Mera Jaam Chhoonay Waalay....

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Posted 17 May 2006

Freddy says
bohot khoob apna beau mian
hameen be sekhaa dein ye shaeri kay utaar charhaooo
Wazan wagera
Posted 26 May 2006

wafakadard says
new_beau said:

       Kidher nahin jao..Buss "Udher" Cahli Jao



jab bhi kabhi saaaki ke saath nhi kabahi hamaray saath jaaam lagay ghaaa
balooon say bhi juldi tujay kud sanwarnaa aa jay ghaaa
Posted 26 May 2006

Ashii says
** edited oups **

nasha sharaab ka deevangi se rihai de ga
suroor hoga magar mehboob na dikhai de ga
honge mehw e raqs jab aise mastana e ishq
zanjeer ka faida hai kya? ye na sujhai de ga

aise aise sher hum se kehelwa rahe hein aap
shairi pe hoga zulm to shayar gawahi de ga
Posted 26 May 2006

Ashii says
haaaaaaaahahahahhahahaaa...
heeeeheheheheee...
haaahaha aaahhaaa..


meriii zindagiii k maalik
apne kanon pe haath rakh le
meri shairi sunn k
tera damm nikal na jaae
Posted 26 May 2006

Freddy says
new_beau said:

Freddy said:

jhoomtaaa aa raha haiiiii kueeee baaadallllllllllll
lagta hai ye be koiiiii shaaarabiiii haiiiiiiiiiiiii
Chaaal mastanaaaaaa
nazar gulabiii haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii






Ek Shoorish ko tum Fazaooon mai Daaal kaar
Zanjeeray Ruks-o-Sarooo Paooon mai daaal kaar
hameen Kasaas-ay Ishq sunatay ho Ashaar
Hakaeek kay ziker mehaaz havaaaoon mai daal kaar
Posted 26 May 2006

Freddy says
Sall woe badal he haiiiiiiii Truck nahi......bohot pei lei hai tum nai bussss hath mut lagana abb

Posted 26 May 2006

new_beau says
Freddy said:

bohot khoob apna beau mian
hameen be sekhaa dein ye shaeri kay utaar charhaooo
Wazan wagera



InshaAllah...I am coming soon with Two Major Topics..

1. Shayari | Wazan aur Baher ka Istaimaal

2. Shayari | Islahaat

I am little busy bcoz its High Season for Travel Agents..InshaAllah After 1 Month I will start these Topics.


wafakadard said:

new_beau said:

       Kidher nahin jao..Buss "Udher" Cahli Jao



jab bhi kabhi saaaki ke saath nhi kabahi hamaray saath jaaam lagay ghaaa
balooon say bhi juldi tujay kud sanwarnaa aa jay ghaaa




SALL said:


nasha sharaab ka deevangi se rihai de ga
suroor hoga magar mehboob na dikhai de ga
honge mehw e raqs jab aise mastana e ishq
zanjeer ka faida hai kya? ye na sujhai de ga

aise aise sher hum se kehelwa rahe hein aap
shairi pe hoga zulm to shayar gawahi de ga



Yeh tou kaafi Wazan mainn hay... Khud Likha hay Kiya..If Yes

SALL said:

haaaaaaaahahahahhahahaaa...
heeeeheheheheee...
haaahaha aaahhaaa..


meriii zindagiii k maalik
apne kanon pe haath rakh le
meri shairi sunn k
tera damm nikal na jaae



Suna hay aap ki ik muskuraahat pay log mertay hainn....Keep Smiling and help to reduce population

Freddy said:

new_beau said:

Freddy said:

jhoomtaaa aa raha haiiiii kueeee baaadallllllllllll
lagta hai ye be koiiiii shaaarabiiii haiiiiiiiiiiiii
Chaaal mastanaaaaaa
nazar gulabiii haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii






