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Tooti hai meri neend magar..

Tooti Hai Meri Neend Magar, TuMko Isse Kya,
Bajte Rahe Hawaon Se Dar, TuMko Isse Kya,

TuM Mauj Mauj Misl-E-Saba GhuMte Raho,
Kat Jaye Mere Soch Ke Par, TuMko Isse Kya,

Auron Ka Haath ThaMo, Unhe Rasta Dikhao,
Main Bhul Jaun Apna Ghar, TuMko Isse Kya,

Le Jaaye Mujhko Maal-E-GaMinat Ke Sath Koi,
TuMne To Daal Di Hai Seper, TuMko Isse Kya,

TuMne To Thak Ke Dasht Mein KhaMein Laga Liye,
Tanha Gaya Kisika Safar, TuMko Isse Kya...

Posted on 1/27/2009 8:30:47 PM

nycccssshhhh

Posted on 1/27/2009 9:40:34 PM


v nice

Posted on 1/28/2009 1:05:09 AM

gud yar

Posted on 1/29/2009 10:55:07 AM

realy nice

one of my fvrt

Posted on 1/30/2009 1:56:31 AM

KO BA KO PHAIL GAYI BAT SHANASAYI KI,
US NEY KHOSBHOO KI TARHA MERI PAZERAYI KI,

KAISET KEH DO K US NEY CHOR DIYA HAI MUJHEY,
BAT TO SACH HAI MAGAR BAT HAI RUSWAYI KI,

WOH KAHIN BHI GAYA LOTA TO MEREY PASS AYA,
BAS YE HHI BAT HAI ACHI MEREY HARJAYI KI,

US KA PEHLOO BHI US K DIL KI TARHA ABAD RAHEY,
US PEY GUZREY NA QAYAMAT SHAB-E-TANHAYI KI,

JALTI HUWI PESHANI PAR JAB HATH RAKHA US NEY,
ROOH TAK UTAR GAYI TASEER MASIHAYI KI.


Posted on 1/30/2009 2:03:12 AM

Thnx Sensi,MM & Javad bhai

Yeah tehzeeb meri bi favt hai
bohat khoob

Posted on 2/7/2009 8:28:10 PM

nice Rapu ji
nice tehezeeb

Rapu ji, I want to add in ur poetry-

Tumne to daba ke kha liya tandoori muga vo lajawab,
Humko bhi lag rahi hei bhookh, tumko isse kya

Posted on 2/8/2009 3:33:14 PM

danie:
nice Rapu ji
nice tehezeeb

Rapu ji, I want to add in ur poetry-

Tumne to daba ke kha liya tandoori muga vo lajawab,
Humko bhi lag rahi hei bhookh, tumko isse kya


Thnk U
very nice

Posted on 2/8/2009 9:12:42 PM

thanx rapu

nice danie

Posted on 2/9/2009 1:40:11 AM

*Most welcome jee...!

Posted on 2/10/2009 3:15:54 PM

nice

Posted on 2/10/2009 3:21:48 PM

nice\


Posted on 2/10/2009 3:22:27 PM

Rapunzel:
Tooti Hai Meri Neend Magar, TuMko Isse Kya,
Bajte Rahe Hawaon Se Dar, TuMko Isse Kya,

TuM Mauj Mauj Misl-E-Saba GhuMte Raho,
Kat Jaye Mere Soch Ke Par, TuMko Isse Kya,

Auron Ka Haath ThaMo, Unhe Rasta Dikhao,
Main Bhul Jaun Apna Ghar, TuMko Isse Kya,

Le Jaaye Mujhko Maal-E-GaMinat Ke Sath Koi,
TuMne To Daal Di Hai Seper, TuMko Isse Kya,

TuMne To Thak Ke Dasht Mein KhaMein Laga Liye,
Tanha Gaya Kisika Safar, TuMko Isse Kya...


Bohut khoobsurat.

Posted on 2/11/2009 1:44:58 PM

tehzeeb:
KO BA KO PHAIL GAYI BAT SHANASAYI KI,
US NEY KHOSBHOO KI TARHA MERI PAZERAYI KI,

KAISET KEH DO K US NEY CHOR DIYA HAI MUJHEY,
BAT TO SACH HAI MAGAR BAT HAI RUSWAYI KI,

WOH KAHIN BHI GAYA LOTA TO MEREY PASS AYA,
BAS YE HHI BAT HAI ACHI MEREY HARJAYI KI,

US KA PEHLOO BHI US K DIL KI TARHA ABAD RAHEY,
US PEY GUZREY NA QAYAMAT SHAB-E-TANHAYI KI,

JALTI HUWI PESHANI PAR JAB HATH RAKHA US NEY,
ROOH TAK UTAR GAYI TASEER MASIHAYI KI.



Bohut achi.

Posted on 2/11/2009 1:46:49 PM

Thanx Ujala,Chandni & Olldman

Posted on 2/23/2009 6:07:19 PM

bara he beygana poet hai yeh khair mujh ko is say kya

Posted on 3/7/2009 7:08:07 AM


Posted on 3/7/2009 4:33:28 PM