Accha nahin lagta.............by NB

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Posted 22 Jan 2007

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Posted 22 Jan 2007

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may i make a little change. hope its better..

"Koi manzar suhana BHI mujhe acha nahi lagta"

ooper aisay likha hey "Koi manzar BHI SUHANA mujhe acha nahi lagta,

"BHI MUJHE NAHI LAGTA" is RADEEF of ur ghazal..

Posted 22 Jan 2007

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Posted 23 Jan 2007

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Posted 23 Jan 2007

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Posted 23 Jan 2007

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Beautiful Poem... Beautiful Design

Posted 23 Jan 2007

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dil jalay...o lalay yahan tu sare hi dil jalay hai

Posted 23 Jan 2007

QUEEN VICTORIA says

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shair sb nay aisay hi likha tha

Posted 23 Jan 2007

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mera bhi ye khayal tha, k ye garr barr aap ne ki hey...

Posted 23 Jan 2007

QUEEN VICTORIA says

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nai nai main nay koooochhhhhhhhhhhhh nai kiya

riz nay jo poetry inpage main pc per save ki thi usi ko copy ker kay designing ki hai

Posted 24 Jan 2007

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Aray QV Jee...kuchh lines uss file main "RAW" bhi hainn...

"Terteeb diyey hainn kuchh, Saaray nahin mainn nay"
"Sabhi khayaal-e-khaam, Sanwaray nahin mainn nay"

"Qareeb sanam ko laa kay mutma'in ker diya"
"Toray duur falak say sitaaray nahin mainn nay"

Aap nay jo dhoondh ker compose ki hainn..yeh lines abhi finalized nahin thin..any ways....THANKSOO

Posted 24 Jan 2007

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chalo fer shabash dr sb

Posted 25 Jan 2007

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mujhe shabash???????????????

Posted 25 Jan 2007

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4 correction

Posted 25 Jan 2007

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Posted 25 Jan 2007

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aap kion dukhi ho gaye hain jee

Posted 25 Jan 2007

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uss ka khayal phir aa gaya na

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