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Sada Kar K Daikha (Personal)

Asslam o Alaikum,

                yeh mairi ik aur kawish hay apni raaiy se zaroor nawazyay ga i m waiting



Posted on 9/19/2005 5:41:36 AM
Good Nice Words in Good "BEHAR"

Pls make a Personal Poetry Topic and Post One by One in that. So we can Enjoy and Comment same time in one Place
Posted on 9/21/2005 12:23:56 AM
ok i will Insha Allah but bhai mein is field mein abhi sahee kaho to tifl e maktab bhi nahee hon sirf qafiya aur radeef ka pata hay wazan ka koi pata nahee hay na koi khyal rakha gaya by chance kisi mein ho to ho
Posted on 9/21/2005 11:01:02 PM
Just Post it in a single topic..then Members will give comments and you can improve easily...
Posted on 9/22/2005 9:36:40 PM
new_beau:
Just Post it in a single topic..then Members will give comments and you can improve easily...

jee zaroor mein ik new banao ga jis ka name rakho ga Amir Virdan's Persoanl Poetry
Posted on 9/23/2005 11:15:18 PM
ok
Posted on 9/24/2005 10:29:22 PM
bahout khoobsoorat kawish hai Amir @};-
Posted on 9/26/2005 4:40:58 PM
Lost World:
bahout khoobsoorat kawish hai Amir @};-

Thanks a lot 4 these remarks
Posted on 9/27/2005 11:17:24 PM
sari zabardast hai par last shair to kamal ka hai yar mayios kiyn hotay ho ajkal kay shairon main say to kafi say achay ho.
Posted on 9/27/2005 11:54:09 PM
mmja:
sari zabardast hai par last shair to kamal ka hai yar mayios kiyn hotay ho ajkal kay shairon main say to kafi say achay ho.

Thanks a lot ap k alfaz mairay jazbo ko taqviyat de rahay hain
Posted on 9/28/2005 4:05:21 AM
virdan lagta hai tumharay sath bat karnay kay liay mughay regylarli urdu ki clases layni padrayn gi or han yar tum imran series padrtay ho sachi batana?
wesay main to apnay khyalon ki akasi kar raha tha.
Posted on 9/29/2005 12:50:26 AM
mmja:
virdan lagta hai tumharay sath bat karnay kay liay mughay regylarli urdu ki clases layni padrayn gi or han yar tum imran series padrtay ho sachi batana?
wesay main to apnay khyalon ki akasi kar raha tha.

Imran series mien parhta tha barhi pari hain jab parta tha to koi miss nahee karta tha aur urdu ki class ka kaya hay bhai hamien khud nahee aati urdu sahee tarah se ok thanks 4 ur remarks
Posted on 9/29/2005 10:46:17 PM
Posted on 9/30/2005 2:55:53 AM
good work
Posted on 9/30/2005 3:00:13 AM
last
Posted on 9/30/2005 11:36:44 PM
yar mughay tumhari batayn padr kay lagha tha kay tum imran series padrtay ho.
or urdu ki baat isliay ki kay ajkal sab ko toti photi english bolnay ka boht shooq hai lekin lagta hai tum is say bacha huway ho.
Posted on 9/30/2005 11:42:58 PM
last one plz
Posted on 10/3/2005 12:16:44 AM
Posted on 10/6/2005 12:49:10 PM
kiya hua mmja
Posted on 10/6/2005 1:21:47 PM
very nice virdan mere jaise khwahish hai appki.
Posted on 10/6/2005 4:43:42 PM
kiran:
very nice virdan mere jaise khwahish hai appki.


jee shaid aisa he ho aap log abhi mairi poetry virdan s personal poetry mein he parh sakein gay check it i will send all of mine in it thanks
Posted on 10/7/2005 8:19:59 AM
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