THE WATER FROM THE SHOWER TURNED COLD, HER SPINE CHILLED, GOOSEBUMPS COVERED HER BODY,. SHE JUMPED IN SHOCK, AND THEN SHE LOOKED, THAT IT WASN'T WATER COMING FROM THE SHOWER IT WAS...

nai raat hogi
nai baat hogi
naye kal ko aao
karen hum karen hum karen
salaame salaame salaame
ker le salaame

THAT IT WASN'T WATER COMING FROM THE SHOWER IT WAS...

oye rehn de

it was blood
pouring gushing out of the shower faucet
it began to turn into chunky blood. It began to plug the faucet and the drain.

.....

gimme some blood

gimmie some blood said a horroific voice from behind the shower current. a humangous scream escaped her throat....at least she thought it did...

THERE STOOD A FIGURE BEHIND THE CURTAIN, SHE COULD MAKE OUT THE SHADOW, WHAT WAS IT? WAS IT A MAN? WAS IT AN ANIMAL? SOME BEAST? RIGHT NOW ALL THOUGHTS ESCAPED HER MIND, SHE FROZE IN TERROR, HER BODY STIFF, HER EYES FOCUSED ON THE FIGURE WHICH STOOD TALL AND STILL BEHIND THE CURTAIN, SHE WAS CLOAKED IN THE THICK SLIMY CLOTTED BLOOD, IT OOZED OFF HER AND SPLODGED AGAINST THE SHOWER FLOOR, THE SOUR STENCH ALMOST CHOKED HER. SHE DAREN'T SHIFT THE CURTAIN FOR WHATEVER IT WAS OUT THERE MIGHT POUNCE, SHE REMEMBERED HER BATHROBE HANGING NEXT TO THE BATH, SHOULD SHE REACH OUT AND GET IT? OR WILL IT ATTRACT ATTENTION? DID THAT "THING" KNOW SHE WAS IN HERE? WAS IT WAITING FOR HER TO GET OUT? THE ANSWERS TO HER QUESTIONS LAY ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE CURTAIN, THERE WAS ONLY ONE WAY TO FIND OUT......

She opened the curtain with a RIP...
and the dark creature turned around...
he popped out his hand
horrific as it seemed...
it wasnt his hand
it was metal hand
figners were really sharp blades
it tok me a while before I realized the blades we covered with blood...

a thought ran through my head

WHAT THOUGHT?


SO IT WAS THE TERMINATOR LOLZ....AHEM LETS BE SERIOUS:

THE TALL FIGURE WITH IT'S BLADED HANDS, GLINTING AS THE CEILING LIGHT CAUGHT ON THE SILVER FINISH, DROPS OF BLOOD DRIPPING OFF THE EDGE OF THE "FINGERS" IT TURNED TO HER, FOR A MOMENT THEY STOOD STILL, NO ONE MOVED. SHE GASPED, A LUMP IN HER THROAT BLOCKED HER AIRWAVES, SHE TRIED TO SCREAM, "SCREACH" SCREACH" NO! NO! SHE COULDN'T SHOUT, SHE SWALLOWED HER OWN VOICE, SHE STOOD SHAKING, HER FACE FILLED WITH FEAR, HER BODY PARALYZED WITH THE FEAR SHE COULDN'T MOVE, SHE WAS AS GOOD AS DEAD, NO ONE COULD HEAR HER AND SHE COULDN'T ESCAPE. THE BEAST........IT'S HEAD BOWED, STOOD STILL, CALM, SHE COULD FEEL HIS BREATHING, HE COULD TASTE HER FEAR. SLOWLY IT LIFTED ITS HEAD.....

Helppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

AREYYY HUMARI BABY BEHENA.....CHALO, AAP YEH STORY NAH SUNNEIN, AJAA

itni draoni tahani papaaa lolzzz


otay ham bed tay nichay chup datay hain and fingers kaanoon main daal lien..lolzz

ab aap tahani sunain agay lolzz

while I was hiding under the bed
I could hear the terminatormetal man walking into my room...

from downstaris I could hear....the door bell ringing.....
I knew this was my chance.........

LOLZ WHAT HAPPENED TO THE ORIGINAL STORY?

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itni draoni tahani papaaa lolzzz


otay ham bed tay nichay chup datay hain and fingers kaanoon main daal lien..lolzz

ab aap tahani sunain agay lolzz

KOI BAAT NAHIN HUM HEIN NAAA!

im lost
i thought i was going along with the story

laughing

LOLZ, SO LETZ CARRY ON

yougo

first so i can carry on

UMMM SO WHERE DID WE LEAVE OFF? LOLZ

the door bell rang
who ould it be
oh yes
it was the pizza she had ordred before getting into the shower....

YES...IT WAS THE PIZZA DELIVERY MAN, SHE HAD ORDERED A PEPPERONI N GARLIC PIZZA, WITH EXTRA CHEESE...(HOLD THE SPICES) FROM DOMINOS BEFORE GETTING INTO THE SHOWER.

SO THERE SHE WAS IN HER BATHROOM LOOKING THE THING IN THE FACE...WITH THE PIZZA BOY STANDING OUTSIDE HER DOOR, SHE JUMPED AT THE SOUND OF THE DOORBELL, OH MY GOD, IT'S THE PIZZA, THANK GOD SOMEONE IS HERE, MAYBE IF SHE TRIED TO CALL OUT TO HIM HE WILL HEAR HER VOICE AND CALL FOR HELP, BUT THE THING STILL STOOD THERE.

