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SALL said: itna dehshatgard sher jala hai jism jahan dil bhi jal gaya hoga kuredte ho jo ab raakh justuju kya hai (yeh sher aise hi hai na )
haan ji kuchh aisa li lagta hai
hai
main ney kabhi halaat sey rona nahin seekha
taqdeer peh shaakir hoon bhali hai keh buri hai
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Rohail ahmed said: KEEP IT UP
thanx rohail
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thanx queen to like post
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JIS jis khait sey dehqaan ko na ho rozi moyassar us khait kay har gosha e gandam ko jala do
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shaid post hi achhi nahin
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cutefriend said: nice job
than cf for reply n like
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Doctor Sam said: MULAQAT na pooch pehle mulaqat main mizaaj uska wo rang rang main simta, kiran kiran main khula
ek mulaqaat thi jo sada yaad rahi main jisay umar samajhta tha woh ek pal nikla
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kuchus ney hamarey zakhmon kuch youn kiya elaaj marham bhi gar lagaya to khanjar ki nok sey
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na janey hogaya hoon is qadar hasas mein kub sey kisi sey baat karta hoon tu aankhen bheeg jati hain
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hai' kitni ajeeb baat hai,baat bhi kuchh ajeeb hai jis ney dia hai dard e dil wohi mera tabeeb hai
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dil kay lutney ka sabab poochho na sab kay samney naam aaey ga tumhara------- yeh kahani phir sahi
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noonnafraton kay teer kha kar doston kay shehar main hum ney kis kis ko pukara yeh kahani phir sahi yeh
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yeh fiqha e shehar ney tohmat lagai saghar per yeh shakhs dard ki daulat ko aam karta hai
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new_beau said: chalo ab kisi aur lafz say shair suynao ta keh mainn contiunue keroon..
okhey us ki talwaar ney woh chaal chali hai aisi paon kat,tey hain agar haath pachaoon apney lets play plz
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new_beau said:
aikalone said: Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat kiyoon hamain subh-e-darekhshan ka intizaar nahee
hawwa ki beti said: Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai Ya apni hee taqdeer main aram nahin hai Tootay ga to qeemat main kuch aur barhay ga Saqee yeh mera Dil hai koee Jaam nahin hai
HKB...Last word was NAHEE....it should be NAHINN in urdu...so last HARF is NUUN.... Please Correct your Shair and Then I will continue... ok jee my shair is with noon instead of Y Neend to dard k bistar peH bhi aa sakti hai Teri aaghosh mein sar ho yeh zaroori to nahi NEXT WITH> NOON< as well
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new_beau said: O HELLO..hkb JEE...Diary Khatam ho gayee kiya ?? Wohi Shair Repeat
mujhey koi aur munasib lafz nahin milta sawaey sorry kay
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Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai Ya apni hee taqdeer main aram nahin hai Tootay ga to qeemat main kuch aur barhay ga Saqee yeh mera Dil hai koee Jaam nahin hai
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aasman tum aasman sey--------------- jald laut aana main ney zameen kay masail peh baat karni hai
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thanx salman new be & queen to remember & like post
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hawwa ki beti said: reply to new be with > aaj aaj tak shehar ka chehra nahin dhulney paya gard ka aisa baghola teray janey sey utha
SHEHAR "Her baat hay Judaa, Her Pehar hay Alag" "Mainn Shehar mainn hoon Mujh say Shehar hay Alag" shehar har shakhs meray shehar ka farishta hai ek main hi gunahgaar hoon bay gunahon main
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Yeh khamooshi to merey dil ki deewarien ghira deygi Mohabbat ho na ho per lab hila aahista aahista
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new_beau said: SAFAID... Taqaaza kiya jub bhi Shaja-re-Dil nay Namoo ka Berh kay thaama Daaman Hum nay Saboo ka Aaj kal tann say uss kay SAFAID kirnainn Phoot'ti hainn Badel gaya hay Rang Shayad Uss kay Lahoo ka Rizwan Ashar
reply to new be with > aaj aaj tak shehar ka chehra nahin dhulney paya gard ka aisa baghola teray janey sey utha
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new_beau said: I JUSHHTTT lub it....This my MOST favorite since I heard it 10 Years Back
naey aaney walon ko to yeh baat maloom nahin
anyway thanx2remember& like
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Na!ma said: Very nice ....
thanx jee
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aaj kuch zakham nayaa lehja badal ke aaye aaj kuch log naaye milgaye ahbaab ke saath
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Faizan Rana said:
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Doctor Sam said: dasht dasht to dasht hain darya bhi na chorday hum ne behr-e-zulmaat main dorda diye ghorday hum ne..
Koi koi surat nazar nahin aati koi umeed bar nahin aati , moot ka aik din mutaaen hai nend kyun raat bar nahin aati reply to faizan with > surat seerat kay hum ghulam hain,surat hui to kia surkh o safaid mitti ki moorat hui to kia hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm nice share thanx faizan laikin saath koi shair bhi likh diya hota
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Doctor Sam said:
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Doctor Sam said: dasht dasht to dasht hain darya bhi na chorday hum ne behr-e-zulmaat main dorda diye ghorday hum ne..
doctor sahib aap kay shair main lafz >darya< hai jab keh theek lafz sehra hai darustgee farma lain shukria ......................hkb well... HKB.. dekhain . dasht ka matlab SEHRA hota hey, to ab aap agar darya ki jaga SEHRA laga k dekhain to... Iqbal ne ye kaha tha k sehra to sehra hain, hum ne darya bhi nahi chorday, Behr-e-Zulmaat ka zikr aata hey na baad main, usi k liye darya kaha gya hey to jahan tak mera knowledge hey, Lafz DARYA e hey,, jee ab main apney pass darustgee kar chuki hoon
agar main na likhti to meray pass ghalat hi likha hota
thanx for correction
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khoobsurat poetry
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Na jaane kab meri duniya ---------mein muskurayega Woh aik shaks keh khwaboon mein bhi khafa sa lagay yeh
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nice sharing