sweet_u
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wah ji wah is ka matlab hai aik aur poet se muqabla karna pare ga? Kiyon Tashi ji ho jaye muqabla ? ......... (Swiss) seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee? tu janab (swiss) aap ko jb k is forum mein khush amdeed !
Tum Lakh Chupao Seeney Mein Ehsaas Hamari Chahat Ka! Dil Jab Bhi Tumhara Darka Hai Awaaz Yahan Tak Aaye Hai!
sweet_u
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wah ji wah yahan par tu sab tashi ji hi ki tarifon k pul bandh rahe hain ! Lekin aik baat hai tashi ji aap ki COLLECTION hoti hi bohat zabar dast hai ! Aur phir hum bhi tu aap k (fans) mein se hain! Kiyon theek kaha hai na??????????????????????? ALLAH Kare aap yonhi sher kehti rahen! Aap ki nazar aik nazam jo k bohat khoobsorat hai! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
sweet_u
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This is fintastic! u have a great taste of poetry! <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>
Chehre pe mere zulf ko phelao kisi din! Kya roz garjte ho baras jao kisi din! Razon ki tarah utro mere dil mein kisi shub! Dastak pe mere haath ki khul jao kisi din! Pairon ki tarah husan ki barish mein naha lon! Badal ki tarah jhoom k ghar aao kisi din! Khushboo ki trah guzro mere dil ki gali se! Phoolon ki tarah mujh pe bikhar jao kisi din! Guzrein jo mere ghar se tu ruk jaein sitare! Is tarah meri raat ko chamkao kisi din! Mein apni har aik saans isi raat ko de don! Sar rakh k mere seeney pe so jao kisi din!
sweet_u
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Wwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaoooooooooooooooooo! Its nice to see ! Tashi ji aap bhi bilkul mujh sa sochti hain! Aik sher aap ki nazar! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
Mohabbat mein tan ka kurb mat maango! Jisey choo liya jaye usey pooja nahin karte!
Adaab Araz Hai! fasi..............................,,,
Itne khamosh bhi raha na karo! Gham-e-Judai mein yon kiya na karo! Khawab hote hain dekhne k liye! In mein ja kar magar raha na karo! Kuch na ho ga gilla bhi karne se! Zaalimon se gila kiya na karo! In se niklein hiqayatein shayed! Hurf likh kar mita diya na karo! Karo apne rutbe ka kuch lehaaz! Dost har aik ko bana liya na karo!
sweet_u
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Hallo Tashi Madam where r u in these days? koi nai poetry nazar nahin aa rahi hai?????????? aap ka test tu ho chuka phir kahe ki masroofiyat hai? kafi din ho gaye hain! come on reply me as soon as possible! aap k liye aik sher.................... >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
jab kabhi milein fursatein mere dil se bhoj utar do! Mein bohat dino se udas hoon mujey koi shaam tu udhar do!
sweet_u
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Thaaaaaaaaaaaaannnkkkkkusssssss! Janab(chup karo)Ji! bas apni tabiyat hai zara shayrana si! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
Aik Sher! _________
Shehar k dukandaro karobar-e-ulfat mein! Sood kya ziyan kya hai tum na jaan pao gey!
sweet_u
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh its gr8, 2 see u Mr naeem! Wel Come to jb! & wish u all the best for the site! I wana make frindship with u ! Tu kya hai khyaal! Ho jaye dhamaal!
okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk This is for u my friend!
Khud kare k Meri Arz-e-Pak pe Utrey! Woh Fasl-e-Gull Jis se Andesh-e-Zawaal Na Ho! Khuda kare k Aik Bhi Hum Watan K Liye! Zameen Tung Na ho Zindagi Wabal Na Ho!
sweet_u
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh its gr8, 2 see u Mr naeem! Wel Come to jb! & wish u all the best for the site! I wana make frindship with u ! Tu kya hai khyaal! Ho jaye dhamaal!
okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk This is for u my friend!
Khud kare k Meri Arz-e-Pak pe Utrey! Woh Fasl-e-Gull Jis se Andesh-e-Zawaal Na Ho! Khuda kare k Aik Bhi Hum Watan K Liye! Zameen Tung Na ho Zindagi Wabal Na Ho!
sweet_u
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You will be the No.1 in all of ur class fellows on Friday (INSHA-ALLAH) Khuda aap ko aap k har imtihaan mein kamyaab kare (AAAMEEEN) >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> >> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Khuda kare k test mein woh muqaam aaye! Har aik student k honton pe tera naam aaye!
sweet_u
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Aap ka poetry taste haqeeqat mein lajawab hai! urdu ho ya english...