IT'S FACE...IT'S TERRIFYING FACE, IT WASN'T AN IT, IT WAS A HE, A MAN, SHE COULD SEE HIS FACE, HIS LONG EVIL FACE, SCARS COVERED THE LEFT OF IT, HIS LASHES CURTAINED SOMETHING SINISTER FROM THE WORLD, THOSE EYES TOLD A TERRIFYING TALE THOSE DEEP AND EVIL EYES FOCUSED ON HER LIKE A PREDATORS' ON IT'S PREY, . HIS FEATURES PALE ALMOST GREY, HIS FACE EXPRESSIONLESS HE STARED, HIS EYES FIXED ON HER EYES, SHE SLOWLY REACHED FOR THE BATH ROBE AND QUICKLY WRAPPED IT AROUND HER, HE STOOD THERE, LIKE A MANEQUINN NOT MOVING NOT BREATHING NOT LIVING.

WITH HIS HAND, CLAWED AND LINED WITH METAL WITH BLOOD DRIPPING FROM IT, HE STOOD HIS BACK STRAIGHT HE STOOD...AND HE STARED. WAS HE GOING TO KILL HER?

BACK TO THE PIZZA BOY
HELLO...HELLO IS ANYONE IN? I HAVE A PIZZA FOR MISS..... (WHAT WAS HER NAME AGAIN? ) HE RANG THE DOORBELL, ONCE, TWICE, HE PEEPED THROUGH THE LETTER BOX N KEYHOLE, LOOKS LIKE NO ONES IN, AS HE STARTED TO TURN AROUND HE NOTICED A LIGHT SHINNING FROM A WINDOW ABOVE, SO SOMEONE IS IN HE THOUGHT.......



TAKE IT AWAY GUYZZZZZ

The pizza boy....tried the door. It was open. He took a step in feeling a lil chill go down his spine...He was nervous...and loud *THUMP* made him drop the pixxa to the floor.....

OH NO STUPID PIZZA BOY, WHAT? A PIZZA ON THE FLOOR? WELL SHE AINT PAYIN FOR THAT



HEYYY

he was about to run like a scarrdy cat when he saw the moster thingie

but he stoppped at the face of the beautiful girl....and jsut kept starring at her in awww

THE STRANGE MAN DID NOT MOVE... THE PIZZA BOY WAS STOOD IN THE DOORWAY OF THE BATHROOM, HE STARED AT THE MAN, AND THEN THE WOMAN AND THEN BACK AT THE MAN, HIS JAW DROPPED AS HE SAW THE BLOOD COVERED BLADE DRIPPING ON THE BATHROOM FLOOR, A PUDDLE OF DEEP RED BLOOD ON THE FLOOR, IT MADE HIM CRINGE, HE FELF NERVOUS SEEING THE BLOOD...WHOS WAS IT? HAD THERE BEEN A MURDER HERE? SOMETHING FISHY IS GOING ON, IT WAS A MISTAKE TO WALK INTO THE HOUSE, WHAT HAVE I GOT MYSELF INTO THOUGHT THE PIZZA BOY, MAYBE I SHOULD BACK AWAY, I DON'T THINK HE'S SEEN ME. BUT THEN HE LOOKED BACK AT THE WOMAN...SHE WAS SO FRIGHTENED, SO HELPLESS (TYPICAL ) NO I MUST HELP, BUT HE WAS SO FRIGHTENED, WHAT SHOULD I DO? HE THOUGHT.........

he pulled a gun outta his back pocket....

(LOLZ WHATS A PIZZA BOY DOING WITH A GUN? )


THERE HE WAS, HOLDING THE CASULL SUPER RED HAWK REVOLVER, POINTED IT AT THE STRANGER WHO STOOD STILL, HE WAS STILL FACING THE WOMAN, HE HADN'T MOVED AN INCH. "FREEZE" HE SHOUTED AT THE MAN, "I'VE GOT A GUN, DON'T MOVE" (ALTHOUGH THE MAN WAS ALREADY "FROZEN" LOLZ) HE SLOWLY TURNED HIS EYES TOWARDS THE PIZZA BOY, HIS MOVEMENT SLOW AND CREEPY, AS HIS ATTENTION SHIFTED FROM THE WOMAN TO THE PIZZA BOY, HE RAISED HIS CLAWED HAND AS IF TO WARN THE PIZZA BOY. THE WOMAN QUICKLY JUMPED OUT OF THE BATH AND RAN TOWARDS THE DOOR AND HID BEHIND THE PIZZA BOY. "IT'S OK, I'M HERE NOW" SAID THE PIZZA BOY. THE MAN STOOD, NOW FACING THE TWO OF THEM, THE PIZZA BOY AND THE WOMAN, LIKE A STATUE. "DROP THE WEAPON" SAID THE PIZZA BOY, "DROP IT NOW OR I'LLL BLOW YOUR BRAINS ALL OVER THE BATHROOM FLOOR" THE MAN STOOD STILL...."NOW!!!" SHOUTED THE PIZZA BOY (GOSH HE'S SO DREAMY AINT HE LOLZ) THE MAN GAVE NO SIGN TO OBEY THE ORDERS GIVEN TO HIM BY THE PIZZA BOY, HE STOOD CALM...AND STILL, LIKE HE DIDN'T UNDERSTAND WHAT WAS BEING SAID TO HIM, LIKE HE DIDN'T HEAR THE ORDERS, LIKE HE WASN'T GOING TO SURRENDER, LIKE HE DIDN'T FEAR THE GUN. THE PIZZA BOY.........


(PHEW, COME ON GUYZZ BUILD UP THE SUSPENSE, I'M THROUGH, IT JUST AINT WORKIN LOLZ)

shoot the cops and then...