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Kahin Aik Masoom Nazuk Si Larki....(- - - - - - )

.................Kahin Aik Masoom Nazuk Si Larki.......(- - - - - -)
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.................Kahin aik masoom nazuk si larki!
.................Bohat khoobsoorat magar sanwali si!
Mujey apney khuwabon ki banhon mein pa kar!
Kabhi neend mein muskarati to ho gi!
Isi neend mein kasmasa kasmasa kar!
Sarhaney se taqye girati to ho gi!
.................Kahin aik masoom nazuk si larki!
Wohi khwab din ki mundeeron pe akey!
Isey mann hi mann mein lubatey to hongey!
Kai saaz seeney ki khamoshion mein!
Meri yaad se jhunjhantey to hongey!
Woh be sakhta dheemey dheemey suron mein!
Meri dhun mein kuch gunganati to ho gi!
.................Kahin aik masoom nazuk si larki!
Chalo khat likhein ji mein aata to ho ga!
Magar ungliyan kapkapati to hongi!
Kalum haath se choot jata to ho ga!
Umangein kalum phir uthati to hongi!
Mera naam apni kitabon pe likh kar!
Woh danton mein ungli dabati to ho gi!
.................Kahin aik masoom nazuk si larki!
Zuban se kabhi uff nikalti to ho gi!
Badan dheemey dheemey sulagta to ho ga!
Kahin k kahin paer partey to hongey!
Kahin zameen par dhupata raptata to ho ga!
Kabhi subah ko shaam kehti to ho gi!
Kabhi raat ko din batati to ho gi!
.................Kahin aik masoom nazuk si larki!
.................Bohat khoobsoorat magar sanwali si!...(- - - - - - )

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        Yeh aik Ehsaas hai
        Agar mesoos kia jaye to...........?????????

Fasi..................
Posted on 8/25/2003 8:34:02 PM
aww,this is marvelous, sweet_u :)
really mai,,it's suppaaa
Posted on 8/25/2003 8:54:57 PM
aap ki koi nai poetry nazar nahin ayeeeeee,
Madam!
Kya baat hai????????????????????????????
Tashi jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?
Posted on 8/25/2003 9:44:39 PM
ohhh im sorry, muje nai pata tha k app b humaree poetry kelie intezaar kertey hain, thanks sweet_u jee :):)

here's my poem:

Gham Ki Jaageer Wirasat Main Mili Hai Mujh Ko..
Apni Jaageer Main Rehta Hon Nawabon Ki Tarha
Posted on 8/25/2003 10:13:14 PM
another one :):)

Kaun dastaq dil pe denay aaya hay
Yaad teri hay , ya gham ka saaya hay
Apni kismat hi raqeebon jesi hay
Aaj kyon shikva zubaan pay aaya hay
Woh hamaray na sahi , hamm toh unn kay hain
Hamm nay aksar dil ko yun behalaya hay
Jiski thi chahat, woh mera na hooa
Jo naseebon mein likha tha, woh hi paaya hay
Maan lo jo hay muqaddar may likha
Zindagi nay yehi samjhaya hay
Posted on 8/25/2003 10:14:19 PM
Raqs main thay hawaa aur shajar raat bhar
Mujh ko lagta raha kitna darr raat bhar

Mill ke teri tamanna se rotay rahay
Meri tanhaai aur mera ghar raat bhar

Thak ke aaghosh main subhaa kee so gaya
Chaand kerta raha safar raat bhar

Wisl ke aarzoo ne sikhaaya mujhay
Hijr main jaagnay ka hunar raat bhar

Timtimaatay chiraaghon ke zad per rahay
Aaeena,aks,paikar,nazar, raat bhar

Kis seher ke bisharat chiraaghon ne dee
Raqs kertay rahay baam-wa-dar raat bhar

Raat aisee charhee aansuon ke naddi
Aik hotay rahay behar-wa-bar raat bhar
Posted on 8/25/2003 10:14:54 PM
kese lageen humaree poetries? :)
Posted on 8/25/2003 10:15:24 PM
kese lageen humaree poetries? :)
Posted on 8/25/2003 10:15:24 PM
Janab Zabardast lagi hai...............
aur humein ab aap ki poetry ka intzar rehne laga hai........
Aur aap ki nazar Shaeri ka matlab........................
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....................YEHI TU SHAERI HAI........................
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Jin ko tum sher kehtey ho zamaney walo!
Bataien tum ko magar kis tarah!
K Yeh tu......................!
Raaton ko phaily thundi udaas chandni mein!
Khamoshi se sar uthaey Paeron k aas paas!
Farsh-e-Sabz par, Aakaash k Aanssoon k darmiyaan!
Kuhar mein lipti ajeeb khoobsorat fiza k humrah!
Gehri khamosh ruton k.........................!
Tanha udaas lamhon mein.......................!
Gham-e-Dil ka ubhar aana!
AUR,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Tehreeron mein dhal jana
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..........YEHI TU SHAERI HAI.....................!


