ok

Sohail Malik....nice to see

Aray QV Jee...kuchh lines uss file main "RAW" bhi hainn...

"Terteeb diyey hainn kuchh, Saaray nahin mainn nay"
"Sabhi khayaal-e-khaam, Sanwaray nahin mainn nay"

"Qareeb sanam ko laa kay mutma'in ker diya"
"Toray duur falak say sitaaray nahin mainn nay"



Aap nay jo dhoondh ker compose ki hainn..yeh lines abhi finalized nahin thin..any ways....THANKSOO

Topic name dekh ker mainn samjha mera zikar ho raha hay

Ander dekha tou aik GAHALAT shair kay ilawa kuchh nahin tha


"Apni hi taigh-e-adaa say khud hi ghayel ho gaya"
"Chaand nay paani mainn dekha, aur paagal ho gaya"

"Ab kahan ho ga woh, ho ga bhi tou waisa kahan"
"Soch ker yeh baat jee, kuchh aur bojhal ho gaya"

BisMa said:

new_beau said:

Hola Ceniorita

Koi aisa Shair sunao jo kaafi saal pehlay suna ho, enjoy bhi kiya ho...Magar uss ki Samajh ab aayee ho?

Zindagi mainn Khawb hainn ya haqeeqat?

Meray ilawa JB per kpn favorite hay?

hello new bhai how r

Chupaye dil main ghamoon ka jahan bethay haiin,
Hum terii bazam main bay zuban bethay haii

KYun chupkay say wo loog utar jatay hain dil mein
jin logon say kismat ki sitaray nahe miltay


yeh 2 shair ham nay class 10th mein sunay hogay jab urdu phari the lol but us ki samajh nahe aye the k kiya hay yeh sab magar abb samajh aya k waqai kitni sachaae hay in shair mein aur socho to shair nahe kis dil say yeh lines kahee hongi kiya beeti hogi un per jo itni sachee baat un k dil say nikli

riz bhai mein aik khuwabon mein rehnay wali larki the kuch arsay tak........magar abb yakeen ho chala hay k khuwab khuwab hotay hain aur haqeeqat haqeeqat
isliye zindagi mein abb haqeqat ko tasleem karna zaroori hay

app k elawaa yahan bohat say achay membrs hain jo mujhay pasand hain aur jin ki post hamain bohat zayada pasand hain like family meinto sab he pasand hotay hain na aur jb is like my family so i like evry one here

Thanks for reply