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lynx

Age: 40
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Newjersy, United States
It was winter..After our winter vaccations we had a new comer in our class... my sights craved her as she entered the room..and that instant i knew there are some special feelings arosing for her from my heart.........
Posted 26 Sep 2006

new_beau says
what you felt at first sight ?
Posted 26 Sep 2006

lynx says
drooled.....Craved a bit same.only to make it beautiful
Posted 27 Sep 2006

new_beau says
itni bhaari angrezi samajh nahi aati hum ko
Posted 28 Sep 2006

lynx says
esa kerta hain 3 sa 4 beja tek mai aap ko class de sakta hoon hmmm like ager aap rush mai hain or kisi ko dhond reha hain ... dooooor tek nazar ja rahi ha ...lekin nazer nahi a reha aap ko,this meant by wat i was saying...
Posted 29 Sep 2006

new_beau says
oooooooooooooOOOO achha ab samjha yanni...Yeh tou woh baat hui keh....


"Duur talak bassarat hay ghair wazeh see"
"Nazar shaafaf magar Khayaal dhundlaye say"

(Rizwan Ashar)
Posted 30 Sep 2006

~dia~ says
^wah wah
Posted 30 Sep 2006

lynx says
new_beau said:

oooooooooooooOOOO achha ab samjha yanni...Yeh tou woh baat hui keh...."Duur talak bassarat hay ghair wazeh see""Nazar shaafaf magar Khayaal dhundlaye say"(Rizwan Ashar)

kuch ziada hi samjhdar nahi ho ga....
Posted 30 Sep 2006

lynx says
well..... the days passed ,and now everyone knows each other better... all pupils were like one combine unit,friendship was the key for all of us.the guy tried his best to move a pace & tell the girl how he feel about her,but was afraid... that he might lose his friend,inmaking new relation with her.
Posted 30 Sep 2006

lynx says
while this guy was thinking how to make his dreams come true..someone else came in her life.,unfortunately a class mate...everyone knew what haopened was'nt right..every one knew that the guy love her truly..... but nobody speak out & rightly so...coz they had no in direct thing from that guy....
Posted 01 Oct 2006

new_beau says
And That guy was also a fair person, belonged to a well reputed family and had good manners...

It doesnt mean that he was a beter choice for the girl, but he was the first to get closer,

There was no feeling of love yet...

But both were feeling comfort and happiness in spending the time togather ....
Posted 01 Oct 2006

lynx says
yaar es story ka writer kon ha...u are right but not that right....
Posted 02 Oct 2006

new_beau says
hee hee ...ok ok..tusi carry on..me chup
Posted 02 Oct 2006

lynx says
Time passes..Time which that guy wasted,& time his friend availed.In this situation the guy left his country,his education,his friends and flew abroad due to his family reasons...seeing her for last time & thinking that everything wud be changed when he returns...
Posted 02 Oct 2006

sun_shine says
aur aagay kya hua
shayad old hindi movies ki tarah uski shaaadi hogaye hogi.
ooooops
u continue
main bhi new_beau ki tarah chup hongi
Posted 03 Oct 2006

Asma_Rani says
looooooooool
Posted 03 Oct 2006

lynx says
After long seven year's he returned & returned with an ambition... to find her,to know about her & all.well he continued,went to his old campus,went to old friends & knew something he wud'nt imagine had happened when he was not there...
Posted 03 Oct 2006

new_beau says
The other guy became a terrorist..and the Girl was still married...
Posted 07 Oct 2006

lynx says
hahaha it was'nt that bad...
Posted 08 Oct 2006

lynx says
they both had good time,they even talked to their parents abt each other...but there was something lacking from the guy...& it came out one day..he was from a different race (as of islam).when everyone knew abt that ,the parents of the girl they made a check on her.no more meetings with him..no phone calls from him no nothing..somehow he dilvered a message that why wo'nt u convert & we get married,in which she replied that why wo'nt u do the same....
Posted 08 Oct 2006

new_beau says
Posted 08 Oct 2006

sun_shine says
acha aur aagay kya hua jee?
Posted 10 Oct 2006

lynx says
Things got bad day by day in their relation,friends got split.everyone was more attached or we can say was showing more courtsy to the girl.well at the end everything got broken,two people going on a same rd. had different destiny.Now,the main person..the guy who is soul of the story,the main character,he tried his level best to know as much as about the girl.where,when,what,why, these where the only questions in his mind all that time.As she was abroad he got her email from somewhere & mailed her the thing in his heart & mind..
Posted 12 Oct 2006

new_beau says
then ?
Posted 18 Oct 2006

lynx says
Time was demanded...Time, she needed time & during that time she got engaged by her family.Now ppl wat to do here...i cud'nt end this story maybe u guys could.....
Posted 24 Oct 2006

new_beau says
The guy with whom she got engaged was the younger brother of Side hero and the best friend of main hero
Posted 24 Oct 2006

lynx says
Lo jee itni confusion....meri samjh mai nahi ayi
Posted 24 Oct 2006

new_beau says
nahin jee..socho aur aagay chalao kahaani...Mainn nay tou sirf hint diya hay
Posted 25 Oct 2006

lynx says
Very Useful Hint.....
Posted 25 Oct 2006

new_beau says
tou phir...aagay kya hua ???
Posted 29 Oct 2006

lynx says
End app ka apna....wat ever u think wud be better
Posted 30 Oct 2006

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