FASI.....,,,,,,.....,,,,,,,..
Posted on 8/25/2003 11:09:01 PM
Tu Hai Suraj Tujhe Maloom Kahan Raat Ka Dukh..
Tu Kisi Roz Mere Ghar Main Uter Shaam Ke Baad
Posted on 8/25/2003 11:30:58 PM
Gham Ki Jaageer Wirasat Main Mili Hai Mujh Ko..
Apni Jaageer Main Rehta Hon Nawabon Ki Tarha
Posted on 8/25/2003 11:31:44 PM
ap ko pata hai key mujh sey zadaa achee shaairi tao ap kertey hain, mai tao bus try maarti hon, hehehehe
wesey achee try maarti hon naa? LOLZ|Z|Z|
Posted on 8/25/2003 11:32:53 PM
Gham Ki Jaageer Wirasat Main Mili Hai Mujh Ko..
Apni Jaageer Main Rehta Hon Nawabon Ki Tarha
Posted on 8/25/2003 11:35:24 PM
haan janab achi khasi try marti hain aap!
balkey aap k saath to bazam khoob jamey gi !
jamey gi kya jum gayee hai kiyo theek kaha na!
Abhi abhi rozi & jani420 k liye aik apni likhi hoi nazam post ki hai................................................................
Aap bhi zaroor deikh lein!
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Hum tu mohabbat mein bhi toheed k kayal hein Faraz!
Aik hi shaksh ko mehboob banaye rakha!


Fasi----------------------------------,
Posted on 8/25/2003 11:44:04 PM
.....Yeh!
.....Mana!
.....K !
.....Mumkin nahin!
.....Milan apna!
.....Magar...............!
.....Is !
.....Umeed par!
.....Bandha hai!
.....Tum se!
.....Dil ka rishta!
.....Shayed!
.....K.............!
.....JUDAI.........!
.....Likhtey samey!
.....Dil bhar aaye!
.....Katib Taqdeer Ka............................!

awwwwwwww this iss soooooo nice, fasi jee!
hai Allah hum tao app kee shairi k samney kuchh bee naee hain, app kee shaairi tao masha'Allah abi TOP per chal rahee hai.

Posted on 8/25/2003 11:52:02 PM
quote:
Originally posted by sweet_u

haan janab achi khasi try marti hain aap!
balkey aap k saath to bazam khoob jamey gi !
jamey gi kya jum gayee hai kiyo theek kaha na!
Abhi abhi rozi & jani420 k liye aik apni likhi hoi nazam post ki hai................................................................
Aap bhi zaroor deikh lein!
AAAAAAAAAAAdddddddddaaaaaaaaabbbbbbbbbbbbbbb!
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Hum tu mohabbat mein bhi toheed k kayal hein Faraz!
Aik hi shaksh ko mehboob banaye rakha!


Fasi----------------------------------,


lolzzzzzzzz[:P]
han jee hum kia poetry ka competition ker rahe hain yahan? [:D][:D][:D][:D]

app kee shaari hee itnee achee hai key hur koee purh ker jumm hee jae ga naa, mai tao jamm hee gaee purh ker[;)][:D]
burff ho gaee[:D][:D][:D][:D] LOL[:P]

Tashi(F)
Posted on 8/25/2003 11:55:44 PM
I've had visions
I've had dreams
I've even held them in myhands
But I never knew
They would slip right through
Like they were only...
....Grains of sand.
Posted on 8/26/2003 12:03:01 AM
Someday I'll find a way to shine,

leave all these rainy days behind,

I know theres got to be some place

warm and bright for me,

I'm running out of places I can run...