Aap ki Grains of sand k jawab mein aik sher! ________________________________________________________________________
Bhool jane ka tu bas ik bahana ho ga! K Behar tor usey yaad to aana ho ga! Bund muthi se jo urr jaati hai kismat ki pari! Is hatheli mein koi chaid purana ho ga!
sweet_u
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Janab ka husne nazar hai wrna hum is kabil kahan! tareef ka shukriya ! Waisey aap bhi kisi se kam kahan! kiyon theeeeeeeeek kaha hai na???????????????????????????????? waisey aap kabhi chat par aayein phir baat ho gi, will u do this ??? ------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Ghanton us se pyar ki batein kartey kartey! Jab Mein..................................! Us se rukhsat ho kar wapas palta! ---------------TU...............! Mere pechey! Halka sa hans kar! Woh apne aap se bholi! Hunhhhhh! .................PAGAL...........!
sweet_u
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haan janab achi khasi try marti hain aap! balkey aap k saath to bazam khoob jamey gi ! jamey gi kya jum gayee hai kiyo theek kaha na! Abhi abhi rozi & jani420 k liye aik apni likhi hoi nazam post ki hai................................................................ Aap bhi zaroor deikh lein! AAAAAAAAAAAdddddddddaaaaaaaaabbbbbbbbbbbbbbb! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hum tu mohabbat mein bhi toheed k kayal hein Faraz! Aik hi shaksh ko mehboob banaye rakha!
sweet_u
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Rozi jee aap k liye judai k topic par aik nazam! Khuda aap logon ko jald mila de (AAMIN)! Yeh due hai meri RAB se! _______________________________________________________________ ....................JUDAI...............................
sweet_u
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Rozi jee aap k liye judai k topic par aik nazam! Khuda aap logon ko jald mila de (AAMIN)! Yeh due hai meri RAB se! _______________________________________________________________ ....................JUDAI...............................
sweet_u
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Janab Zabardast lagi hai............... aur humein ab aap ki poetry ka intzar rehne laga hai........ Aur aap ki nazar Shaeri ka matlab........................ >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< ....................YEHI TU SHAERI HAI........................ >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Jin ko tum sher kehtey ho zamaney walo! Bataien tum ko magar kis tarah! K Yeh tu......................! Raaton ko phaily thundi udaas chandni mein! Khamoshi se sar uthaey Paeron k aas paas! Farsh-e-Sabz par, Aakaash k Aanssoon k darmiyaan! Kuhar mein lipti ajeeb khoobsorat fiza k humrah! Gehri khamosh ruton k.........................! Tanha udaas lamhon mein.......................! Gham-e-Dil ka ubhar aana! AUR,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Tehreeron mein dhal jana ........................ K ....................! ..........YEHI TU SHAERI HAI.....................!
sweet_u
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wah g wah kya baat hai janb ki U r great ( I ever seen on this site) I love ur poetry...........
Jawab.............................. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Bohat Dinon ki baat hai! Yeh baat aaj ki nahin! ..........Shabab par bahar thi! ..........Fiza bhi khushgawar thi! ..........Na janey kion machal para! ..........Mein apney ghar se chal para! ..........Kisi ne mujh ko rok kar! ..........Bari ada se tok kar! ..........Kaha tha laut aeyey! ..........Meri kasam na jaeyey! ..........Phir ik haseen shaam ko! ..........Mein chal para salaam ko! ..........Gali ka rang dekh kar! ..........Nai tarang dekh kar! ..........Mujhey bari khushi hoi! ..........Mein kuch isi khushi mein tha! ..........Kisi ne jhank kar kaha! ..........Parai ghar se jaeyey! ..........Meri kasam na aeyey! ..........Phir aaj wohi shaam hai! ..........Bahar jis ka naam hai! ..........Chala hoon shehar chor kar! ..........Na janey jaonga kidhar! ..........Koi nahin jo rok kar! ..........Bari ada se tok kar! ..........Kahey k laut aeyey! ..........Meri kasam na jaeyey!..........................
sweet_u
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wah g wah kya baat hai janb ki U r great ( I ever seen on this site) I love ur poetry...........
