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Freddy

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Pakistan, Pakistan
Date 25 december 2003
time 2:25
lahore model town B block market

sahat sardi paar rahi thi ...hum 5 dost jo kay pancho kay pancho he Velay hain aksaar raat kay 3 bajay tuk tandoor paar beth kaar logoon ki buraeyaan kartay rehtay thay...uss din be beth kaar uncle jimmy kay apni nokarani kay sath taza ishq ki bateen kaar rahay thay...kay bilkul samnay nawaz sharif park wali road sei hameen aik sayaa sa chalta nazar ayaa..uss ki chaal mein halki sei larkharahat thi...sub sei pehlay usay imran nein dekha jo kay aksaar hamen apni bahadari kay kisay sunata rehta tha...uss nein haam sub ko uss sayee ki taraf matvajoo karnay kay leye kaha wo dekoo kya hai ( ye tu uss nein hameen baad mein batya kay uss nein ye kaha tha warna uss wakt tu uss ki awaz bilkul aesi nikli thi jesay changa manga kay jungle ki poorani train ki seti nikalti hai)...hameen samaj tu kuch na ayaa magar uss ki udri hoyee rungat or nazreeen dekh kay haam nai foraaz uss taraf dekha..woe sayaa aab thora Qareeb aa geya tha ore saaf pata chal raha tha ye koi Auraat hai..jis kay baal khulay hoyee thay ore woe intahaii zeyada zevaar pehnay hoyee thi....yakeen kareen woe intahaii hobsuraat thi mein nein apni zindagi mein kabi itni khubsurat aurat nahi dehi thi...mein uss ko dekhna mein itna magaan tha kay mujay pata he nahi chala kaab sab dost uth kay bhaag geye hain ore mein akela he reh geya hoon...mujay jub apnay akelay rehnay ka ahsass hoaa tu mein nein Ami jee keh kay tandoor sei chulang lagayee ore zulfi kay phutay kay nechay guss geye jaha pehlay sei aram kartay hoyee aik kuttay nein bhoonk kay mera istukbaal kea...ghoor sei dekhnay paar pata chala woe kutta nahi woe tu apna imran hai daar kay mari jis kay mun sei kuttay jesi awaz nikli thi...mein nein imran sei pocha baki sub kaha hai tu uss nein esharay sei batyaa kamran masee hameeda kay ghaar ghuss geya hai ..nizam uss charsi munnavar ki razayee mein hai (nizam hum mein sei sub sei saaf suthara banta hai kabi kisi dosray kay glass mein pani nahi peta kisi dosray kay utray hoyee kapray nahi pehanta magar..)...ore adnan mein nein juldi sei pocha tu uss nein batayaa woe meray nichay hai...mein nein juldi sei adnan ko us kay nichay sei nikala warna uss ka akhri wakt aanay mein kuch he second reh geye thay ku kay imran hum seb mein sei sub sei hata kutta hai...mein nein dobara road ki taraf dekha tu uss auraat ko tandoor kay bilkul pass khara hoyaa dekha ..chehray sei kuch pareshaan lug rahi thi....mein nein socha hum aesi he daar rahay hain kya pata bechari koi musebaat ki mari ho ore uss ko hamari zaroorat hoo...ye he baat mein nein imran sei kahi tu uss nein apna bhenss jesa sir tezi sei hilana shuru kaar dea ore sath mein ghult shulat ayeeteen paarta raha...uss ayeet partay dekh kay mein nein be juldi sei koi ayeet yaad karnay ki koshish ki tu mujay ahsass hoyaa mujay tu savayee alhamduliah kay ore kuch be nahi aata..uss wakt