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I feel nithing inside
I am like an empty bottle
You drank me dry then left
Leaving nothing for ones to come
Only an empty shell
I go through the motions of love
But never really feel anything
I am dry and empty
I can't even cry to release
Because I feel nothing
Because you only left pain
And after awhile
Even pain empties out
Then what is left?
Nothing

I am very sad today because my jano has left me. So here is how I feel.
Posted 23 Aug 2005

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very good new_beau, I think. I can't read urdu yet unless it is in type: like kya haal hay. I am sorry, but I think you did a good job. Thank you very much for translation so everyone else can understand it.
Posted 23 Aug 2005

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Twas your kiss that gave me breath
Twas your touch that started my heart
Twas you fingertips on my eyes that gave me sight
Twas your love that gave me life
Posted 22 Aug 2005

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Sorry it's in english and not urdu...maybe new_beau you can translate for me....
In the wind I hear your laughter
In the sun I feel your warmth
In the stars I see your eyes
In the rain I feel your tears
In the night I feel your touch
In the earth i feel you heartbeat
In the floweres I smell your scent
In everything beautiful, there you are
Posted 22 Aug 2005

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Thank you stupid guy!
Posted 21 Aug 2005

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zabardast...hmmmm....does that sound the way it is spelled or is it a little different? the first urdu poem I saw, I couldn't read it at all. My friend helped me to read it and I thought I'd never get all the pronounciations right...well I did and it is getting a little easier everytime. The first poem I saw on here was jaam pe jaam peene se kya fayeda, raat guzri to utar jayage, kisi ki aankon se peeyo khuda ki kasam, umr saari nashe mein guzar jayagi...I was hooked when it was translated, lol...have a good day to all.
Posted 21 Aug 2005

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Oh....shukrika for all the help then...
Posted 20 Aug 2005

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I will post more on Monday when I have alot of time to type. Thanks for all the positive feedback guys.
Posted 20 Aug 2005

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I like this poem very much. You put alot into it and it shows. Keep up the good work.
Posted 18 Aug 2005

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ki tou is good job? I will be on more when my college starts back but all I do is work all the time right now. mein duniya is so PagAl right now. My college starts on the 22nd so I will be able to visit the site more. Shukorea for all of your help. I know shukorea is pakistan not urdu for thank you.
Posted 18 Aug 2005

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King of JB thank you so much for the compliments and for looking out for me.
Posted 18 Aug 2005

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Yes, new_beau that is my own work thank you very much. I wrote it myself because it is how I feel about someone.
Posted 18 Aug 2005

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what does that mean in English New_Beau. You forget I do not speak much urdu.
Posted 17 Aug 2005

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kya haal hay? Mein theek hum. I do know some basic urdu that I have learned but I find myself wanting to learn more and more. I do have my first urdu poem in poetry corner if anyone wants to read it. The translation my not be exactly right but it will be close I hope. Thank you for your help. Keep in touch.
Posted 16 Aug 2005