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new_beau

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Tapki Jee...Yeh aap kay Sig mainn jo Shair hay..yeh poori ghazal mil sakti hay please..??

In Fact meri aik Ghazal issi Bahar mainn hay....Magar aap waala shair mainn pehli baar suna hay...And I dont like keh meri ghazal kisi say match ho...Issi liyey Aap waali ghazal perh ker mainn apni ghazal mainn change ker doon ga..ta keh woh match na ho..

My Lines are...

"Koi tou hay jo Tah-e-Khayaal rehta hay"
"Hamesha Jawaann jis ka Malaal rehta hay"

"Hum tou kabhi chhor bhi detay hainn justajoo teri"
"Yeh magar Dil hay, keh hamesha Fa'aal rehta hay"

And more....
Posted 25 Dec 2006
Mujrim says
haan
Posted 21 Feb 2007
javad says
ki takleef hai tawano..
Posted 23 Feb 2007
Mujrim says
haan
Posted 23 Feb 2007
new_beau says
new_beau said:

Tapki Jee...Yeh aap kay Sig mainn jo Shair hay..yeh poori ghazal mil sakti hay please..??

In Fact meri aik Ghazal issi Bahar mainn hay....Magar aap waala shair mainn pehli baar suna hay...And I dont like keh meri ghazal kisi say match ho...Issi liyey Aap waali ghazal perh ker mainn apni ghazal mainn change ker doon ga..ta keh woh match na ho..

My Lines are...

"Koi tou hay jo Tah-e-Khayaal rehta hay"
"Hamesha Jawaann jis ka Malaal rehta hay"

"Hum tou kabhi chhor bhi detay hainn justajoo teri"
"Yeh magar Dil hay, keh hamesha Fa'aal rehta hay"

And more....



Tapki Jee
Posted 23 Feb 2007
Mujrim says
tapak paray wapis jee
Posted 23 Feb 2007
javad says
isnay nai tapaknaa..
Posted 24 Feb 2007
Mujrim says
tay phir kisnay tapknaa hai??
Posted 24 Feb 2007
new_beau says
Tapki Jee
Posted 26 Feb 2007
Asman se Tapki says
nb jee by god maine topic dekha e aj hai.

sorry jee
Posted 26 Feb 2007
Asman se Tapki says
nb jee konsa sher tha jis ki poori ghazal ka apnay kaha mere zehan may nai ha
Posted 26 Feb 2007
Mujrim says
Posted 26 Feb 2007
kOoLeSt1 says
Posted 27 Feb 2007
Mujrim says
bus oyee
Posted 28 Feb 2007
Asman se Tapki says
KING OF JB said:

eray wah aj to tapki jee teen talk main ai hoi han



to yar mjhe koi chai pani poocho maine konsa roz roz ana hota ha
Posted 28 Feb 2007
new_beau says
aaho yaar..poochho inn ko..pehlay hi 4 pages complete honay kay baad aayee hainn Aur Ghazal bhi yaad nahin inn ko
Posted 28 Feb 2007
Asman se Tapki says
nb uncle mje b afsos ho ra ha
Posted 28 Feb 2007
bykhaber says
afsos kahy ka aysi choti choti baton peh afsos naheen kia jata ( Thanda chaly ga ya Garam)
Posted 28 Feb 2007
Mujrim says
na thanda na garam bus dikhao inko apna apna bharam
Posted 28 Feb 2007
bykhaber says
mujrim tumhain aysi batain soot naheen kerteen jis sy pocha hy usi ko batany do
Posted 28 Feb 2007
Mujrim says
sahi hai nai boltay hum kuch
Posted 28 Feb 2007
London_Girl says
MG, app sab ko bhaga kiun detey ho? kia kehtey ho sab ko jo wapis hi nai attey
Posted 01 Mar 2007
heart_hacker says
lateefy nai sunata hoo ga
Posted 01 Mar 2007
Mujrim says
kuch aur hee sunadeta hai
Posted 01 Mar 2007
Mujrim says
Posted 02 Mar 2007
kiran says
hansne ke ilawa bhi kuch ker liya karo na
Posted 02 Mar 2007
Mujrim says
aur kya karooo iske ilawa kaho aap
Posted 04 Mar 2007
London_Girl says
where is tapki ji??
Posted 06 Mar 2007
Mujrim says
hum dance kareinge lekin private mei public mei nai
Posted 06 Mar 2007
cutefriend says
kal shaam
Posted 07 Mar 2007
London_Girl says
Posted 07 Mar 2007
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