mujay apnay muhalay kay molvi sahib bohot yaad ayee jo maar maar kay hameen ayeteen yaad karvatay thay magar hum nein be zid pakri hoyee thi kay chahay kuch be ho jayee tum sei ayeteen yaad nahi kaareen gey...usss wakt mujay aesa luga jesay molvi sab hanss rahay hoon ore kah rahay hoon dekha bachoo uss wakt yaad kaar letay tu ajj ye din na dekhna parta....mein nein rushak sei imran ki taraf dekha jo sir hilayee ayeet paar ayeeet parta ja raha tha..mein nein usay phir toka yaar lugta hai woe pareshaan hai shaeed rusta bhool geya hai aooh chultay hain uss sei pochatay hain usi koi problem tu nahi magar uss nein phir inkaar mein sir hila dea akheer jub mein nein useay gheraat deli kay tum tu barayee bareyee bateen kartay thay kay mein nein waha ye kea waha woe kea aab kya hoaa..kehnay luga yaar woe tu insaano ka mamla tha magar ye tu koi churail lugti hai ..mein nein kaha nai yaar koi churail nahi koi bachari aurat hai aoaah dekhtay hain..ye kah kay mein phutay kay nichay sei nikal ayaa allah ka naam lei kar jo kay hameen sirf aesay wakt he yaad aata hai uss ki taraf chal para ...mujay chalta hoaa dekh kaar imran ore adnan be meray pechay aa geye jin ko dekh kay meri himat kuch bhaar geye...hameen aata dekh kaar uss nein palat kaar hamari taraf dekaa uffff uss ki aankoon sei hoon nikal raha tha mein ghabra kaar 2 qadam pechay hath geya magar ghoor sei dekhnay paar pata chala woe hoon nahi uss ki aankoon ka rung tha jo kay laal surah tha...uss nein foraan he kaha excuse me...ye sun kaar meri jaan mein jaan ayee kay churalloo ko kaha english aati hai ye koi musebaat ki mari hoyee auraat he hai..excuse mein kya app mujay bata saktay hain children hospital ko kon sa rusta jata hai.....apnay lehjay sei mujay wo koi bohot achay handaan ki suljhi hoyee hatoon lugi...mein nein kaha jee app ghulat aa geye hain agar app nawaz sharif hospital sei sedhi road kay sath sath chalti tu waha pohanch jati yaha sei app ko bohot lumba paray ga ore ore agay tu verana he verana hai raat kay ess time tu ess taraf sei koi be nahi jata mujay lugta hai app ko rastoon ka pata nahi esee leye app ess taraf chali ayee....magar uss nein hanss kaar jawab dei don't worry mujay kuch nahi ho ga app sirf mujay bata dei yaha sei agay kaha jana hai mein yaheen sei jaoon gey ..mera bacha bohot bemaar hai ore mujay uss ko dekhnay jana hai dekhnay jana hai dekhnay jana hai kahti hoyee woe veranay ki taraf chal paari....haam mein sei kisi ki itni himat na hoyee kay usey roak sakeen... uss wakeyee kay baad hum sub apnay apnay ghar chalay geye ore sub ko he bohaar ho geye... uss kay baad hum nein raat ko tandoor paar behanay sei toba kaar lei ..ess wakyee kay aik month baad hamaray muhalay ki aik larkay kay pagal honay ki itla mili jo kay mera bacha bemaar hai mera bacha bemar hai chilata rehta hai..pata chala kay woe larka be raat ko tandoor paar behta rehta tha dostoon kay sath magar uss din woe akela tha ....ore sunanay mein ayaa hai kay uss larkay nein uss aurat kay sath badtameezi karnay ki koshish ki thi....

