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Ashii

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here s a new game,,
may b more interesting for those who like poetry

u ll have to complete a sher,,
dont worry it ll b something obvious,, or vvv vv known




here we start

nikalne khuld se aadam ka sunte aae the lekin
..............

Posted 10 Feb 2005

Ashii says
eeeeeeeeee zeeeeeeeeeeeeee..

hint :
nukta cheen hai, gham e dil uss ko sunae na bane
kya bane baat, jahan baat banae na bane
me bulata to hu uss ko, magar ae jazba e dil
...............



ting tinggg,,
kuch zehn mei aaya ??
Posted 15 Apr 2005

Us pay ban jaey kuch aisi k bholaey na banay

yech yech yechhhh

hug hug hug balich
Posted 16 Apr 2005

Ashii says
takreeeban
""uss pe ban jaae kuch aisi K BIN AAE NA BANE""

balicchhhh
shayar ho gai hai





next.......
""dil na umeed nahi, nakaam hi to hai
...............................


hint : (Faiz)
aik bolly movie ka song aise start hota hai
Posted 17 Apr 2005

pahlay jahi litha tha phil upel walay sher to read tiya
to laga tay yah nahin ho sat.ta Talay palay

toi baat nahin


bach abhi next nahin ho da na guech balich chay to sari hoshiyari thatam ho dani hay


hmmm

Dil hi to hay a gaya

hmmm nahin suna na hmmm
Posted 17 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
SALL said:

takreeeban
""uss pe ban jaae kuch aisi K BIN AAE NA BANE""

balicchhhh
shayar ho gai hai





next.......
""dil na umeed nahi, nakaam hi to hai
...............................


hint : (Faiz)
aik bolly movie ka song aise start hota hai




Dil naumeed tou nahi, nakaam hi tou hai
Lambi hai ghum ki sham,magar sham hi tou hai
Posted 18 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
Next......

Teray Ishq ki inteha chahta hoon




Posted 18 Apr 2005

Ashii says
balich
suna hoga song,,, from 1942 love story
"yeh safar bohot hai kathin magar"





deja vu
Posted 18 Apr 2005

Ashii says
DejaVu077 said:

Next......

Teray Ishq ki inteha chahta hoon


Meri sadgi dekh k kya chahta hu
Iqbal







next :
masjid to bana di shab bhar mei imaan ki hararat walon ne
..........

vv famous sher n event
Iqbal again
Posted 18 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
Posted 18 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
SALL said:

DejaVu077 said:

Next......

Teray Ishq ki inteha chahta hoon


Meri sadgi dekh k kya chahta hu
Iqbal






next :
masjid to bana di shab bhar mei imaan ki hararat walon ne
..........

vv famous sher n event
Iqbal again



Mann apna purana papi hai,Barsoon main namazi ban na saka
Posted 18 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
NEXT:
again IQBAL


Jinhain main dhondta tha aasmanoo main zameenoo main
Posted 18 Apr 2005

Ashii says
goooood
Posted 18 Apr 2005

Ashii says


mohabbat k liye dil dhoond koi tootne waala
yeh woh meh hai jisse rakhte hein nazuk aab-geeno mei
.........
Jinhain main dhondta tha aasmanoo main zameenoo
woh nikle mere dil k makeeno mei........

sahi se yaad nahi,,, sher ka wazan theek nahi hai,, there s something missing...
Posted 18 Apr 2005

LiL_DollY says
whats missing
Posted 18 Apr 2005

ONLYARBAB says
pata nahi
Posted 18 Apr 2005

Ashii says
Jinhain main dhondta tha aasmanoo main zameenoo
"woh nikle mere dil k makeeno mei"

donno wots missing,, but 2nd line s nt balanced
Posted 19 Apr 2005

ONLYARBAB says
pata nahi
Posted 19 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
SALL said:

Jinhain main dhondta tha aasmanoo main zameenoo
"woh nikle mere dil k makeeno mei"

donno wots missing,, but 2nd line s nt balanced





Good gob Sall

But u r ight its not balanced

correct shair is

Jinhain main dhondta tha aasmanoo main zameenoo main

woh nikle mere zulmat khana-e-dil k makeeno main


Posted 19 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
Next parveen shakir


Aks-e-khushbo hoon bikharnay say na rookay koi
Posted 19 Apr 2005

Aur bikhar jaon to mujh ko na samaitay koi

hamali SEEN ti fav poettt hain na


next

points bi dain na
Posted 21 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
Very good balich gee

yeah she is my fav too


points.............woh tou

sall hi day sakti hain

unka topic hai na
Posted 21 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
Next: Nasir Kazmi


Dil dharaknay ka sabab yaad aaya
Posted 21 Apr 2005

Ashii says
i didtn know the prev one,,,
balichh


Aks-e-khushbo hoon bikharnay say na rookay koi
Aur bikhar jaon to mujh ko na samaitay koi
Posted 21 Apr 2005

Ashii says
DejaVu077 said:

Next: Nasir Kazmi



Dil dharaknay ka sabab yaad aayawoh teri yaaad thi, ab yaad aaya

beht kar saya e gul mei nasir
hum bohot roe woh jab yaad aaya

Posted 21 Apr 2005

Ashii says
points ka kya karein ge yarrr..
pichle pooore pages count karne parein ge


hmm,,, okk ab se start karte hein


nasir kazmi again
kuch yaadgaar e shehr e sitam gar hi le chalein
aae hein iss gali mei to pathar hi le chalein,,
yun kiss tarha kate ga kri dhoop ka safar
...........................
Posted 21 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
Very good Sall
Posted 21 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
SALL said:

points ka kya karein ge yarrr..
pichle pooore pages count karne parein ge


hmm,,, okk ab se start karte hein


nasir kazmi again
kuch yaadgaar e shehr e sitam gar hi le chalein
aae hein iss gali mei to pathar hi le chalein,,
yun kiss tarha kate ga kri dhoop ka safar
...........................




Sar per khiyal-e-yar ki chadar hi lay chalain
Posted 21 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
Next Ahmed Faraz

Very easy one

Suna hai boolay tou batoon say phool ghartay hain
Posted 21 Apr 2005

Ashii says
greattttttt déjàvu
Déjàvu = 10




DejaVu077 said:

Next Ahmed Faraz
Very easy one

Suna hai boolay tou batoon say phool ghartay hain


cant complete the sher,, coz poori yaad nahi
par poem woh wali hai
"suna hai log usse aankh bhar k dekhte hein"
Posted 21 Apr 2005

DejaVu077 says
SALL said:

greattttttt déjàvu
Déjàvu = 10




DejaVu077 said:

Next Ahmed Faraz
Very easy one

Suna hai boolay tou batoon say phool ghartay hain


cant complete the sher,, coz poori yaad nahi
par poem woh wali hai
"suna hai log usse aankh bhar k dekhte hein"



Thanx


Yup its the same poem
Posted 21 Apr 2005

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