Ek Shoorish ko tum Fazaooon mai Daaal kaar
Zanjeeray Ruks-o-Sarooo Paooon mai daaal kaar
hameen Kasaas-ay Ishq sunatay ho Ashaar
Hakaeek kay ziker mehaaz havaaaoon mai daal kaar


Uncle Meray Shaironn ko Alter met kero..mainn darrker yahan Shair post kerna chhor doon ga

Freddy said:

Sall woe badal he haiiiiiiii Truck nahi......bohot pei lei hai tum nai bussss hath mut lagana abb



Ver well said...
Posted 26 May 2006

Ashii says
Freddy said:

Sall woe badal he haiiiiiiii Truck nahi......bohot pei lei hai tum nai bussss hath mut lagana abb


teriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii jeib se jata hai kya









arz kiya hai
ahhhhhhh khe khe (bohot din ho gae the)

jhoot na bolo freddy putar,, aap aur truck driver saath beth k p rahe the
freddy k nakhron se Allah bachae
aise jhooton se Allah bachae
Posted 27 May 2006

Ashii says
new_beau said:

Yeh tou kaafi Wazan mainn hay... Khud Likha hay Kiya..If Yes

Suna hay aap ki ik muskuraahat pay log mertay hainn....Keep Smiling and help to reduce population


amaaaa naya bhai sahaab
aik aik lafz tol k jara hai,, wazan mei kahe na ho


han bass kya karein,, log kissi ko khush dekh nahi sakte,, hum soch rahe hein pak shift ho ja'ain




2nd sher mubarik ka matlab samajh nahi aaya
waise bhi yeh chooma chati waale sher hum ko samajh nahi aate
Posted 27 May 2006

new_beau says
lolz@chooma chati


KAKUL = Zulf...Mehboob akay Bheegay Baalonn ko Choom liya tha Jis say Meri Zubaan say Nikaltay Lafzonn ki Taaseer hi badel gayee..
Posted 27 May 2006

Ashii says
astakhfirullaaaaahhh !!!!
jo marzi karo bhui,, hum ko to na batao








waise zulfon ki baat nahi hai,,
mehboob ne lakhnow marka shampoo use kiya hoga,, with dehlvi conditioner


(jawab mei deir hai,, abhi to nashta bhi nahi kiya hum ne)
Posted 27 May 2006

new_beau says
ok waiting for you "jawab"
Posted 27 May 2006

Ashii says


jawab mei deir hai
hum ne abhi abhiiii nashta kiya hai
Posted 28 May 2006

Freddy says
new_beau said:



InshaAllah...I am coming soon with Two Major Topics..

1. Shayari | Wazan aur Baher ka Istaimaal

2. Shayari | Islahaat



app ka season hatam honay tuk kaheen "Aaamad" he na hatam ho jayee
Posted 28 May 2006

Freddy says
SALL said:

Freddy said:

Sall woe badal he haiiiiiiii Truck nahi......bohot pei lei hai tum nai bussss hath mut lagana abb


teriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii jeib se jata hai kya









arz kiya hai
ahhhhhhh khe khe (bohot din ho gae the)

jhoot na bolo freddy putar,, aap aur truck driver saath beth k p rahe the
freddy k nakhron se Allah bachae
aise jhooton se Allah bachae


wah waah saari zindi hamari jeeb sei Piiii ore aab jub hum khalass ho geyeeeeee tu aesay aesay taanay kay kaleejaa qeeema bananay wali machine mai daaal deya ho
nikal jayeee gey tumharii kekekekeke zaraa hamra project hatam ho jayeee

peiiiiiii rahay thay tu phirrrrrrrr wessi be hameeen lasssi kaheen be milay hum nahi choortay......


chal chal nakray tu tumharay hainnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
ore jhooooti ho gey tum khuuuuuuuuud
Posted 28 May 2006

Ashii says
jawab mei aur deir hai
hum ne lunch nahi kiya





amaa kibla freddy,, kaleja keema ho aap k dushmanon ka
hum to athkeliyan kar rahe the aap ne dil pe le liya
aap kahan aur nakhre kahan,, aur jhooot.... Allah maaf kare aap to sachai mei dhule hue hein


hum ko kuch nahi peena
par khana khana hai,,, bhook lagi hai
paise nahi hein
Posted 29 May 2006

new_beau says
Freddy said:

new_beau said:



InshaAllah...I am coming soon with Two Major Topics..

