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hello members!
may app sab kay lia yaha per ik new os intresting silsila start ker raha ho yaha per hum sab members ik story pori karain agy . may thori si story apni taraf say likho ga phir app may say koi us ko thori si agay likh day ga is terha hum log ak din apni story tiar ker lain gain to phir may likhna shoro ker taho:-

may samander kay kinaray per khara sun ko dobtay hova dakhraha tha tay kay may nay feel kia kay koi mujay bohat dar say dakhraha ha, may jub bhi samander per aker soraj ko dakhta to mugay asa hi lagta tha lakin jab may us taarf dakhta to koi bhi na hota tha or may wapis ajata tha apnay garh or apnay dosto ko os kay baray may bata to koi yaqin nahi ker tatha lakin wo ahsas mugay humasha say hi sata ta rahta tha or ik din jab suba may ja ga to may nay dakha kay ....
Posted on 6/29/2004 12:15:22 PM
aur meine dekha ke mere room mein kisi ke foot steps thay, waise to ye koi bhi ho sakta tha jannay waalon mein se, par un footsteps ki nishan samandar ki matti se banay thay...aur wo meri taraf aa rahay thay, aur hairani ki baat ye thee kay us wakt room mein mere ilawa koi nahin tha, aur footsteps sirf andar aane ke nishan thay lekin baahir jaane ke nahin...aakhir ye kya ho sakta hai....
Posted on 6/29/2004 12:47:38 PM
mera dill bar bar mugh say ayhi sawal ker raha tha lakin jub wo Foot steps maray bilkul pa** aker ruk ga yto may or ziada khof zada hogia kay ya kob hay akher maynay himat ker kay foot steps ki taraf ishara kertay hovay pocha kay kon ho tum lakin koi jawab nahi aya jub maynay yahi sawal 3rd time pocha to awaz ai kay may wo hi ho maynay kaha wohi kon to os nay kaha kay ....
Posted on 6/29/2004 2:15:15 PM
jis koh tum neh samander meh dubah kay mar dala tha. or main....
Posted on 6/29/2004 7:38:09 PM
or main oosi ki bhatakti hue rooh hoon aur aaj tum say apni mout ka badla lainay aaye hoon
Posted on 6/30/2004 11:01:55 AM
jub may nay oss ki yaa baat soni to may ghabra dia or maynay kaha kay maynay tum ko jan ker nahi mara tha to os nay kaha kay
Posted on 6/30/2004 11:11:23 AM
oos nay kaha k tumhara jo bhi irrada tha lakin main to zindagi haar gaye na ab ager tum marnay say bachna chahtay ho to tum ko meri kuch shartain manana hon gi.....
Posted on 7/9/2004 4:53:54 PM
may nay kha ha shartay kis kis sam ki shartay akher tum mugh say abb kia kaam ker wana chati ho may bohat paray chan ho gia kay pata anhi kis kisam ki shartay hongi ya lakin may nay dil per qaboo paker us say kaha kay ha to kai hain tum hari shertay to us nay kahakay phali shari hay kay ..
Posted on 7/10/2004 5:33:30 PM
tum her chand ki 14 tareekh ko meray liye aik insan ka shikar karo gay takay main oos ka khoon p sakoon
Posted on 7/13/2004 2:59:34 PM
may nay ya sona to may bohat apray shan hogia kay may or qatal ya to maray liyay na mpomkin tha is liay maynay kaha kay ya to mugh say nahi hoga to us nay kaha kay phir apni moot kay liay tayar ho ajo may nay kaha
Posted on 7/14/2004 3:31:56 PM
naie naie....mujhay abhie jeena hay mujhay apni zindage seh pyaar hay mujhay mut maru mujhay batau mujhay kaya kurna hu ga.....tum jantay hu main neh jaan bojh kur tumhay naie mara tha...mujhay kuch sochnay ka Moqa du..Us neh kaha
Posted on 7/16/2004 11:17:01 AM
fazool baton main waqt zaya na karo aur jo main nay kaha hai woh karo aaj chand ki das tareekh hai aur theek char din baad mujha qurbani chahiye
Posted on 7/17/2004 4:00:39 PM
hmmm....
aisa mut karu...dhaiku mujh pur rehum khau....mujhay apni Zindagi seh pyaar hay main abhi Jeena chahta hoon...main Ghur walu ka aik he Sahara hon...kuch tu rehum khau...mera nai tu meray ghur walu ka he saie...
Posted on 7/19/2004 6:52:02 PM
tumharay ghar walay to khud tum say tang aaye huey hain....tumhain maar k main oon per reham karoon gi...aur woh meray shukerguzaar hon gay
Posted on 7/20/2004 2:50:17 PM
hain....tumhay kaisay pata chala?:o

main neh chitku ko munah bhe kiya tha us neh phir v bata diya..us ke aise ke tesi :@
Posted on 7/22/2004 3:28:29 PM
saieen g yahan aap ki kahani nahin chal rahi
Posted on 7/23/2004 4:30:15 PM
THE END....
Posted on 7/25/2004 9:20:47 PM
chalo acchha ho gaya
Posted on 7/26/2004 3:39:09 PM
Chalo achaa hua ..hum bhool gai ...



per kia????
Posted on 7/26/2004 4:45:30 PM
JB Ka Raja:
THE END....



yakia batamizi hay app MOd Group may hoker asa ker rhaay hain app ko ya haq kis nay diya may abhi Admin say baat ker ta ho app kay baray may app nay mera Dil Tor diya
Posted on 7/28/2004 12:41:35 PM
yeh kya hora hai hai..........!! moderator sahab aap ke khilaf aik member ne complain ki hai..

aise tu nahin karo bhai!
Posted on 7/28/2004 12:52:36 PM
ha asa mat karo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Posted on 7/28/2004 12:55:08 PM
phir kesaa karu?:s
Posted on 7/29/2004 1:22:34 AM
Story likhain bus
Posted on 7/29/2004 9:30:44 AM
Story likhain bus===>woh suraya bijya ka kaam hay
Posted on 7/31/2004 7:58:15 PM
Posted on 8/2/2004 1:53:19 AM
kia matlb ??
Posted on 8/3/2004 3:38:13 PM
May_ho_na:
JB Ka Raja:
THE END....



yakia batamizi hay app MOd Group may hoker asa ker rhaay hain app ko ya haq kis nay diya may abhi Admin say baat ker ta ho app kay baray may app nay mera Dil Tor diya
i think he was kidding
Posted on 8/4/2004 4:45:10 PM
dubara shuru kur detay hain.....

roona naie....

lo lo yaa elfi lu.....joor lu dil ku :D
Posted on 8/5/2004 12:09:18 AM
yaar sorry ji sorry ....

yaar i am just kidding my bro






achaa story start karoo ..ab main bhi hoon na
Posted on 8/10/2004 9:10:28 PM
administrator:
yeh kya hora hai hai..........!! moderator sahab aap ke khilaf aik member ne complain ki hai..

aise tu nahin karo bhai!



k ji ...ab nahi hoga ..ji
Posted on 8/10/2004 9:11:15 PM
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