My own poetry

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WARMTH OF LOVE

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Posted 20 Mar 2003



okay dokie

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé
Posted 09 Apr 2003

Cute_gal says
to kab tak hogi aap ki book publish??
Posted 10 Apr 2003



well don't worry ... jab ko finnace karay ga :P lolz j/k

Wãrm¯|¯h oƒ Løvé
Posted 10 Apr 2003

Cute_gal says
hehehehehehehe....ask dosselpoh na....
Posted 12 Apr 2003

dosselpoh says
main hi keroon her kaam.....cute kuch app bhi ker loo
Posted 12 Apr 2003

quote:
hehehehehehehe....ask dosselpoh na....

okay puach loun ga... :)

quote:
main hi keroon her kaam.....cute kuch app bhi ker loo

bahi kay hotay howay cute kaam karti howi achi lagay gie :P lol j/.k
Posted 12 Apr 2003

dosselpoh says
yeah u r rite....cute app aram kerooo

wasay baray bhai kay hotay way...jhota bhai kaam kerta acha lagta ha[:P]
Posted 12 Apr 2003

Cute_gal says
quote:
Originally posted by dosselpoh

main hi keroon her kaam.....cute kuch app bhi ker loo



aur kiya karoon mai....[^]
Posted 12 Apr 2003

Cute_gal says
quote:
Originally posted by dosselpoh

yeah u r rite....cute app aram kerooo

wasay baray bhai kay hotay way...jhota bhai kaam kerta acha lagta ha[:P]



xactlyyyy....:P
Posted 12 Apr 2003

chk this out .. some pplz weren't sure that i could write Poetry
Posted 17 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
nice
Posted 17 Dec 2004

knew dat
Posted 18 Dec 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
WARMTH OF LOVE said:




waoo bhai
app bhi hamery hi zook
kay niklay

khobh gozray gye gye jo mill bethyn gay diwany doooooooooooo
Posted 18 Dec 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
bhoolta hai na dil main utarta hai mujhe


bhoolta hai na dil main utarta hai mujhe

hamesha mar muhabat ki marta hai mujhe

main us ka lamha-e-mojood hhon magar woo shakhs

fazool waqat samajh ke guzarta hai mujhe
Posted 18 Dec 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
jisyy ma chahtii thii or pojtii thii

jisyy ma chahtii thii or pojtii thii

joo sorut meryy khawaboon ma bastii thii

osey koi assi morut pasund thii

joo kisii shair ki ghsazl kii sii thii

jis ki hunsii ik sorela sazz thii

jis ki khoobsortii chhertii subha sii thii

jis kii awaz koiyul ka ragg thii

jis ki her bat apnii janib apeal kerty thii

jis ki rangut ujlii chnadadii si thii

jis ki narazgii pay gerdish-e duniya thumtii thii

jis ki her ahut per zamen ruktii thii

jsiki her ik ada dilrubba thii

joo huud ik huseen bala thii

han wohii joo kisi ki aina-e zindagii ka akus thii

jis ki ass ma kisii na zindagii guzarnaii thii

woh mein nahii koi or thii

jisyy ma jnatii thii or mantii thii

osy meryy nahii kisii or kii chah thii
Posted 18 Dec 2004

guest. says
thts nice WOL
agar yeh sab app nay shuru mein likha tha to
jo abb likha ho ga..woh kiya ho ga
very nice
keep it up !!
Posted 18 Dec 2004

first of all thanks ... Api ... :)



kash_beauty said:

thts nice WOL
agar yeh sab app nay shuru mein likha tha to
jo abb likha ho ga..woh kiya ho ga
very nice
keep it up !!


thanks...

aab ki poetry ... i've not been writing poetry since 2 years ... and i jus did poetry for One year ... or one and half.. and in between i have written 125 Ghazals + 200 Shairs. and some poem

one of Poem "Ek Shakhas" (a person) is ... 3 pages long. :)

once i share my poetry @ FM-100 Radio was very famous for some time. anywayz ..
Posted 18 Dec 2004

SupidGuy says

wah wah wah
yahan tu bare bare Ahem Ahem pare hein......


btw nice WOL Ji.......



Posted 18 Dec 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
WARMTH OF LOVE said:

first of all thanks ... Api ... :)



kash_beauty said:

thts nice WOL
agar yeh sab app nay shuru mein likha tha to
jo abb likha ho ga..woh kiya ho ga
very nice
keep it up !!


thanks...

aab ki poetry ... i've not been writing poetry since 2 years ... and i jus did poetry for One year ... or one and half.. and in between i have written 125 Ghazals + 200 Shairs. and some poem

one of Poem "Ek Shakhas" (a person) is ... 3 pages long. :)

once i share my poetry @ FM-100 Radio was very famous for some time. anywayz ..





well come bahi
Posted 19 Dec 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
Jaane Kaisay Kab Aur Kahan
Ikraar Ho Gaya
Hum Sochte Hi Reh Gaye
Aur Pyar Ho Gaya
Jaane Kaisay Kab Aur Kahan
Ikraar Ho Gaya
Hum Sochte Hi Reh Gaye
Aur Pyar Ho Gaya

Gulshan Banni Galiyan Kabhi
Phool Ban Gaiye Galiyan Kabhi
Lagta Hai Mera Sehra Tayyaar Ho Gaya
Hum Sochte Hi Reh Gaye
Aur Pyar Ho Gaya

Tumne Humhe Bebas Kiya
Dil Ne Humhe Dhoka Diya
Uff Tauba Jeena Kitna Dushvaar Ho Gaya
Hum Sochte Hi Reh Gaye
Aur Pyar Ho Gaya

Hum Chup Rahe
Kuch Na Kahoon
Kehna Ko Kiya Baaki Raha
Bus Ankhon Ankhon Main Izhaar Ho Gaya
Hum Sochte Hi Reh Gaye
Aur Pyar Ho Gaya

Jaane Kaisay Kab Aur Kahan
Ikraar Ho Gaya
Hum Sochte Hi Reh Gaye
Aur Pyar Ho Gaya
Jaane Kaisay Kab Aur Kahan
Ikraar Ho Gaya
Hum Sochte Hi Reh Gaye
Aur Pyar Ho Gaya


Posted 19 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 21 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 21 Dec 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
Posted 21 Dec 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
Posted 21 Dec 2004

Fairl_Girl says
Posted 22 Dec 2004

SupidGuy said:


wah wah wah
yahan tu bare bare Ahem Ahem pare hein......


btw nice WOL Ji.......




thankoo ...

aham ahamm yaar vicks ki goli lo :)
Posted 22 Dec 2004


topic was .. my own potry ... so plz stick up with urs own poetry if you have :)


wasay nice contribution.... but plz ... chk out the topic name :$ hehehe
Posted 22 Dec 2004

my own poetry
abhi parhi nahin
phir comments doon ki asli walay
Posted 22 Dec 2004

WAFA says
hum bhi perhiangay...per abhi janna hay..
Posted 22 Dec 2004

~CHANDNI~ says
WARMTH OF LOVE said:


topic was .. my own potry ... so plz stick up with urs own poetry if you have :)


wasay nice contribution.... but plz ... chk out the topic name :$ hehehe




oppps mushkil may dall diya
wesy ap to   chopay rustam niklay
Posted 23 Dec 2004

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