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sharara

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INTEZAAR TO HAI

    

    us ko mera halka sa ehsaas to hai

        be dard sahi woh meri humraaz to hai

            

       woh aaye na aaye mere paas lekin

        shidat se mujhe us ka intezaar to hai

               

             abhi nahi to kya hua mil hi jayengi kabhi

        mere dil main us se milan ki aas to hai

       

        pyaar ki gawahi mere aankhon se na maang

             barasti nahi aankhen magar dil uddas to hai
Posted 15 Oct 2004

yeah sharry.... this is rite....this is absolutely rite n WOW.... it depicts the true stories of u n me... hana... ney ways really nice n well done
Posted 15 Oct 2004

sharara says
yep.. u n i..
kafi din baad mili.. nice to see u here
Posted 15 Oct 2004

yeah... n thanx i think u were da only one to miss me....
Posted 15 Oct 2004

Aj dil tu dokha hai
Tum yaad aay
Anjanay loog hain
Apnay kahan dhond payaain...
Posted 15 Oct 2004

dil pay ik tarfa kayamt karna
muskuratay hoay rukhsat karna
achi ankhain jo mili hain is ko
kuch tu lazim hoa wahshat karna
JURM KIS KA THA, SAZA KIS KO MILI
AB KISI SAY NA MUHABBAT KARNA
Posted 15 Oct 2004

Freddy says
        dil dhoka hai tu dhoknay doe
               koi yaad aata hai tu aanay doe

        apnay be pehlay anjanay thay
               ayesay he woe be beganay thay

        4 din kay sath ko mohabat samjay
                hakekaat nahi woe tu afsanay thay

        2 ghari mein loog bhool jatay hai kesay
                toota hai dil paar! janay doe

       jul rahay hai ess agg mein hum be fradiya
                khub guzray gey jo mil bethay gey dewanay 2
Posted 15 Oct 2004

Freddy says

Dil pay na kabi kayamat karna
mohabat karna kabi shaadi na karna        
mehboob mera bhenga hai lakin
accha lagta hai aesay dekha karna
JURM MERA THA,SAZA BE MUJAY HE MILI
AYENDA MOHABAT SOCH SAMAJ KAY KARNA

Kue samjata hai mohabat kay maroo ko fradiya
Jayeez hai enn ka yun Vaveela karna
Posted 15 Oct 2004

Ashii says
mystttttttttttttttttt
donttt donntttt donnnnnnt talk to me




vv nice shary
bedard hi sahi woh mera humraaz to hai
Posted 16 Oct 2004

kuch log yaad karte hain leken zahir nahi karte...
Posted 16 Oct 2004

faradiya said:

        dil dhoka hai tu dhoknay doe
                koi yaad aata hai tu aanay doe

        apnay be pehlay anjanay thay
                ayesay he woe be beganay thay

        4 din kay sath ko mohabat samjay
                  hakekaat nahi woe tu afsanay thay

        2 ghari mein loog bhool jatay hai kesay
                  toota hai dil paar! janay doe

       jul rahay hai ess agg mein hum be fradiya
                  khub guzray gey jo mil bethay gey dewanay 2




well done.... u have said wat i wanted to write..... wow very nice....

4 din kay sath ko mohabat samjay
                  hakekaat nahi woe tu afsanay thay

        2 ghari mein loog bhool jatay hai kesay
                  toota hai dil paar! janay doe



SALL said:

mystttttttttttttttttt
donttt donntttt donnnnnnt talk to me




vv nice shary
bedard hi sahi woh mera humraaz to hai




hey sall kyon kiya hoa... mujh pay ghusa kyon ho .... hey agar main nay kuch kiya hai tu i m sorry... but plz aaisay naraz na ho sis...
Posted 16 Oct 2004

thanx mg1

n kuch loog jhota zahir kartay hain k they luv u but in actual they dont...they just show that they luv u but that all is fake.....huhh
Posted 16 Oct 2004

i m wrong..oke like always
Posted 16 Oct 2004

oh i m sorry SRK i thought u r saying k kuch loog pyar kartay nahin n zahir kartay hain coz i dint read ur post properly n thori si tumhari parhi n thori si mg1 ki aur likh diya....
Posted 16 Oct 2004

Freddy says
shukria shukria that's mean mein shaer bun sakta hoon
Posted 16 Oct 2004

i didnt say pyaar...mera matlab kuch nahi nahi batate ke wo kisi ko miss kar rahe hain...insaan khud janta hai ya Allah...other comes to say..nobody miss me...
Posted 16 Oct 2004

faradiya said:

shukria shukria that's mean mein shaer bun sakta hoon




lolzzzz
Posted 16 Oct 2004

waisay i m here after such a long time... n i m feeling sooooo happy n relaxed here wow
Posted 16 Oct 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
sharara said:

INTEZAAR TO HAI

    

    us ko mera halka sa ehsaas to hai

        be dard sahi woh meri humraaz to hai

              

       woh aaye na aaye mere paas lekin

        shidat se mujhe us ka intezaar to hai

                 

               abhi nahi to kya hua mil hi jayengi kabhi

        mere dil main us se milan ki aas to hai

       

        pyaar ki gawahi mere aankhon se na maang

               barasti nahi aankhen magar dil uddas to hai








RAMDAN MUBARIK


Posted 16 Oct 2004

sharara says
thanx ppl..
waise ek baat hai.. ehsaas jahan hota hai.. zaya nahi jaata.. mehsoos hota hai.. yeh bolte hain buzurg.. lekin mujhe yaqeen nahi aata..
shayad mein door jaa chuki houn.. bohut door..

