Mere dheyan main Tum thay...

no one is going to comment on writing...Ok..

ye meri bohat pasandeeda ghazal hey..

Posted on 9/11/2006 9:27:42 PM

sachhhiiiiiii

Posted on 9/11/2006 10:49:22 PM

haan na...

Posted on 9/12/2006 12:19:50 AM

very nice

Posted on 9/12/2006 3:33:41 AM

shukriya...

Posted on 9/13/2006 12:04:57 AM

ba-zoq log kahan hain...

Posted on 9/14/2006 2:49:20 PM

yup achhi hai
waisay hum nahin thay

Posted on 9/14/2006 7:14:55 PM

why should not say anything about the writing
do u mind dear?????

Posted on 9/14/2006 7:22:38 PM

waisey yeh faridi saab kaun hain pehli baar naam suna hia

waisey poem is ok

writing is awesome

Posted on 9/14/2006 7:42:04 PM

mujhe to ye ghazal bohat pasand hey..
sabhi sher achay hain, lekin khas tor pe last wala.. bohat khoobsoorat hey... bohat sweeet...

Posted on 9/16/2006 7:28:42 PM

tha kon

"Meray Seenay pay Saari raat ik Talwaar rehti hay"
"Tumharay Ghar kay baher roz kis ki Car rehti hay"

Posted on 9/17/2006 9:25:32 AM