1. Shayari | Wazan aur Baher ka Istaimaal

2. Shayari | Islahaat



app ka season hatam honay tuk kaheen "Aaamad" he na hatam ho jayee


nahn "hatam" hota kuchh bhi ..fikar na kero




SALL.....EURO mainn CENT hotay hainn keh Paisay ?    
Posted 02 Jun 2006

baat suniye hazreen
jab ye topic shuroo hua tha to isi section main hi fit tha
lakin ab is nay jo rang pakra hai meray hathon main is ko baar baar move kernay ki khujli ho rahi hai
Posted 03 Jun 2006

topic zaberdast hai
aur sall nb ki poetry bhi great
per main kya keroon
Posted 03 Jun 2006

Ashii says
banda dekh k mangte hein na
cents maange to inkar ho jae ga




queennuuuuuuuu
abhi iss ko yahin rehne do
hum ko ab sher nahi suujh rahe koi bhi
Posted 03 Jun 2006

new_beau says
This topic is still almost related to this forum... Hum Drunked Poetry shuru ker detay hainn yahan,,,

Kya khayal hay SALL


O jee meray last shair ka jawab kahan hay
Posted 08 Jun 2006

Ashii says
ehemmm,, arz kiya hai
queenu sher kehne de DH mei bethe kar
ya woh jaga bata de, jahan par mod na ho




kuch Khuda ka khuaf karo naya bhai jii
yeh hamari "shairi" upper se drunk, yani k tunnn
murde kabron se nikal parein ge
Posted 10 Jun 2006

Ashii says

lafzon pe koi aap k yakeen kyun na kare ga
jo zikr ho hamara wakt tham k sune ga
mila diya gar khaak mei saaqi ka sab z'am
baad apne ash'ar khali jaam le k phire ga



kuch jam nahi raha yarrrr... last line sahi nahi ho rahi
hamari voc bohot restricted hai
Posted 10 Jun 2006

new_beau says
SALL said:

queenu sher kehne de DH mei bethe kar
ya woh jaga bata de, jahan par mod na ho





Posted 11 Jun 2006

new_beau says
SALL said:


lafzon pe koi aap k yakeen kyun na kare ga
jo zikr ho hamara wakt tham k sune ga
mila diya gar khaak mei saaqi ka sab z'am
baad apne ash'ar khali jaam le k phire ga



kuch jam nahi raha yarrrr... last line sahi nahi ho rahi
hamari voc bohot restricted hai



Posted 11 Jun 2006

Ashii says
rooth kar nazr e karam sue adam gai

ess da ki matbal hoya
Posted 11 Jun 2006

new_beau says
Kisi Siyaanay noonn Puchho
Posted 11 Jun 2006

Ashii says
aap siyane nahi hein kya
humein to pehle hi shak tha






yar waise yeh koi baat na hui
aik fata fatt bana k sher le aate ho
Posted 12 Jun 2006

new_beau says
Aap jao..JAAM bana ker lay aao
Posted 19 Jun 2006

BadShaH1 says
new_beau said:

SALL said:


lafzon pe koi aap k yakeen kyun na kare ga
jo zikr ho hamara wakt tham k sune ga
mila diya gar khaak mei saaqi ka sab z'am
baad apne ash'ar khali jaam le k phire ga



kuch jam nahi raha yarrrr... last line sahi nahi ho rahi
hamari voc bohot restricted hai






wah wah!
Posted 20 Jun 2006

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