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rao_buddy
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friends here is the game of batbazi start new with last digit
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yehi behtar hoga keh katra key nikal janey dey
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"Arz-o-Sama'a pay rang tha kaisa, uter gaya"
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abhi to roop saroop ka sona charda hua hey sooraj ban kar
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Mata e jaan ka badal aik pal ki sarshari
sulook khaab ka aankhon se tajirana tha
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"Insha jee utho Ab Kooch kero, Iss Shehar mainn Jee ko Lagana Kiya"
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chalo fer
uss ki aankhon mei basharat thi nae khabon ki
me usse dekh k chonka bhi nahi tha shayad
aik baadal k mere naam se mansoob hua
mere sehra mei to barsa bhi nahi tha shayad
DAAL
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dil ko kisi ka samna karne ki taab hi na thi
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daktarr
u and ur msn nicks
Aasman aas liye hai k yeh jaadoo toote
chup ki zanjeer kate wakt ka daaman choote
de koi sankh duhaee koi payal bole
koi buut jaage koi sanwli ghoonghat khole
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ye udasiyoN ki raateiN chalo andherey meiN hi kaateiN
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Yeh zameen pe jinn ka tha dabdaba k buland arsh pe naam tha
unhein yun falak ne mitta diya k mazaar ka bhi nishan nahin
NOON
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nawa-pera ho a bulbul k ho tere tarannum se
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"Ibtaday-e-Ishq hay Rota hay Kiya
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Ak Dil K dard ko dil tornay waala kya jaane
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Na jaane kab meri duniya ---------mein muskurayega
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First post here....
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Welcome Naima
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aansu nikal parday to meri laaj reh gai
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"Yeh Barf Zaar Baden say na jaann say niklay ga"
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aaj kuch zakham nayaa lehja badal ke aaye
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"Hum Nay Hans Hans kay Bharam Ahl-e-Wafa ka Rakha
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Yeh khamooshi to merey dil ki deewarien ghira deygi
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HAY....
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Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat
hawwa ki beti
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Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai
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aikalone said: Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat
hawwa ki beti said: Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai
HKB...Last word was NAHEE....it should be NAHINN in urdu...so last HARF is NUUN....
Please Correct your Shair and Then I will continue...
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new_beau said:
aikalone said: Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat
hawwa ki beti said: Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai
ok jee my shair is with noon
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"najaanay kaun duaoonn mainn yaad rakhta hay"
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Ye sach hay agar yaqeen hota palat kar tarey aaney ka
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