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Posted on 4/1/2008 3:06:21 PM

Very very Nice

Posted on 4/1/2008 5:06:49 PM

nice

Posted on 4/1/2008 7:15:39 PM

vry good

Posted on 4/2/2008 7:16:05 AM

Salaam
Apki Poetry MashAllah achi hain.
Abhi tak hum nay apki jitni bhi shairy parhi hain
in main the main point is "Pyaar,ishq".
Like "main nay dekha hain","Ajeeb shaks tha"
"Tumhara maan reh jaye"
Kya aap nay in topic say hatt kar bhi poetry likhi hain?

Posted on 4/2/2008 9:01:50 AM


very nice...

Posted on 4/2/2008 10:21:06 AM