAY BOLA HAI
Posted 07 Jun 2004

StillAlone says
NICE POETRY KIRAN
Posted 09 Jun 2004

good kiran kiran ko award milna chahiye
Posted 10 Jun 2004

kiran says
nahin yaar yeh kuch zayada hi tareef ho gai hai...
Posted 14 Jun 2004

egoistguy4 says
acha chaloo buhat bura kia hai kiran nay inko punishment milni chaheay ub theek hai????
Posted 15 Jun 2004

javad says
gandii bachi kiran kahan hooo
Posted 23 Jun 2004

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