app loog aaj be uss lakray ko model town ki roadoon mein phirta hoa dekh saktay hain...jo kay pagloon ki tarha chilata rehta hai ha ha mera bacha bemar hai ha ha mera bacha bemar hai..

agar kisi kay sath koi es tarha ka sach vakeyaa hoa hai tu woe be sub kay sath shair kaar sakta hai .Magar sirf sacha wakyee!!!
Posted 03 Sep 2004

Freddy says
kekeke tumheen guayeen keh kon raha hai ..mera kehna ka mutlab tha tum aurat nahi larki hoo ore jin hamesha aurtoon paar aatay hain .. aab kya larki ore aurat ka farak be samjana paray ga
Posted 07 Sep 2004

Ashii says


o rite,,, theeek
abhi to me sirf 39 yrs old hu,, me chotti si larki hu na
Posted 07 Sep 2004

Freddy says
abi bachi he hoyee na ..jinoo mein 50 saal ka honnay kay baad bacha chalna sekhta hai
Posted 07 Sep 2004

Freddy says
vesay ye ashat kesa naam hoaa ?? mein nein insanoo mein kum sei kum esaa naam pehlay nahi suna...agar asha hota tu zeyada accha hota
Posted 07 Sep 2004

Ashii says
me kahan se jinn lagti hu





"""vesay ye ashat kesa naam hoaa"""
eh ???   matlab ??
Posted 07 Sep 2004

Freddy says
tumhara naam asha nahi hai kya
Posted 07 Sep 2004

Ashii says
asha ??
mera naam ??

kiss gadhe ne kaha yeh
Posted 07 Sep 2004

Freddy says
badtameez jaoo meri tumhari kutti
Posted 09 Sep 2004

faradiya ji aap ne tu mujyhey dara dia hai mein mt mein hi rehtee hoon lekin kabhie aisee larki tu nahin dekhee
Posted 09 Sep 2004

sharara says
aslee jin bhoot dekhne ke liye door nahi jana....

Apna admin hai na
Posted 09 Sep 2004

WAFA says
well fraudiya jin sirf aurtun ya larkyun per nahin attey,larkon per bhi aa saktay hain..HAMREY AIK Cousin per SHE GHOST ashiq hogee theen..aur unkay bed per say lambay lambay baal miltey thay unka room khud hi lock hojaata tha aur..etc etc..well bohut lambi story hay
Posted 09 Sep 2004

Freddy says
sunzz tum MT mein kis block mein rehti hoo ye kisa B block ka hai..

sacchi sharara jee vesay agar app ka naam sharara ki juga gharara hota tu zeyada accha lugta hehehehe
Posted 11 Sep 2004

Freddy says
agar gharara pasand nahi tu Ghobara hota hehehehe agar ye be nahi pasand tu Aaloo-buhara hota..
Posted 11 Sep 2004

Ashii says
kissss ne kaha mujhe badtameezzzzzzzzzzz











okk kehte raho,, i dont mind
kiss ne keh diya aap ko k mera naam asha hai ??



wafa
aisi draowni batein nahi karo yarr,,
waise yeh sach hai kya ??
Posted 11 Sep 2004

Freddy says
lagta hai tumheen daranay he paray ga HoHaHaHa..HoHaHaHa mut bhooloo kay tum ghaar mein akeli ho
Posted 12 Sep 2004

Ashii says


jii nahi mera meenu bhi mere saath hai
huhhhhhhhhhhhh..
aisi badruhon se darne waale
aae aasman nahi hum
Posted 12 Sep 2004

faradiya mein b block k bahut paas rehtee hoon
Posted 12 Sep 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 12 Sep 2004

Freddy says
Hey Guys i have found another story for you It's a sacha wakeya ..

June 1948
Hasanabdal (near GurDavara)

A gar kisi ka kabi Hasanabdal jana hoa ho tu woe janta ho ga kay hasanabdal mein sikhoon kay wakt kay poranay poranay ghar hain ..
kaha jata hai kay poranay waktoon mein sikhoon kay aik muqadass guru waha rehtay thay ..Jin kay naam sei aik bohot dilchasp wakeyaa be mansoob hai k aik dafa pahari kay upaar sei aik bohot bara patha tut kay nichay ayaaa ore unhoon nein usay apnay punjay sei roka ....Un kay punjay ka nishan aaj be aap waha dekh saktay hain.....jaha woe pathar rukha geya usay punja sahib ka naam deya geya jo ajj sikhoon ki aik muqass juga hai jaha haar saal hazaroon sikh india sei usay dekhnay aatay....


