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LiL_DollY

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She was the the shower all alone @ night. Relaxing underneath the hot water and soap. Until something made her jump
and she slipped. The *CRASH*...made her nervous...for she was the only one home...or @ least she thought she was

the soap bar slipped from her hand
and landed at her feet
before she could reach down and get it............
Posted 22 Jun 2005

SohniKuddi says
LOLZ...NO ONE CALLED THE COPS..AT LEAST NOT YET

SO WHAT HAPPENED...KOI AUR NAHIN ENTRY MARE GA? YEH STORY HUMEIN HI END KARNI HE?

NO FUN NAH!
Posted 05 Jul 2005

LiL_DollY says
the pizza boy jumped on the metal enemy....and started kicking him and punching him
until....all the metal began to....
Posted 06 Jul 2005

SohniKuddi says
(LOLZ ONLY HIS HAND WAS METAL, ELSE WAS SKIN N BONES)AS THEY STRUGGLED ON THE FLOOR, THE STRANGERS METAL CLAW FELL TOWARD THE DOOR WHERE THE WOMAN STOOD, SHE LOOKED AT IT AND SLOWLY BET DOWN TO PICK IT UP, AS SHE LOOKED AT IT CAREFULLY SHE NOTICES IT WAS ENGRAVED, IT HAD SOMETHING WRITTEN ON IT, BUT IT WAS DIFFICULT TO MAKE OUT, SHE TOUCHED THE RED BLOODLIKE LIQUID SLAPSHED OVER IT AND THEN BROUGHT HER FINGER TOWARDS HER FACE TO SMELL IT, THE SMELL WAS BITTER, IT WAS BLOOD, SHE DROPPED THE CLAW IMMEDIATELY AS IT FELL TO THE BATHROOM FLOOR WITH A LOUD CLATTER, SHE WAS HORRIFIED, WHOS BLOOD WAS IT? THE SAME QUESTION SHE HAD BEEN ASKING HERSELF SINCE SHE HAD ENCOUTERED THIS HIDEOUS BEAST, THE SAME QUESTION REPEATED IN HER MIND AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN, WHAT WAS ENGRAVED ON THE CLAW? SHE HAD TO FIND OUT, BUT SHE DID NOT WANT TO TOUCH THE BLOOD.....

BACK TO THE STRUGGLE
THE PIZZA BOY TO THE LEFT AND THE STRANGER TO THE RIGHT, THEY PUNCHED AND KICKED, HE WAS STRONG, FOR SUCH A LEAN AND LANKY AND SKINNY INDUVIDUAL THE STRANGER WAS STRONG, HIS MOVEMENTS SWIFT, HE WASN'T GIVING UP EASILY, HE WAS GOING TO TAKE WHAT HE CAME FOR AND THEN LEAVE, NO ONE WAS GOING TO STOP HIM. NOW HE HAD THE PIZZA BOY IN A DIFFICULT POSITION, HE HAD PINNED HIM DOWN NEXT TO THE BATH, AND WAS LEANING OVER HIM, BOTH ARMS TIED BEHIND HIM WITH HIS FACE AGAINST THE FLOOR (FACE DOWN) THE PIZZA BOY COULDN'T MOVE "HELP, LET ME GO" THE STRANGER SLOWLY LEANED TOWARDS THE PIZZA BOY AND WHISPERED INTO HIS EAR "LEAVE".............
Posted 07 Jul 2005

LiL_DollY says
then the PIZZA boy kissed him.....
and the metal man said....EWWWWWWWW YUCKKKKK
and began to spiton the floor...

then....
Posted 07 Jul 2005

SohniKuddi says
WHEN I THOUGHT THIS WAS A HORROR STORY I NEVER THOUGHT U MEANT IT LITERALLY
I SEE NIGHTMARES COMING MY WAY
Posted 08 Jul 2005

SohniKuddi says
LiL_DollY said:

then the PIZZA boy kissed him.....
and the metal man said....EWWWWWWWW YUCKKKKK
and began to spiton the floor...

then....



