wow this is the best one

very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

hey how r?
all of ur poems r very good
keep the good work
bye tc

man ur poemmm
is the best
i really like
it good job
keep it uppp

good job
wow that is nice :-)

hey welcome

hey
how ru?
wish u good
luck dont worry he wont be mad for
that long
wish u the best bye

hey
how r u? hope good
ur poems r really nice bye tc KUda hafiz

dayaar-e-Gair me.n kaise tujhe sadaa dete

dayaar-e-Gair me.n kaise tujhe sadaa dete
tuu mil bhii jaataa to tujhe ga.Nvaa dete

[dayaar-e-Gair=alien/unknown place; ga.Nvaa denaa=to lose]

tumhii.n ne ham ko sunaayaa na apanaa dukh varanaa
duaa vo karate ke ham aasamaan hilaa dete

hame.n ye zom rahaa ab ke vo pukaare.nge
unhe.n ye zid thii ke har baar ham sadaa dete

[zom=illusion]

vo teraa Gam thaa ke taasiir mere lahaje kii
ke jis ko haal sunaate use rulaa dete

[taasiir=effect; lahajaa=style]

tumhe.n bhulaanaa hii avval to dastaaras me.n nahii.n
jo iKhtiyaar bhii hotaa to kyaa bhulaa dete

[avval=firstly; dastaaras=within reach; iKhtiyaar=control]

tumhaarii yaad ne ko_ii javaab hii na diyaa
mere Khayaal ke aa.Nsuu rahe sadaa dete

sama'to.n ko mai.n taa-umr kosataa Syed
vo kuchh na kahate magar ho.nTh to hilaa dete

[sama'to.n=hearing power; taa-umr=life long; kosanaa=blame]
(wasi Shah)
hope u like it!!!!

yeah i guess it was hard to read it i really dont know how to write english/urdu sorryyyyyyyy hope u get it

hey f16
how r u?
and what is ur real name hehe
i really dont know wht to ask. hmm if u dont like hot
weather then waht kind of weather do u like??
and where u from or at? me in usa and the weather is soo nice here cuz it is raining
bye Allah haifzz

hey nice poem
i posted my first poems also u should check them out
tc