Jaate Jaate Tu Agar...(really nice poem)

Jaate Jaate Tu Agar Aankh Bhar Aati Nahin,
Mujhe Bhi Shaayad Kabhi Teri Yaad Aati Nahin.

Pata Nahin Kuchh Un Mein Hai Ya Un Ke Dil Mein Chor Hai,
Un Ke Chehre Par Meri Nazar Tik Paati Nahin.

Samajh Hee Aata Nahin Ye Rog Kya Hai Ishq Ka,
Neend Aati To Hai Lekin Neend Hee Aati Nahin.

Tu Agar Mil Ke Mujh Se Door Karti Sab Gile,
Main Bhi Pachhtaata Nahin Tu Bhi Pachhtaati Nahin.

Jab Se Kho Diya Tujh Ko Kho Diya Hai Har Yakeen,
In Labon Pe Aajkal Koi Dua Aati Nahin.

Tu Bata Main Kaise Samjhoon Tere Dil Ki Baat Ko,
Apni Khwahish Tu Zabaan Par Jab Talak Laati Nahin.

Ek Hum Hain Jo Unhein Bhool Hee Paate Nahin,
Ek Wo Hain Jinhein Hamaari Yaad Tak Aati Nahin.

Ishq Ki Daastaan Ajeeb Daastaan Hai Jo,
Samajh To Aati Hai Lekin Samajhai Jaati Nahin.

Baad Mein Jo Bhi Hua Ho Lekin Ae Mere '......
Pehli Mulaqat Mujh Se Bhi Bhulaai Jaati Nahin.

*kesee lagi ye shaieree? i loved it at my 1st read;) it really attrracted my soul! :)

regards
Tashi(f)

Posted on 8/11/2003 4:44:24 AM

rozi

wah wah bohot achie hai I likes it

Posted on 8/11/2003 4:47:15 AM

TaSHi

dhaney waaaaaad, rozi jee :P

Tashi(f)

Posted on 8/11/2003 4:56:21 AM

TaSHi

i know this poem applies to "girls"
but i like the wordings of it alot
its soo sweet but sad
and i mostly like the sad ones
don't ask me why,lol lol ;)

Posted on 8/11/2003 4:59:36 AM

jani420

wah g wah tashi jee kiya baat hai

Posted on 8/11/2003 8:00:22 AM

TaSHi

dhaney waaaaad, jaani bhai;)
wesey humaree bat hai hi kuch our,kiya keren..kese batayen,hehehehehe ;) ;)

Tashi(f)

Posted on 8/11/2003 7:03:12 PM

sweet_u

wah g wah kya baat hai janb ki
U r great ( I ever seen on this site) I love ur poetry...........

Jawab..............................
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Bohat Dinon ki baat hai!
Yeh baat aaj ki nahin!
..........Shabab par bahar thi!
..........Fiza bhi khushgawar thi!
..........Na janey kion machal para!
..........Mein apney ghar se chal para!
..........Kisi ne mujh ko rok kar!
..........Bari ada se tok kar!
..........Kaha tha laut aeyey!
..........Meri kasam na jaeyey!
..........Phir ik haseen shaam ko!
..........Mein chal para salaam ko!
..........Gali ka rang dekh kar!
..........Nai tarang dekh kar!
..........Mujhey bari khushi hoi!
..........Mein kuch isi khushi mein tha!
..........Kisi ne jhank kar kaha!
..........Parai ghar se jaeyey!
..........Meri kasam na aeyey!
..........Phir aaj wohi shaam hai!
..........Bahar jis ka naam hai!
..........Chala hoon shehar chor kar!
..........Na janey jaonga kidhar!
..........Koi nahin jo rok kar!
..........Bari ada se tok kar!
..........Kahey k laut aeyey!
..........Meri kasam na jaeyey!..........................

Posted on 8/23/2003 12:36:48 AM

sweet_u

Posted on 8/23/2003 12:37:11 AM

TaSHi

quote:
Originally posted by sweet_u

wah g wah kya baat hai janb ki
U r great ( I ever seen on this site) I love ur poetry...........

Jawab..............................
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<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Bohat Dinon ki baat hai!
Yeh baat aaj ki nahin!
..........Shabab par bahar thi!
..........Fiza bhi khushgawar thi!
..........Na janey kion machal para!
..........Mein apney ghar se chal para!
..........Kisi ne mujh ko rok kar!
..........Bari ada se tok kar!
..........Kaha tha laut aeyey!
..........Meri kasam na jaeyey!
..........Phir ik haseen shaam ko!
..........Mein chal para salaam ko!
..........Gali ka rang dekh kar!
..........Nai tarang dekh kar!
..........Mujhey bari khushi hoi!
..........Mein kuch isi khushi mein tha!
..........Kisi ne jhank kar kaha!
..........Parai ghar se jaeyey!
..........Meri kasam na aeyey!
..........Phir aaj wohi shaam hai!
..........Bahar jis ka naam hai!
..........Chala hoon shehar chor kar!
..........Na janey jaonga kidhar!
..........Koi nahin jo rok kar!
..........Bari ada se tok kar!
..........Kahey k laut aeyey!
..........Meri kasam na jaeyey!..........................

Fasi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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TASHI(F)

Posted on 8/23/2003 1:00:13 AM

sweetie

tashi yaar.. what shall i say.. u're simply gr8.. zabardast shairs hain

Posted on 8/26/2003 9:04:22 PM

Rain Man

very nice

Posted on 9/1/2003 1:15:07 PM