Jawab.............................. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Bohat Dinon ki baat hai! Yeh baat aaj ki nahin! ..........Shabab par bahar thi! ..........Fiza bhi khushgawar thi! ..........Na janey kion machal para! ..........Mein apney ghar se chal para! ..........Kisi ne mujh ko rok kar! ..........Bari ada se tok kar! ..........Kaha tha laut aeyey! ..........Meri kasam na jaeyey! ..........Phir ik haseen shaam ko! ..........Mein chal para salaam ko! ..........Gali ka rang dekh kar! ..........Nai tarang dekh kar! ..........Mujhey bari khushi hoi! ..........Mein kuch isi khushi mein tha! ..........Kisi ne jhank kar kaha! ..........Parai ghar se jaeyey! ..........Meri kasam na aeyey! ..........Phir aaj wohi shaam hai! ..........Bahar jis ka naam hai! ..........Chala hoon shehar chor kar! ..........Na janey jaonga kidhar! ..........Koi nahin jo rok kar! ..........Bari ada se tok kar! ..........Kahey k laut aeyey! ..........Meri kasam na jaeyey!..........................
Sare rah kuch bhi kaha nahin kabhi us k ghar mein gya nahin! Mein janam janam se usi ka hoon usey aaj talak yeh pata nahin! Yeh khuda ki dain ajeeb hai k isi ka naam nasseb hai ........! Jisey tu ne chaha woh mill gya jisey mein ne chaha woh mila nahin!
sweet_u
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wah janab aap k intkhab ki dad daini hi pare gi (its an out class)... is k jawab mein aik nazrana................................ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Sang-e-Mar Mar se tarash huwa yeh dikash paikar! Mera baghwan hai yeh tum se kaha hai kis ne....! Sirf is wastey is bhut se aqeedat hai mujh ko..! Tarashey janey mein bara dard saha hai is ne...!
sweet_u
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Dear Tashi aap ki nazam k jawab mein aik sher! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< Poochney waley tumhein kaise batayen aakhir! Dukh ibarat to nahin jo likh kar baijein! Yeh kahani bhi nahin k sunayein tum ko! Yeh aaina bhi nahin k dikhayein tum ko!
sweet_u
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Wah kya mohabbat hai Rozi Aur jani 420 ki ( Heer Aur Ranjha) ____________________________________________ Aap dono k liye aik sher...................... ______________________________________________
Kahin bikhri hain kitabein, kahin maley kaprey! Ghar ki halat ajab hum ne bana rakhi hai......! Apne wehshat zada kamrey ki ik almari mein....! Teri tasweer bari aqeedat se saja rakhi hai...!
sweet_u
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Hey Salam! H r u?????????????? Aap ki nazam achi lagi.............. Aap ki nazar aik sher.............. _______________________________________
Aa ja k abhi zabt ka mausam nahin guzra! Aa ja k paharon pe abhi baraf jami hai! Khushboo k jazeeron se sitaron ki hadon tak! is shehar mein sab kuch hai bas teri kami hai!
sweet_u
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Ya u r very right..................... Miss Natasha! these all fellings hapens when u r in love! Aap k liye urdu ki aik nazam............. Kabool karein!
Jab Aur Faqat! Aik Shakhs ki badolat! Tumhare undar ka mausam badlney lagey! Chilchilati dhoop thandak ka ehsaas dey! Hawa mein us ki khushboo mehsoos karo! Har chehrey mein us ka chehra nazar aye! Tu....................................... Samaj laina k yeh mohabbat ki ibtada hai............. Jab Ankhon mein Us ka aks dikhai dey! Har pal us ko apne kareeb mehsoos karo! Be Qarar dil ko Qarar! Aur labon par Muskaan! Faqat us k khyal se hi reeng jaye! Tu................................! Jaan laina k yeh Mohabbat hai......................! Jab raat neend churaney lagey! (Aur). . . . . . ! Akhiyan be khawabi ki aadi ho jayein! Tanhai tumhari saheli! Khamoshi batein karney lagey! Nainan Sawan bhadon! (Aur) Dil Sehra ho jaye! Barish ka garam pani! Qatra,Qatra tumhara dil pighlaney lagey! (Aur) Tum be sabab roney lago! Tu.........................................! Yaqeen kar laina k yehi Mohabbat hai................
