Aasera said:hmm soch achi hay
but bura mat maniyay ga...mujhe poetry ki kuch khas samajh nahin hay
and main usko apnay lehaz say daikhti hon
to aisay main mujhe isko parh kar jo feel hoa wo batati hon
matlab samajh a gaya ...
but Shoroat bohat aram say hoi... but poem kuch aisi thi kay kuch lambi hoti to ziada achi lagti ( mujhe )
janay kion aisay feel hoa jaisay achanak hi end ho gaya
aap samajh rahay hain na meri baat?
^is kay ilawa ACHI LAGI
KING OF JB said:hmmm bohat khoob yara keep it up
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QUEEN VICTORIA said:nice sagar...............
cutefriend said:bahut bahut shukriya janab
gud work
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London_Girl said:nice