khair.. nice to see u all in action...
Posted 16 Oct 2004

hmmm sharry u r rite...
Posted 16 Oct 2004

Freddy says
kitni door ja chuki ho kon sei door ja chuki ho ?? love peoples khud he nazdeek aa jaoo gey ...ager ye nahi hota tu nasha kaar kay kahi parii rahoo
i really don't like peoples who says such kind of -ve things.
abi tumharay age he kya hai ? tum nein dekha he kya hai ? duniya ko samja he kya hai ? khoyaa he kya hai ?you really don't know khonay ka kya mutlab hota hai...ya jo tum kaar rahi ho ye sub bahanay hain apni kamzorioon ko chupanay kay bahanay.
Posted 16 Oct 2004

i hope some day things wil get better for both of us....things will work for us... n some day we both get a chance to live again to smile again...i hope dat day will come really soon....
Posted 16 Oct 2004

faradiya said:

kitni door ja chuki ho kon sei door ja chuki ho ?? love peoples khud he nazdeek aa jaoo gey ...ager ye nahi hota tu nasha kaar kay kahi parii rahoo
i really don't like peoples who says such kind of -ve things.
abi tumharay age he kya hai ? tum nein dekha he kya hai ? duniya ko samja he kya hai ? khoyaa he kya hai ?you really don't know khonay ka kya mutlab hota hai...ya jo tum kaar rahi ho ye sub bahanay hain apni kamzorioon ko chupanay kay bahanay.




ya sab ap bas kah saktay ho... jab apko pata hi nahin hai tu aaisay kaisay kah rahay ho... wat do u know abt her.... u dont know a bit ok....
usay pata hai khonay ka matlab....she knows wat dis means ok....
i think u dont know haan...
n hey age say kuch nahin hota... main in say bhi choti hoon but same here... c'mon fradiya life is not abt saying only +ve things...
if u dont feel something +ve happening to u how can u talk +vely haan....
Posted 16 Oct 2004

Freddy says
share with me what is wrong with you girls after that i will clear my point
Posted 16 Oct 2004

lolzz....
u all guys are the same....
so its useless....
neyways....
we girls can live our lives on our own widout sharing our problems ....
Allah will keep us strong....AMEEN SUMA AMEEN
Posted 16 Oct 2004

sharara says
lol..
fradiya... the point is.. ur a guy.. thats our prob.. can u solve it?

common.. har kisi ki apni probs hoti hai na? is age a criteria? i doubt.. have a chat with me sometime...
ya to tum bhi samjhoge.. ya hosakta.. ek aur aajae humare list of "toi be murdered" mein.
Posted 16 Oct 2004

na sharry... these guys r proud to be guys...
ask us... then they will know they hurt us sooo much....
we pray for them soo much but wat do they do...
they have nothing else except hurting us.....
huhh
how can they solve our problems...
if they could do this tu we wouldnt be crying at this time....

huhh they can do nothing
Posted 16 Oct 2004

THIS LIFE HURTS

I want to run home,
hide from these bright faces,
the smiles that flash
like lightbulbs going on.
I want to wrap myself
in an old blanket,
roll under the bed
with last year's dust bunnies,
a single slipper, a cat toy
chewed up and left for dead.

I fear their voices,
their sure laughter. I fear
my heart beating too loud.
I fear the weight of all my futures
pressing on my chest.
I want to cry, and fear I am already.
I want to scream, afraid I have.
Dear God, this is worse than dying --
death was numb and took no effort.
This life hurts.
Posted 16 Oct 2004

Freddy says
cool!


agar mujay koi problem hai and i don't want to share with others mein kisi ko ye ehsass he nahi honay doon ga kay mein pareshaan hoon.
Posted 16 Oct 2004

This poem is about a guy who I had very deep feelings for. He came around when he wanted to, and I unfortunately put up with it.


TO THE ONE GUY I LUV THE MOST


He walks along
Walking all alone
But he can't see
That what he needs is me
He comes to me,
Then he'll leave again
He doesn't know
Just what it does to me

It hurts to see him
Walking all alone
It hurts, to be me,
To want but to not have him
But he can't see
Oh how much he hurts me

I take him back
Time and time again
But when he leaves
It happens all again
I hurt inside
A pain that is so deep
And he . . . he doesn't know

He doesn't know my pain
Or how much he hurts me
He lives his life
Just fine without me
But me, I hurt,
I hurt for only him
And all this time
He still doesn't know

I reach for him
Reaching oh so far
But he's not there
Not there at all
He's gone away
Away once again
But he'll be back
Sometime the end


this is my true story.... he came when he wanted to n left when he felt like leaving me... n then he came again but now he left n still i m alone...he is living his life... but i wish he come back....but i m sure it will be too late when he will realize....he will i guess but then i will be dead...
Posted 16 Oct 2004

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