AND THEN....I'LL ADD LATER
Posted 08 Jul 2005

LiL_DollY says
me 2
Posted 09 Jul 2005

SohniKuddi says
SLEEPY NOW...CARRY ON LATER
Posted 12 Jul 2005

LiL_DollY says
but you just came
Posted 12 Jul 2005

irsa says
you can carry on!
then the boy gets a knife and killed her and eat herup and the body disapears and no one knows where is the body gone...
SohniKuddi said:

WHEN I THOUGHT THIS WAS A HORROR STORY I NEVER THOUGHT U MEANT IT LITERALLY
I SEE NIGHTMARES COMING MY WAY

Posted 12 Jul 2005

LiL_DollY says
nobody knows
excet the boys girlfriend
who happens to be irsa
Posted 12 Jul 2005

irsa says
i dont know what will happen next!
Posted 13 Jul 2005

SohniKuddi says
LOLZ U GOTA MAKE IT UP
THATS THE WHOLE POINT
Posted 13 Jul 2005

irsa says
Posted 13 Jul 2005

SohniKuddi says
WOAH WOAH......WHAT HAPPENED? SO U GUYS SAYIN THAT THE PIZZA BOY (AFTER BEING KISSED BY THE STRANGER) GETS UP AND KILLS THE GIRL? N THE ONLY ONE WHO KNOWS WHATS HAPPENING IS HIS GIRLFRIEND CALLED...IRSA
THEN WHAT HAPPENED TO THE STRANGER?

O KI KARDE PAYE? SAARI KAHANI KHARAAB KARR DITTI CHALO HUN KANN PAKRDO...LOLZ HA HA HA
Posted 13 Jul 2005

irsa says
how can i be get in the story girlfriend and me!
no way!
Posted 13 Jul 2005

SohniKuddi says
SURE U CAN
Posted 13 Jul 2005

irsa says
what makes you think i can?
Posted 13 Jul 2005

SohniKuddi says
LOLZ I JUST KNOW

BACK TO THE STORY THEN
MERI GUDDIYAH RANI KITTHE GAYI?
Posted 13 Jul 2005

irsa says
i dont know!
Posted 13 Jul 2005

new_beau says
Posted 13 Jul 2005

irsa says
Posted 13 Jul 2005

LiL_DollY says
Irsa knew everything and she was a bad girl herself in the story
soshe didnt tell anyone about who her boyfriend killed.
Posted 13 Jul 2005

irsa says
how would i know guys ?
Posted 14 Jul 2005

LiL_DollY says
its a story duh make believe
Posted 14 Jul 2005

SohniKuddi says
OK OK, LETS PUT IT INTO CONTEXT.....


SO WHEN THE STRANGER RELEASES HIS GRIP ON THE PIZZA BOY, THE PIZZA BOY SLOWLY STANDS, HIS FACE LOOKING CONFUSED, THE STRANGER ALOWS ROOM FOR THE PIZZA BOY, HE MOVES BACK SLOWLY AS THE PIZZA BOY TURNS, THE STRANGER STANDS AND LOOKS AT THE PIZZA BOY WHO IS NOW LOOKING AT THE WOMAN, THE STRANGERS EYES NARROW, FIXED ON THE PIZZA BOY, HIS FACE LOOKING PLAIN, EXPRESSIONLESS, SINISTER, HIS FETURES TENSED AS HE FOCUSES ON THE PIZZA BOY.

THE PIZZA BOY STANDS FROZEN, HE LOOKS STRAIGHT AT THE WOMAN HIS FACE PLANE, EXPRESSIONLESS, HE LOOKED AS IF UNDER SOME TRANCE, LIKE HE HAD NO CONTROL OVER HIS ACTIONS, HE LOOKED STRAIGHT PAST THE WOMAN, ALTHOUGH HE WAS FACING THE WOIMAN, STRANGELY HIS EYES FOCUSED PAST THE WOMAN WHO WAS STANDING IN THE DOORWAY. HIS CHEST RAISED AND THEN LOWERD AS HE BREATHES SLOW AND SHALLOW THROUGH HIS NOSE, THE CORNERS OF HIS MOUTH LOWERED AND LIPS A HORIZONTAL LINE. HIS EYES.......DEEP AND DEAD. HIS HANDSOME FEATURES RELAXED HE SLOWLY WALKED TOWARDS THE WOMAN WHOS BREATHE ESCAPES HER THROAT, HER HEART BEATS HER MUSCLES PARALYSED, "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" SHE ASKS THE PIZZA BOY AS THE PIZZA BOY CONTINUES TO WALK TOWARDS HER, GETTING NEARER AND NEARER, HIS BROWS TWITCH HIS EYES FOCUS HARDER, AS HE FROWNS AS IF HE DOESN'T WANT TO DO WHAT HE IS ABOUT TO DO (DID U GET THAT? LOLZ) "PLEASE SPEAK TO ME? DON'T HURT ME, PLEASE HELP ME" SAID THE WOMAN IN HER SHAKY VOICE, SHE TREMBLED WITH FEAR, A DROP OF SWEAT ROLLED DOWN THE PIZZA BOYS FACE, FROM THE CORNER OF HIS FOREHEADAROUND PAST THE CORNER OF HIS EYE AND THEN CONTINUED ROLLING DOWN HIS CHEEK UNTIL IT REACHED THE BOTTOM OF HIS JAW AND SPLASHED ON THE FLOOR, THE WOMAN ALMOST IMAGINED THE DROP MAKING A SPLASHING SOUND, AS SHE RAISED HER GAZE BACK TO THE PIZZA BOYS FACE WHOS WAS NOW STOOD ALMOST 1 FOOT AWAY FROM HER. THE TENSION IN THE ROOM WAS SO THICK YOU COULD SLICE IT WITH A BUTTER KNIFE.