...looking for a place in the sun.
Posted on 8/26/2003 12:03:24 AM
mujhey kuch english poetries bee achee lagtee hain, ager ap ko na achee lagen to bataye ga zaroor!
mai urdu mey hee pir bheja keron gee,han!

regards
Tashi(F)
Posted on 8/26/2003 12:04:52 AM
Janab ka husne nazar hai wrna hum is kabil kahan!
tareef ka shukriya !
Waisey aap bhi kisi se kam kahan!
kiyon theeeeeeeeek kaha hai na????????????????????????????????
waisey aap kabhi chat par aayein phir baat ho gi, will u do this ???
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Ghanton us se pyar ki batein kartey kartey!
Jab Mein..................................!
Us se rukhsat ho kar wapas palta!
---------------TU...............!
Mere pechey!
Halka sa hans kar!
Woh apne aap se bholi!
Hunhhhhh!
.................PAGAL...........!



Fasi,,,
Posted on 8/26/2003 12:12:33 AM
Aap ka poetry taste haqeeqat mein lajawab hai! urdu ho ya english...

Aap ki Grains of sand k jawab mein aik sher!
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Bhool jane ka tu bas ik bahana ho ga!
K Behar tor usey yaad to aana ho ga!
Bund muthi se jo urr jaati hai kismat ki pari!
Is hatheli mein koi chaid purana ho ga!

Fasi,,,,
Posted on 8/26/2003 10:11:07 AM
idhar to bohot baray baray poets hain.. kamal kar diya

Posted on 8/26/2003 6:35:09 PM
Shukria sweetie g ......Hum kahan barey poet hain!
Bas samney wala badzoq nahin hona chahye!
Kion theek kaha na?
Aap ka kiya khyal hai?
Posted on 8/26/2003 7:06:32 PM
bilkul sahi kaha sweet u.. aur phir shairi usi ko pasand hoti hae jo interested ho. jis ko shoq na ho us ko to samaj bhi nahi aati k kya likha hae :D

Posted on 8/26/2003 9:01:42 PM
quote:
Originally posted by sweet_u

Janab ka husne nazar hai wrna hum is kabil kahan!
tareef ka shukriya !
Waisey aap bhi kisi se kam kahan!
kiyon theeeeeeeeek kaha hai na????????????????????????????????
waisey aap kabhi chat par aayein phir baat ho gi, will u do this ???
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Ghanton us se pyar ki batein kartey kartey!
Jab Mein..................................!
Us se rukhsat ho kar wapas palta!
---------------TU...............!
Mere pechey!
Halka sa hans kar!
Woh apne aap se bholi!
Hunhhhhh!
.................PAGAL...........!



Fasi,,,


thanks for ur commpliemtns, fasi jee[angel]
han jee zaroor, humareee chat hu saktee hein, lakeen mey kal sey shayd naa aon net per, mera uni ka test hai friday ko 29th aug, so i will be revising for that,islie mey friday night wo wapis aon geee insha'Alalh
pir hum chat kerne gey, our mey pir buhut see poetries bee laon gee apne sath.[:D]
ok see ya on friday
untill than
take cares
and be happy

regards:

Tashi(F)
Posted on 8/27/2003 12:22:39 AM
quote:
Originally posted by sweetie

idhar to bohot baray baray poets hain.. kamal kar diya




thankus thankus, sweetie jee[angel]
hum to bus aisee hi hain app ke nazar mey hum ku acha shairi samja. so hum ban gae[:P][:P][:P][:P]
Posted on 8/27/2003 12:29:07 AM
You will be the No.1 in all of ur class fellows on Friday (INSHA-ALLAH)
Khuda aap ko aap k har imtihaan mein kamyaab kare (AAAMEEEN)
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Khuda kare k test mein woh muqaam aaye!
Har aik student k honton pe tera naam aaye!

Dua Go,
Faisal........................
Posted on 8/27/2003 10:34:57 AM
quote:
Originally posted by TaSHi

quote:
Originally posted by sweetie

idhar to bohot baray baray poets hain.. kamal kar diya




thankus thankus, sweetie jee[angel]
hum to bus aisee hi hain app ke nazar mey hum ku acha shairi samja. so hum ban gae[:P][:P][:P][:P]



lolz
kya baat hae jee
bara shairana zok raha hae tum ne ;)

Posted on 8/27/2003 10:27:26 PM
Thaaaaaaaaaaaaannnkkkkkusssssss!
Janab(chup karo)Ji!
bas apni tabiyat hai zara shayrana si!
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Aik Sher!
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Shehar k dukandaro karobar-e-ulfat mein!
Sood kya ziyan kya hai tum na jaan pao gey!


Fasi,./><
Posted on 8/29/2003 12:31:21 AM
wah wah wah kya baat hai janab ki
Posted on 9/1/2003 1:12:58 PM
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