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Bhari mehfil main tanha rehna acha lagta

Bhari mehfil main tanha rehna acha lagta hai
terey barey main sochtey rehna acha lagta hai .

Kabhi pholon main ,kabhi kaliyon main
tujh ko hi dhontey rehna acha lagta hai

Meree zindagi ki khushiyan tumhee say hain wabasta
rab say sirf tumhein hi mangna acha lagta hai

Hamarey darmiyan hail rahein sadiyon ki khamoshiyan
kuch is tarhan guftugu karna acha lagta hai

Tumhrey baghir zindagi ka koi tasavur nahi hai
kuch is tarhan tumharee tamanna karna acha lagta hai

Tum hi ko chaha,tum hi ko chahtey hain
tumhi ko chahtey rehna acha lagta hai

Main cheen lon gi tumhein duniya ki rasmon say
k mujhye zamaney say baghawat karna acha lagta hai



Posted on 10/13/2004 1:52:17 PM

sooperb !

Posted on 10/13/2004 7:15:39 PM

Nice poetry

Posted on 10/13/2004 8:22:28 PM

hmm..
kuch bouloun?
ijazat ho to bhari mehfil ko rula doun?

Posted on 10/13/2004 11:58:28 PM

ye meri ghazal kis nein copy kaar li

original tu ye thi

bhari mehfil mein tanha rehna accha lugta hai
sardeyoon mein garam anday khana acha lugta hai

kabi galeyon mein kabi bazaroon mein
anday walay ko dhontey rehna acha lugta hai

meri zindagi ki khushiyan tumhee say hain aanday walay
aanday kay sath kala namak lugana achaa lugta hai

nahi kuch hamaray darmiyaan sevayee aanday kay
paar kabi kabi aaloo kahana be accha lugta hai

aanday kay baghir zindagi ka koi tasavur nahi hai
paar aanday sei chuchay nikalvana be accha lugta hai

tum he ko khayaa tum he ko khatay hain
tum he ko khatay rehna accha lugta hai

main cheen lon ga tumhein dokandar kay hatoon sei
paar kabi kabi tumheen churana be accha lugta hai



Posted on 10/14/2004 12:53:15 AM

ok yar tumari hoogay e

Posted on 10/14/2004 10:47:55 PM

good

Posted on 10/15/2004 12:19:12 AM




Posted on 10/15/2004 11:09:16 AM

hmmmmmmmm nice

Posted on 10/15/2004 11:37:28 AM

wow a nice poem !

Posted on 10/27/2004 3:38:31 PM