THE PIZZA BOY SLOWLY BENT DOWN......AND LIFTED THE METAL CLAW, THAT THE WOMAN HAD DROPPED AFTER NOTICING THE BLOOD SMEARED ALL OVER IT. HE LOOKED AT IT, CONFUSED, AND THEN PUT IS HAND THROUGH THE HANDLE, HE LOOKED UP AT THE WOMAN, SHE CRIED, SHE WANTED TO RUN, SHE COULDN'T MOVE, "NO...NO PLEASE" SHE MANAGED TO MUMBLE THE WORDS, THE LUMP IN HER THROAT CHOKED HER, ALL THOUGHTS ASCAPED HER MIND, SHE WAS BLANK, SHE KNEW WHAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN BUT COULDN'T DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT, SHE WAS READY....TO BE KILLED.

HE SLASHED HER WITH THE BLADES OF THE CLAW, WITH ONE MIGHTY PUSH HE FORCED THE BLADES INTO HER STOMACHE AND RIPPED HER ABDOMEN FROM HER BELLY UPWARDS TO HER RIB CAGE, SHE STOOD THERE, HER EYES WIDE WITH HORROR, BLOOD SPATTERED ALL OVER THE FLOOR, IT OOZED OUT OF HER MOUTH AND NOSE, SHE TREMBLED UNCONTROLABLY AS THE LIFE WAS SUCKED OUT OF HER, SHE MUMBLED AND THEN, HER EYES SLOWLY ROLLED INTO HER HEAD AND SHE WAS FINISHED, THE PIZZA BOY STOOD THERE WITH THE CLAW IN THE WOMAN BODY, HE RELEASED HIS GRIP ON THE CLAW AND THE WOMAN FELL TO THE GROUND WITH A LOUD THUD, THE BLOOD ON THE FLOOR WAS NO LONGER A PUDDLE, IT WAS A RED SEA OF THICK BLOOD. SHE LAY STILL LIFELESS, HER EYES STILL OPEN, HER PUPILS IN HER HEAD.

ALL THROUGH THIS, THE STRANGER STOOD AND WATCHED WITH THE SLIGHTEST SMILE ON HIS FACE AND A HINT OF JOY. BUT IT WASN'T ONLY THE STRANGER WHO SAW THE GOINGS ON, THE BRUTAL MURDER THAT TOOK PLACE HERE, THROUGH THE WINDOW, OUTSIDE SHE STOOD, WITH A HORRIFIED EXPERSSION ON HER FACE, HER JAW DROPPED, THE PIZZA BOYS'S GIRLFRIEND IRSA HAD JUST WITNESSED A COLD BLOODED MURDER.
Posted 15 Jul 2005

SohniKuddi says

te firr ki hoya?
Posted 15 Jul 2005

LiL_DollY says
woah sohni thats hecka long

(Ill respond...in 10 days )
Posted 15 Jul 2005

SohniKuddi says
, WELL HURRY N COME,MAKE IT A LONG ONE, LONGER THAN MY POST
Posted 17 Jul 2005

LiL_DollY says
irsa fainted
and became uncouncious
she coudlnt blieve what happened in fornt of her eyes...
but deep down inside she was also happy because.....
Posted 29 Jul 2005

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