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rao_buddy
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friends here is the game of batbazi start new with last digit kash tera ghar hotta maghrib ki janib main sajde kia karta KABBA ka bahana
new_beau
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ALIF ik umr say khursheed kay saye mainn kharay hainn hum ko teray daamann ki zaroorat bhi nahin hay yeh
hawwa ki beti
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yehi behtar hoga keh katra key nikal janey dey saamna hoga to dil -----phir sey machal jae ga alif
new_beau
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"Arz-o-Sama'a pay rang tha kaisa, uter gaya" "Aandhi chali tou Shaam ka Chehra uter gaya" ALIF
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abhi to roop saroop ka sona charda hua hey sooraj ban kar jab in roshan meenaaron se dhoop dholay to aa jana tum.. Meem
Ashii
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Mata e jaan ka badal aik pal ki sarshari
sulook khaab ka aankhon se tajirana tha
ALIF
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"Insha jee utho Ab Kooch kero, Iss Shehar mainn Jee ko Lagana Kiya" "Wehshi ko sukoonn say kiya matlab, Jogi ka Nagar mainn Thikaana Kiya ?" ALIF
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chalo fer
uss ki aankhon mei basharat thi nae khabon ki
me usse dekh k chonka bhi nahi tha shayad
aik baadal k mere naam se mansoob hua
mere sehra mei to barsa bhi nahi tha shayad
DAAL
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dil ko kisi ka samna karne ki taab hi na thi acha kiya k aankh ne aansu ko dermyaan kiya.. I just love it. bohat baar nick rakha hey. aor dil chahta hey hamesha rakhoon.... Alif
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daktarr
u and ur msn nicks
Aasman aas liye hai k yeh jaadoo toote
chup ki zanjeer kate wakt ka daaman choote
de koi sankh duhaee koi payal bole
koi buut jaage koi sanwli ghoonghat khole
lovvvvvve it
YEH
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ye udasiyoN ki raateiN chalo andherey meiN hi kaateiN jo chiraagh bujh chukey heiN ab kya unhaiN jalaana
new_beau
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ALIF "Achhay Kabhi Buray Hainn Halaat Aadmi kay" "Peechhay lagay huaye hainn..din raat aadmi kay" YEH
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Yeh zameen pe jinn ka tha dabdaba k buland arsh pe naam tha
unhein yun falak ne mitta diya k mazaar ka bhi nishan nahin
NOON
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nawa-pera ho a bulbul k ho tere tarannum se kabootar k tan-e-naazuk main shaheen ka jigar peda.. alif
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"Ibtaday-e-Ishq hay Rota hay Kiya Aagay Aagay Dekhiyey Hota hay kiya?" ALIF
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Ak Dil K dard ko dil tornay waala kya jaane pyar K rivaj ko ye zamana kya jaane hoti hai kitni takleef kabar mein uper se phool chardhhane waala kya jaane" noon
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Na jaane kab meri duniya ---------mein muskurayega Woh aik shaks keh khwaboon mein bhi khafa sa lagay yeh
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First post here.... YEa udasi0n kI ratEin chal0 andEray mEin katEin... J0 charaG buJ chukaY ab kiyA unhEin jalanA.... (alif)
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Welcome Naima ALIF ik samt paas-e-Ishq tha, ik Samt apna maan kaisay Gurez kertay, Koi Raasta na tha" ALIF
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aansu nikal parday to meri laaj reh gai warna izhaar-e-ghum ka saleeqa na tha mujhe.. ye
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"Yeh Barf Zaar Baden say na jaann say niklay ga" "Lahoo ho Sard tou Shola kahann say Niklay ga" ALIF
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aaj kuch zakham nayaa lehja badal ke aaye aaj kuch log naaye milgaye ahbaab ke saath
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"Hum Nay Hans Hans kay Bharam Ahl-e-Wafa ka Rakha Hum bhi Ro Detay, Agar Ishq mainn Jhootay Hotay" YEH
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Yeh khamooshi to merey dil ki deewarien ghira deygi Mohabbat ho na ho per lab hila aahista aahista
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HAY.... "Ho na ho yeh Shab-e-Firaaq Hay Ashar" "Iss raat ki Aankhonn ki Shanasayee Bohat hay"
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Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat kiyoon hamain subh-e-darekhshan ka intizaar nahee
hawwa ki beti
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Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai Ya apni hee taqdeer main aram nahin hai Tootay ga to qeemat main kuch aur barhay ga Saqee yeh mera Dil hai koee Jaam nahin hai
new_beau
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aikalone said: Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat kiyoon hamain subh-e-darekhshan ka intizaar nahee
hawwa ki beti said: Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai Ya apni hee taqdeer main aram nahin hai Tootay ga to qeemat main kuch aur barhay ga Saqee yeh mera Dil hai koee Jaam nahin hai
HKB...Last word was NAHEE....it should be NAHINN in urdu...so last HARF is NUUN....
Please Correct your Shair and Then I will continue...
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new_beau said:
aikalone said: Yoon shab-e-taar main batee gee kiya apni hayat kiyoon hamain subh-e-darekhshan ka intizaar nahee
hawwa ki beti said: Ya gardish_e_ ayam ko koee kaam nahin hai Ya apni hee taqdeer main aram nahin hai Tootay ga to qeemat main kuch aur barhay ga Saqee yeh mera Dil hai koee Jaam nahin hai
HKB...Last word was NAHEE....it should be NAHINN in urdu...so last HARF is NUUN.... Please Correct your Shair and Then I will continue... ok jee my shair is with noon instead of Y Neend to dard k bistar peH bhi aa sakti hai Teri aaghosh mein sar ho yeh zaroori to nahi NEXT WITH> NOON< as well
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"najaanay kaun duaoonn mainn yaad rakhta hay" "doob bhi jaoon tou samander uchaal deta hay" yeh
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Ye sach hay agar yaqeen hota palat kar tarey aaney ka tU phool kee tarah ham bhee taree raah main bikhar jatey Yeh
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