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uss sei be pehlay waha aik bazurg ka bohot churcha hoa jin ka naam Hasan tha ore Rohaniet mein un ka darja Abdal tha mutlab sheher ka kotavaal Un bazurg kay naam paar sher ka naam rukha geya HasanAbdal....

Esee HasanAbdal kay Androon muhalay mein aik larki rehti thi naam tu uss ka noreen tha magar sub pyar sei usay nazoo kehtay thay....nazoo thi be bohot pyari ..Ghar mein sub sei chooti honay ki waja sei sub uss kay nazz uthatay thay jis ki waja sei woe thori zidi ho geye thi..jub tuk apni baat na manva leti usay chaien na aata tha ore jo cheez aik baar uss kay demag mein sama jati haar qimaat paar usay pora karti....Baki ki kahani suneyeee Nazoo ki Zubani.

Hum sub saheleyaan aksaar shaam ko ghar ki Chuaet paar chaar kay uss baag ko dekha karti thi jis kay baray mein mashoor tha yaha shehzaday lalarukh ki Ruh aati hai ..apni shehzadai lalazaar ko dhoondnay kay leye....ye baag sikhoon kay gurdavary kay bilkul samnay hai....




Yun tu mujay kahi be janay ki aazadi thi magar baba nein mujay kabi uss baag ki taraf nahi janay dea tha ore mujay sahti sei uss baag ki taraf janay sei mana kea tha...
Garmeoon kay din thay ess leye hum sub ghar walay chuaet paar he sotay thay jub sub so jatay tu mein aksaar uth kay baag ki taraf ghentoon dekti rehti ....aik din aesay he mein khari ho kay baag ki taraf dekh rahi thi kay acchanak baag ka aik hisa roshaan ho geya ...roshani ka rung be ajeeb tha na woe white thi na woe yellow na orange woe tu kuch ore he kisam ki roshani thi ..insan ko apnay sehar mein chukaar denay wali roshani .methi methi sei roshani ...mujay aesa mehsoos honay luga jesay mein koi khooab dekh rahi hoon mujay apna wajood bilkul halka phulka lugnay luga bilkul aesa mehsoos hoa jesay mein hava mein taeer rahi hoon...mujay halki halki avazeen ani shuru ho geye jesay koi mujay pukaar raha hai Nazoo Nazoo Nazoo ..acchanak mujay kisi nein apnay mazboot hatoon mein pakaar leye ..meri aankoon kay aagay andheera chana shuru ho geye ore awazeen be ahesta ahesta halki honi shuru ho geye ..enn awazoon mein aab ore be awazeen shamal ho geye jesay bohot sei loog mil kay shoor macha rahay hain ..magar meri aankoon kay samnay aandhera ore ghehra hota geya ...shaied shaied ye maut ka aandher tha........

                             To Be Continued......
Posted 14 Sep 2004

Freddy says
sunzz ji b block mein aap kisi sei be poch lena ess wakeyee kay baray
Posted 15 Sep 2004

Ashii says
issse perhein ??
aur perh k darein ??

kya samjha hua hai
resume it
Posted 15 Sep 2004

Freddy says
kaal ajj mood nai
Posted 16 Sep 2004

Freddy says
hey i found some bhoot places in lahore and karachi will tell your there stories later
Posted 20 Sep 2004

Freddy says


can any one see a man in window ?
Posted 28 Sep 2004

Freddy says


ghost hanging
Posted 28 Sep 2004

WAFA says
faradiya said:



can any one see a man in window ?



HAAN TU?
Posted 28 Sep 2004

Freddy says
woe tumheen dekh raha hai ore tum abi tuk yaha bethi ho
Posted 29 Sep 2004

Ashii says
kya na yarrr
fake bhooot ki pics

aisi to me bhi bana sakti hu
Posted 29 Sep 2004

Xtreme says
Yea most of them are fakes !!
Posted 29 Sep 2004

Freddy says
asli dekhnay ki himat hai kya ?

raat kay 2 bajay dekhoo ..ye be asli he lugeen gey
Posted 30 Sep 2004

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