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Waqt chalta hii rahta hey
ruktaa hii kab hey
deykhoo too phir wohii
bheegii bheegii sii shab hey
intezaar hii intezaar
muhabbat soogwaar
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tanhaii kii ghuttan
zakhm zakhm hey dill mera
hootii hey buss chubhan
ahssas sey aarii hey badan
her aas sey aari hey badan
per khwaab too khwaab heyn
khwaaboon pey koii zoor naheyn mera
naqsh buntey aa rahey heyn
sadyoon sey tera
ban key bahtey heyn ansou per mujhey
jalla naheyn saktey
dukh merey mujhey harra naheyn saktey
palkoon sey jurra
khyaal tera
khwaab tera
jhoonka ik hawaa ka
khushboo bakheyrta
mahakta hey tan man mera
sounoo!!!!
merey khwaboon key humsafar
deyta hoon tumheyn yeh khabbar
sadyoon sey mein terii
khooj mein hoon
terii talaash hii
merii manzill hey
merii zindaagii ka
hasil hey,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,



apni ik aur taaza nazam aap kii nazar

Posted on 3/2/2007 11:29:17 PM

very nice

Posted on 3/2/2007 11:49:56 PM

cool 1

Posted on 3/3/2007 12:23:42 AM

kiran:
very nice

bohut shukrya khush raheyey sadda

Posted on 3/3/2007 6:41:23 PM

awww
bohatttt pyari dil ko cho janay wali poem hay
spec yah linez ;

per khwaab too khwaab heyn
khwaaboon pey koii zoor naheyn mera
naqsh buntey aa rahey heyn
sadyoon sey tera


ban key bahtey heyn ansou per mujhey
jalla naheyn saktey
dukh merey mujhey harra naheyn saktey


dukh mere mujhe hara nahin saktay



Posted on 3/3/2007 7:14:53 PM

v nice sagar

Posted on 3/3/2007 9:24:12 PM

Aasera:
awww
bohatttt pyari dil ko cho janay wali poem hay
spec yah linez ;

per khwaab too khwaab heyn
khwaaboon pey koii zoor naheyn mera
naqsh buntey aa rahey heyn
sadyoon sey tera


ban key bahtey heyn ansou per mujhey
jalla naheyn saktey
dukh merey mujhey harra naheyn saktey


dukh mere mujhe hara nahin saktay



ik baar phir aap ka mamnoon hoon jo aap neyn itni tawajha sey aur muhabbat sey merii iss nazam ka parha aaynda bhee aap key comments ka muntazir rahoon gaa khush raheyey sadda

Posted on 3/3/2007 11:03:29 PM

QUEEN VICTORIA:
v nice sagar

khush raheyey sadda

Posted on 3/3/2007 11:04:24 PM

waisay main jab parhti hon kuch to mujhe JO KUCH ZIADA ACHA lagta hay (nazam/ghazal/Sher main say) usko likhna zarori feel hota hay. Aadat hay :D achi ya buri dont know

To mujhe jab jab moka mila main zaroor bataon gi kay mujhe kia kuch acha laga and kia kuch nahin hehe
( but agar aap tankeed par mind kar saktay hain to sirf jo acha lagey ga wo hi bataon gi )





Posted on 3/4/2007 6:10:10 AM

Aasera:
waisay main jab parhti hon kuch to mujhe JO KUCH ZIADA ACHA lagta hay (nazam/ghazal/Sher main say) usko likhna zarori feel hota hay. Aadat hay :D achi ya buri dont know

To mujhe jab jab moka mila main zaroor bataon gi kay mujhe kia kuch acha laga and kia kuch nahin hehe
( but agar aap tankeed par mind kar saktay hain to sirf jo acha lagey ga wo hi bataon gi )





tanqeed zaroori hey iss sey islaah hootii hey khamyaan nikaltii heyn,,,,,,khush raheyey sadda

Posted on 3/4/2007 1:25:49 PM


Posted on 3/5/2007 3:33:36 PM

zaberdast

Posted on 3/5/2007 6:29:38 PM

KING OF JB:
wah wah sagar jani nice one

net work error tha bhaii aa naheyn saka maazrat khush rahoo sadda aabaad rahoo

Posted on 3/6/2007 8:15:45 PM

wow

Posted on 3/6/2007 8:17:40 PM

cutefriend:
zaberdast

thanx khush raheyey sadda

Posted on 3/15/2007 1:28:40 PM

London_Girl:
wow

thanx khush raheyey sadda

Posted on 3/15/2007 1:33:47 PM