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I feel nithing inside I am like an empty bottle You drank me dry then left Leaving nothing for ones to come Only an empty shell I go through the motions of love But never really feel anything I am dry and empty I can't even cry to release Because I feel nothing Because you only left pain And after awhile Even pain empties out Then what is left? Nothing
I am very sad today because my jano has left me. So here is how I feel.
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very good new_beau, I think. I can't read urdu yet unless it is in type: like kya haal hay. I am sorry, but I think you did a good job. Thank you very much for translation so everyone else can understand it.
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Twas your kiss that gave me breath Twas your touch that started my heart Twas you fingertips on my eyes that gave me sight Twas your love that gave me life
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Sorry it's in english and not urdu...maybe new_beau you can translate for me.... In the wind I hear your laughter In the sun I feel your warmth In the stars I see your eyes In the rain I feel your tears In the night I feel your touch In the earth i feel you heartbeat In the floweres I smell your scent In everything beautiful, there you are
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zabardast...hmmmm....does that sound the way it is spelled or is it a little different? the first urdu poem I saw, I couldn't read it at all. My friend helped me to read it and I thought I'd never get all the pronounciations right...well I did and it is getting a little easier everytime. The first poem I saw on here was jaam pe jaam peene se kya fayeda, raat guzri to utar jayage, kisi ki aankon se peeyo khuda ki kasam, umr saari nashe mein guzar jayagi...I was hooked when it was translated, lol...have a good day to all.
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ki tou is good job? I will be on more when my college starts back but all I do is work all the time right now. mein duniya is so PagAl right now. My college starts on the 22nd so I will be able to visit the site more. Shukorea for all of your help. I know shukorea is pakistan not urdu for thank you.
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kya haal hay? Mein theek hum. I do know some basic urdu that I have learned but I find myself wanting to learn more and more. I do have my first urdu poem in poetry corner if anyone wants to read it. The translation my not be exactly right but it will be close I hope. Thank you for your help. Keep in touch.