Dear don't know your name bt yar kahin tum cactus ke plant pe gir to nahi gaye.(DON'T MIND PLEASE)
Dear Kanton ka kaya dosh hi dosh to uspe chalne wale ka hai.
Kanta apni existence chubh ke hi to bata sakta hai.(Bol nahi sakta hai na bechara.)
Some People always grumble because roses hav thorns bt Im thankful that thorns hav roses .
Somehow Your poetry is gud and appriciable.
Keep it up