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i wrote this nazam rite in the morning...wat do u lot think? ajj yeh dil buhat udass hai tu jo pass nahi hai mere to yeh dil buhat udass hai ik unkahi si na bujhne wali piyas hai jane kiyoon yeh dil buhat udass hai zindagi ki talkh rahon pe chalte howe ik lamha tum mere morr pe tehre abb tere jane ka soch ke achanak dil buhat udass hai chmake ik sitare ki tarha mere jeewan ke tareek ke asman pe tere ulfat ke bujhte chiragh ko dekh ke abb yeh dil buhat udass hai ankhon main dhlate tareekion ke saye dil main phaile khamoshion ke sehra honton pe chaiyi hai pheeki muskurahat ke ajj yeh dil buhat udass hai tu jo pass nahi hai mere to yeh dil buhat udass hai
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gud yaaar very nice
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charizmatic said: gud yaaar very nice
para bhi hai ya khali bongian marr rahe ho..lol...
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charizmatic said: gud yaaar very nice
para bhi hai ya khali bongian marr rahe ho..lol... abbay parha hai tu like kiya hai na tum bhi mammon ho ekdam
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u rote it urself daz gr8 excellent piece of work
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wohi tu
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kiay jawab ah.......saki tum to professional ho.........u should write a peotry book......u can hav a star 4 working so hard
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wowwwwwwwwww so we have discovered a poetess han
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Oooo..Nice jee Nice...Bohat shandaR.! Kya baat hai aapki bhaye sahib..!! Great work...!! Keep IT uP..!
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cool ....very nice work
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Yes It Is..!!
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THANKS PPL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Wah Ji wah Kia Khoob Udaasi Hay
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You r welcome jee..(But no need for come..)
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Shararti said: You r welcome jee..(But no need for come..)
tussi kiss nal lagey ho ji????????????????????/
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Saki bhaye tano he kah ray aan..!! aap nay hum sab ko Thanks kaha tu hum Nay WELCOME Kah dya..
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kiran said: cool ....very nice work
oyee tum kahan ghayab hoo
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Kyon aap nay bhi is say sekhna hai gayeb hona?
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off course tabhi tu poch raha hon
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great one saki
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acche hai
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SanaSana said: acche hai
zahir hai....mainey jo likhi hai...
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kiaa baaat hai
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charizmatic said: off course tabhi tu poch raha hon
yeh insaano ka nahi jinoo bhotoon ka kaam hai
aap isko choor doo
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ooo mein kisi bhoot se kam hoon kiya see my avator yara it is almost like bhoot
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bhoot aisay nahi hotay my dear.. n wayz agar aap kisi bhoot say kam nahi tu fir aap gayeb hona kyon sekhna chahtay hain? kya ap bhotoon ki us nasal say tu taLak nahi rakhtay jo sirf khana peena jantay hain ?
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